【正文】 假如你是Mike,請(qǐng)你用英語寫一封郵件，給你校英文報(bào)投稿寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)80左右，談?wù)勀銓?duì)開設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的看法。福建中考模擬）書面表達(dá)隨著電子時(shí)代的到來，西方文化如潮水般涌來，中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的傳承面臨著巨大的挑戰(zhàn)。最后玩具的意義得到了升華，表達(dá)了作者的期望（I hope I can be a soldier），上升到了保家衛(wèi)國(guó)的層面，這樣的一篇作文是有深度的，能夠讓人感動(dòng)的，是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章講了自己最喜歡的玩具槍，描述玩具槍的時(shí)候有適當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)補(bǔ)充，例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth（用黃布包著的玩具槍），這里用到了過去分詞作定語，作者還描述了玩具槍的功能（small plastic pills），順便還描述了自己小時(shí)候玩槍的經(jīng)歷，準(zhǔn)確使用了時(shí)態(tài)。A（n） _________ I have__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A（n） toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then. When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!【解析】寫作分析：這篇作文需要就自己最喜歡的物品展開描述，要求是進(jìn)行描述，并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿?，以及它存在的意義。要求：1. 請(qǐng)?jiān)陬}目空白處填上你心愛物品的名字；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。17．（最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。靈活運(yùn)用各種句式，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各個(gè)要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)?！敬鸢浮緼s students born after 1990, we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble, we always give him or her a hand. We are also active. We like to do sports and go traveling. Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after school. Besides, we are imaginative and creative. We always try something new and do everything differently. On the other hand, we also have some disadvantages. Sometimes we can’t express our opinions in proper ways。要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。16．（要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。在寫作過程中，首先要將所提供給的信息要點(diǎn)用英語正確的表達(dá)出來，要涵蓋所提到的所有要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)注意理順要點(diǎn)，防止漏寫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。參考詞匯：method club. n 社團(tuán) colorful Wele to our school! 【答案】Wele to our school!I will graduate from my school. Therefore I’d like to share something with you. Firstly,because of many subjects in middle school, it is important for you to have your own study methods. In order to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. Secondly, you can join in some club activities to make school life more colorful in your spare time. In other words, please keep balance between school life and study. In addition, it is a good choice to make more friends and read more books. At last, if you have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or parents. They are always there waiting for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life.【解析】本文是一篇給材料作文。 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：，好的學(xué)習(xí)方法很重要；，保持健康；，使學(xué)校生活豐富；，多交朋友；。15．（s best to do ，be friendly to ，be ready to do ，It’s +adj.（ for sb.） + to do 。d better not talk or laugh loudly in public.Let’s action now. I believe, the better we behave, the more civilized our city will be.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇提綱作文，要求是為配合我市開展“創(chuàng)建文明城市（build a civilized city）”活動(dòng)，學(xué)校舉辦以“How to Behave Well”為主題的英語征文比賽。3. 詞數(shù)：80100詞。提示：1. 保持環(huán)境衛(wèi)生；2. 待人有禮，樂于助人；3. 遵守交通規(guī)則；4. 寫出1到2條自己的觀點(diǎn)。湖北中考模擬）為配合我市開展“創(chuàng)建文明城市（build a civilized city）”活動(dòng)，學(xué)校舉辦以“How to Behave Well”為主題的英語征文比賽。注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫、語法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。要學(xué)以致用。書面表達(dá)題要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。保護(hù)環(huán)境就是保護(hù)我們自己。如果沒有煙花，人們會(huì)比以前更不感興趣。此外，中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化也缺失了。 另一方面，有些學(xué)生不同意。有些孩子喜歡玩煙花，這對(duì)他們的眼睛很危險(xiǎn)。更重要的是，人們喜歡在午夜放假，外面總是那么吵，很多人睡不好覺。本文提綱： 大多數(shù)學(xué)生不同意在春節(jié)放煙花。根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，列出本文的寫作提綱。盡量使用高分句型。人稱主要為第三人稱和第一人稱。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格所提供的信息,給市長(zhǎng)寫一封信介紹大家的觀點(diǎn)，同時(shí)談?wù)勛约旱南敕?。常州市政府發(fā)文，從年2月1日起，市區(qū)禁止燃放煙花爆竹。AGREEDISAGREE原 因1．減少空氣和噪音污染，保護(hù)環(huán)境……2．可能引起安全問題。注意： 1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3. 表達(dá)，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范；4. 詞數(shù)不少于90。你們班級(jí)的同學(xué)們就春節(jié)是否能燃放煙花進(jìn)行了討論。13．（修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。5. 如果你的身邊有王剛這樣的 slower student，你會(huì)怎么做？注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右，短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 短文需包括表中所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；3. 參考詞匯：成績(jī)差的學(xué)生： a slower student；使老師生氣 make sb. angry 亂說話 talk nonsenseLi Lei is a very good student。很多人不愿意和他做朋友。1. 李磊的學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)非常好，樂于助人，和班里每個(gè)同學(xué)都相處融洽2. 上周，班里新來了一個(gè)同學(xué)叫做王剛，張老師讓他坐在李磊旁邊。12．（點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容可知用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，可把提示內(nèi)容結(jié)合實(shí)際展開合理的想象，把它們翻譯拓展成一個(gè)個(gè)英文句子。文中使用了大量短語，例如in our life，may be，something unpleasant，for example，fail in，laugh at，why not，cheer up，help sb. to do，get closer to，each other等。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。微笑是一種人人易懂的語言。生活中會(huì)有不愉快的事，如：……對(duì)自己微笑使你開心、恢復(fù)自信；使你忘掉煩惱。11．（參考要點(diǎn)：（時(shí)間、內(nèi)容……）。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞