【正文】 結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，層次分明，詞語(yǔ)及句型使用正確，很不錯(cuò)的一篇文章。用first of all, Next, What39。本篇文章首先第一段對(duì)別人的到來(lái)表示歡迎，接著對(duì)合肥的天氣進(jìn)行總的描述，并引出下文自己的建議。在文章最后可以提出自己的期望和祝福。Dear Johnson Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack, Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer heat. First of all, you should drink more water and eat light meals, such as salads, fruit and vegetables. Next, you’d better get some sleep after lunch. Don’t stay up and make sure you get enough sleep. It’s not a good idea to stay out when it’s very hot. What39。9．假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Johnson打算暑假來(lái)合肥玩，而合肥的夏天經(jīng)常持續(xù)高溫，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，用英文給他寫一封郵件，告訴他防暑降溫的方法。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。Views on Special CoursesNowadays, many senior school carry on some special courses in their normal subjects. But different people have different ideas.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Views on Special CoursesNowadays, many school carry on some special courses in their normal subjects. But different people have different ideas.Some students like to attend these classes. First of all, this kind of courses can help us develop our life abilities. What’s more, these courses can help us build the spirit that we shouldn’t give up easily. Also, with the help of these courses, students can broaden their views on the world.However, we can’t reach an agreement. Some students think it takes so much time to have these lessons that they can’t pay attention to their grades. Moreover, we need to pay much money for these classes, and it will surely increase the cost. At last, we don’t have so many teachers on these courses. We can’t get more knowledge without the guide of specific teachers.Every coin has two sides. I think it’s good to have special courses. It’s not only impove our abilities but also give us much fun.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如carry on，first of all，like to do，play a game，this kind of，What’s more，give up，with the help of，so much time，pay attention to，on the paper，put up等。 作為即將升入高中的你，對(duì)于特色文化課程有何看法？請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表的提示完成一篇短文并闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤(rùn)色。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫短文。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如bought sth for sb, be grateful to, be going to do, share sth with sb, be fond of, as far as I am concerned, on the one hand...on the other hand, from to以及we had a reading party,which was held on Friday in our reading room中which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。Last Friday，we had a reading party, which was held on Friday in our reading room. Then we are going to hold an activity to share the feeling with others at 3:00 on Friday afternoon. All of us are fond of buying books on the Internet. We are going to buy some books on the Internet next month. As far as I am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the Internet are cheaper than those in the bookstore. On the other hand, there are all kinds of books, so we needn’t go from one bookstore to another .Best wishes!Yours,Cathy【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，向外教介紹俱樂部中讀書交流會(huì)的活動(dòng)，并且告訴外教同學(xué)們現(xiàn)在喜歡網(wǎng)購(gòu)圖書并闡述網(wǎng)購(gòu)圖書的好處。4至少80詞。2可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。3說一說網(wǎng)上購(gòu)書有什么好處。（2）本周五的下午3點(diǎn)，大家將共同交流讀書的體會(huì)。寫作要點(diǎn)：1表達(dá)收到圖書后的喜悅與感激之情。俱樂部的同學(xué)們很喜歡網(wǎng)購(gòu)圖書這種便捷的方式，并打算在本周五交流讀書后的感受。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！驹斀狻窟@是一篇給材料作文，介紹畢業(yè)典禮活動(dòng)計(jì)劃。Dear editor,I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes,Yours Lihua【答案】Dear editor,I39。 ，開頭結(jié)尾己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。活動(dòng)畢業(yè)晚會(huì)時(shí)間6月28日晚上七點(diǎn)地點(diǎn)學(xué)校禮堂school hall參與者全體初三學(xué)生和老師活動(dòng)內(nèi)容1.邀請(qǐng)校長(zhǎng)作演講；2.互贈(zèng)禮物送祝福；3.各班表演精彩節(jié)目4. 要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使句子通順，連貫。6．書面表達(dá)初中就要畢業(yè)了，校報(bào)“英語(yǔ)角”欄目向同學(xué)們征集畢業(yè)晚會(huì)的計(jì)劃。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；再緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。It is+形容詞 for sb to do sth做某事對(duì)某人來(lái)說是…的?！军c(diǎn)睛】高分句型：I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way．我認(rèn)為正確的方式使用手機(jī)對(duì)學(xué)生是有幫助的。如but, so, then等。 eyes. In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly，students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏。t control themselves and often