【正文】 imming lessons at school. Because it can help build up our body and guide against (prevent) illness. Besides, swimming is a survival skill when we face some natural disasters. It is also a good choice to go swimming lo relax ourselves when we are free.However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some reasons. First, some of them are afraid of getting in the water. Second, it may be dangerous because we may drown. Then, when it is cold, we may catch a cold.In my opinion, it’s a good idea lo have swimming lessons. I can improve my health, and relax myself after classes as well.(In my opinion, it’s not a good way to have swimming lessons at school. Because it’s expensive to build a swimming pool, and sometimes it’s difficult to keep the water clean because there are many students at school.)【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)所給材料，闡明關(guān)于“把游泳納入中考體育考試”的兩種不同觀點(diǎn)，而且最后還要表達(dá)出自己的觀點(diǎn)，所以文章主要用一般現(xiàn)在時。文章分為三個部分，第一部分，首先引出本文話題，并用Here’s the result from one ， 引出調(diào)查結(jié)果；第二部分分別闡述兩種不同觀點(diǎn)About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because….。 However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some my opinion…。注意闡明觀點(diǎn)列舉理由時，要注意條理性，比如用到表示次序先后的詞first, second, then；或者句型It can…… It also can…..,besides…..等；本文內(nèi)容完整，寫作條理清晰，語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，是一篇不錯的文章。4．今天手機(jī)在我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪幸褟V泛使用。但中學(xué)生在學(xué)校是否應(yīng)該持有手機(jī)，一些學(xué)生和老師有不同的觀點(diǎn)。你們學(xué)校的?？⑽陌嬲诰痛伺e行征文活動，請根據(jù)下列表格提示的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇征文。 觀點(diǎn)理由一些學(xué)生贊成擁有方便與家長聯(lián)系；一些老師反對擁有有學(xué)生用手機(jī)玩游戲；有學(xué)生用手機(jī)作弊；你的觀點(diǎn)1. 2.要求：1. 表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；`2. 必須包含表格所給的提示信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 詞數(shù)：80100詞左右（征文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。 Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life 【答案】Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today. With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some parents and teachers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at school. Some students are for it. They think that it is convenient to contact with parents. Mobile phones will make them more interested in learning so that they can learn more quickly and easily. Some teachers are against it．They think that some students can39。t control themselves and often play games. What39。s worse, some students cheat in exams by using mobile phones. Besides, using mobile phones too much does great harm to students39。 eyes. In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly，students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏。需在平時積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。如but, so, then等。可以適當(dāng)使用高分句型?！军c(diǎn)睛】高分句型：I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way．我認(rèn)為正確的方式使用手機(jī)對學(xué)生是有幫助的。I think+賓語從句。It is+形容詞 for sb to do sth做某事對某人來說是…的。5．手機(jī)在生活中扮演著越來越重要的角色，許多中學(xué)生沉迷于手機(jī)無法自拔，：1. 去年，Miller對手機(jī)游戲非常入迷，而且花大量時間用手機(jī)聊天看電影；2. Miller與家人和朋友交流甚少，離開手機(jī)會很焦慮；3. 昨天還因為走路看手機(jī)被自行車撞了，膝蓋受傷；4. 你的建議……參考詞匯：mobile games手機(jī)游戲anxious焦慮be crazy about對……入迷要求：1字?jǐn)?shù)80100個2開頭已經(jīng)給出不計入總詞數(shù)3要點(diǎn)齊全，行為連貫，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮Today more and more people are addicted to(沉迷）playing the mobile phones. Last year, My friend Miller was 【答案】Today more and more people are addicted to(沉迷）playing the mobile phones. Last year，My friend Miller was crazy about mobile games as well. He spent too much time in chatting and watching films on the phone. Miller hardly talked with his family and friends. He lived in his own world. He felt very anxious without mobile phones. Yesterday he was hit by a bike, because he was watching his phone at that moment. As a result, he hurt his knees badly.In my opinion, I think we can’t use the mobile phones for a long time, I mean, no more than half an hour a day. Don’t take mobile phones to school. A mobile phone is just a kind of tool, not our whole life.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；再緊扣要點(diǎn)，動筆寫作，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。6．書面表達(dá)初中就要畢業(yè)了，校報“英語角”欄目向同學(xué)們征集畢業(yè)晚會的計劃。假定你是李華，請根據(jù)要點(diǎn) 寫一封信，說說你的計劃?；顒赢厴I(yè)晚會時間6月28日晚上七點(diǎn)地點(diǎn)學(xué)校禮堂school hall參與者全體初三學(xué)生和老師活動內(nèi)容1.邀請校長作演講；2.互贈禮物送祝福；3.各班表演精彩節(jié)目4. 要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使句子通順，連貫。 ，語法正確，書寫整潔。 ，開頭結(jié)尾己給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 。Dear editor,I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes,Yours Lihua【答案】Dear editor,I39。m very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.Best wishes,Yours,Li hua【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達(dá)主要是推薦自己的畢業(yè)晚會計劃?！驹斀狻窟@是一篇給材料作文，介紹畢業(yè)典禮活動計劃。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。7．書面表達(dá)假如你是英語俱樂部的Cathy,上周五你們收到了外教Angel為同學(xué)們網(wǎng)購的英文書籍。俱樂部的同學(xué)們很喜歡網(wǎng)購圖書這種便捷的方式，并打算在本周五交流讀書后的感受。請你根據(jù)以下信息, 給Angel寫一封電子郵件，告訴她俱樂部的活動情況，并說說網(wǎng)購圖書的好處。寫作要點(diǎn)：1