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【點睛】點睛:首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點;然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時可適當(dāng)運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標(biāo)點符號誤用等,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料,不可遺漏要點,并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱主要為第一人稱。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Editorial Office,I am writing to remend as The Most Popular Teacher.She is Miss Zhang.She is my English teacher. She is in her forties. Her small round glasses make her look smart. She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours. She is kind and helpful, too. She always helps us with our study. She loves jogging, so she looks healthy. To my surprise, she has donated blood many times since 2001. She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death. I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future. I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular Teacher.I hope that you agree with me. Yours sincerely,Beth,【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。短詩如下:My English Teacher Miss ZhangThere is a teacher, Miss Zhang,Who is friendly, patient and helpful.Always encouraging us to try,She leads us to a world of why.We all respect and admire her. 注意事項:,不得抄寫短詩原文:、意思連貫、符合情境。近日,又至畢業(yè)季,師生們忙著互致臨別贈言。增強邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,句子通順,行文連貫。全文可分兩大部分,第一部分寫中秋節(jié)的時間、傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式,第二部分寫我最期待的活動。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jessica,I39。要求:〔開頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計入總詞數(shù));, 意思連貫, 書寫工整。假如你是李華, 請你給Jessica寫一封信, 介紹該節(jié)日。以及狀語從句等;然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時可適當(dāng)運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標(biāo)點符號誤用等,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。句型:When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins;Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。例文點評:例文采用的是三段式;用第一人稱來敘述為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么;時態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時,描述建議時,描寫具體,條理清晰。假如你是李華,請用英語寫一篇短文投稿,談?wù)勎覀兠媾R的主要環(huán)境問題是什么,為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么,以及你的期望。8.環(huán)境保護(hù)人人有責(zé), 如果我們每一個人都能珍愛美麗地球 保護(hù)自然資源,相信我們的家園會越來越美好。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣。要求仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確本文主要從三個方面來寫:介紹足球運動及其好處;說說自己的偶像;談?wù)勛约旱膲粝?。短文的開頭已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);,不要逐詞翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順;、校名等相關(guān)信息。請你以足球迷的身份,根據(jù)下列表格中的要點提示,用英語向同學(xué)們介紹足球這項運動并談?wù)勛约旱膲粝搿?help. At this moment, I would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us.I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future!Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.Thank you for listening!【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,根據(jù)所給提示用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿,內(nèi)容包括回顧美麗的校園、生動有趣的教學(xué)、三年來的收獲;感謝老師的培養(yǎng)、父母的支持、同學(xué)的幫助;祝愿,在寫作中適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,語句通順,符合邏輯,符合發(fā)言稿的格式,沒有出現(xiàn)自己的真實姓名。 efforts, our parents39。發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);2. 發(fā)言稿須包括所有要點,不要逐詞翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順;發(fā)言稿不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。