【正文】 How to deal with the exam stressEveryone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________。適當?shù)膲毫?. 積極思考，認真學習2. 及時復習，防止遺忘過重的壓力1. 無法入睡，非常疲憊2. 害怕考試，導致失敗應對的措施1. 合理計劃，準備充分2. ……注意：1. 詞數(shù)90左右，短文首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。16．（它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。而It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February./ If you touch your nose or mouth, you can get the flu./ Because some patients pay no attention to the flu, it starts very suddenly and spreads from person to person closely in ，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達流暢，是本文的最大亮點。參考詞匯：weaker immune systems （較弱的免疫系統(tǒng)）；influenza virus （流感病毒）The flu （流感）season runs from October to March every year. This year it has been especially bad. It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February. ____________________________________________________________________【答案】The flu （流感）season runs from October to March every year. This year it has been especially bad. It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February. The flu hits children and elderly people the hardest. This is because they have weaker immune system. It is easy for them to get the flu. In fact, most people don’t know much about the flu. The influenza virus causes the flu. The virus can get on your hands. If you touch your nose or mouth, you can get the flu. Because some patients pay no attention to the flu, it starts very suddenly and spreads from person to person closely in public. How do we keep the flu away? We should get lots of rest and exercise. Put on enough clothes to keep warm. Take a shower every day and wash hands often. Remember if anyone around us has the flu, take it seriously and make sure they go to the hospital as soon as possible.【解析】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。江蘇中考模擬）書面表達流感季通常在每年的10月份到3月份爆發(fā)，據(jù)報道114個美國孩子在今年2月死于流感。考點：材料作文。寫作亮點：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：do a survey about sth關(guān)于某事做調(diào)查；respect their parents,尊敬他們的父母；look after照顧；make a good plan for sth為某事做一個好的計劃；make some good friends交一些好朋友；keep healthy保持健康。因為是敘述同學的現(xiàn)在的觀點，所以句子應該用一般現(xiàn)在時，敘述同學的觀點用第三人稱，敘述自己的觀點用第一人稱。同學主要觀點你的觀點努力學習尊重父母服務社會計劃未來……（至少兩條）注意：（1）短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當增加細節(jié)；（2）你的觀點至少兩條；（3）詞數(shù)：80—100；（4）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數(shù)?！癏ow can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論，為此你采訪了一些同學（結(jié)果見下表）。14．（文章中以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句和復合句，調(diào)整文章結(jié)構(gòu)，使用復雜句型、短文和較高級的句型，提升了文章的檔次。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章中以第一人稱為主、一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來敘述，符合題目要求。作者根據(jù)題目要求就如何創(chuàng)建和諧班級發(fā)表了自己的看法。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。另外一個難點是使用正確的英語將自己的所想表達出來，英語的表達習慣和漢語是不同的，寫作時，不能逐詞去翻譯，而應從文章、句子的整體考慮，首先確定這篇短文使用什么人稱、時態(tài)來敘述；可能用到哪些詞匯、短語和句型，每個句子應以簡單句為基礎，如主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)，然后再變化成較高級、復雜是句型，如復合句、非謂語動詞形式等。因此首先我們要仔細思考這個問題，結(jié)合自己的真實生活，想一想平時是怎么做的，應該怎么做。提示詞語: important, respect, trust, help提示問題： ● Why should we build a harmonious class?● As a member of a class, what do you usually do?● What else do you need to do?We should build a harmonious class because ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.As a member of the class, I respect and trust my teachers and classmates. When I have someproblems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. When some of my classmates are sad,I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.Of course, there is more that I should do. I’m really good at English, but some of myclassmates aren’t. I will help them. Then we’ll make progress together.【解析】這篇作文給出的寫作背景是：你們學校英文報刊在以Building a Harmonious Class為題征文，你來為?？陡?，談一談如何創(chuàng)建一個和諧的班集體、你通常是怎么做的以及你還需要做什么。13．（亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如used to do, take medicine, as+形容詞原級+as, decide to do, because of, what’s more, be good at, take part in, not...any more以及make a great difference等?！敬鸢浮縎port makes a differenceXiao An is a Grade 9 student. He used to be very weak and had to take a lot of medicine. He wanted to be as healthy as his classmates, so he decided to do sports.He joined Zhao Yang Football club and practiced hard there. Because of football, his life has changed a lot. He finds himself much healthier than before. Now, he has grown into a tall and strong guy. What’s more, he is very good at playing football. Last month, he took part in School Football Match and won the Best Player Award. Xiao An needn’t take a lot of medicine any more. Sport makes a great difference to his life.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于圖畫作文，表達運動讓小安的生活發(fā)生了巨大的變化。（2）詞數(shù)在80?100詞之間。請根據(jù)所給圖畫，展開適當?shù)穆?lián)想，完成下面的短文。黑龍江中考模擬）（B）圖示作文：根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容，展開想象，寫一篇小短文。（5）注意檢查：單詞拼寫，語法，動詞時態(tài)，語序，主謂一致等。注意表達的順序。（3）列好提綱和要點，及需要的重要短語或句型。（1）學習中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。（三）寫完以后，在閱讀一遍，檢查單詞拼寫，語法，動詞時態(tài)，語序，大小寫，標點符號，主謂一致等是否有錯誤。He gets up at 8 . and takes the subway to work every day, and practices Chinese in his spare . 去很多不同的地方，了解中國文化，品嘗中國美食。He has been to the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and other places of . 過去喜歡看科幻小說，現(xiàn)在對中國古典書籍很感興趣，已經(jīng)讀完了2本名著。（一）列提綱：1. 來到中國已經(jīng)兩年了，在北京工作。寫作時，列好提綱，注意使用連詞，句型、句式，使文章整體意思連貫，表達流暢。你的的筆友Tom居住在北京，請根據(jù)表格中提供的信息，介紹一下他的情況。夢想去很多不同的地方，了解中國文化，品嘗中國美食。喜好過去喜歡看科幻小說，現(xiàn)在對中國古典書籍很感興趣，已經(jīng)讀完了2本名著。（80詞左右）時間來到中國已經(jīng)兩年了，在北京工作。11．（它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。在學習中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。同時For one thing, / For another,/ However,等使短文的敘述很有條理，而It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which is harmful to people39。s body.In my opinion, Ebook