【正文】 總體來說文章寫作較為流暢，有許多亮點(diǎn)。一些短語運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確，如waste a lot of time playing games（浪費(fèi)時(shí)間在玩游戲上），prepare for the exams（準(zhǔn)備考試）。寫作亮點(diǎn)：第一段總起描述了現(xiàn)在存在的作弊現(xiàn)象，用到了一些較好的短語，如picked up a bad habit（養(yǎng)成了一個(gè)壞習(xí)慣）。寫完原因后還要提出自己的看法和建議，具體內(nèi)容也已給出：；，學(xué)習(xí)發(fā)奮；。t enough time to prepare for the exams. Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study. We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress. Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves.【解析】寫作分析：本文需要就考試作弊這一主題展開討論。14．At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habitcheating in examinations.解析：At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habitcheating in examinations.There are three main reasons. First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult. Second, some students are not hardworking and they don39。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。ve improved our spoken English with his help./ Next week Mr. Green will leave for ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。而He came to teach English in our school three years ago./He is easy to get along with, but he39。s wish him a pleasant journey.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。s helped us a lot in our Englishi studies. We39。s worked hard. He39。13．Ladies and Gentlemen,First of all, allow me to thank you for giving me a chance to speak here. Mr.解析：Ladies and Gentlemen,First of all, allow me to thank you for giving me a chance to speak here. Mr. Green is from Australia. He came to teach English in our school three years ago. He is easy to get along with, but he39。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，要點(diǎn)齊全，語言簡練。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會(huì)用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來時(shí)態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。正確文章行文連貫、語句通順、表達(dá)流暢。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。其次短文中使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以第三人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式富于變化。短文分成了四段，第一段引出話題共享單車；第二段講述了共享單車的一些優(yōu)點(diǎn)；第三段介紹了一些問題；最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，簡單句、并列句和復(fù)合句交叉使用，改變文章句式節(jié)奏，使用不同的句式，避免單調(diào)。前兩個(gè)內(nèi)容我們需要根據(jù)表格的提示用正確的英語表達(dá)，而自己的觀點(diǎn)則需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，組織語言，并表達(dá)出來，要求至少兩點(diǎn)。s a way of living a green life.【解析】這篇作文要求我們給《21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)》投稿，談一談自己對(duì)共享單車的看法。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people can39。11．Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since解析：Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it39。適當(dāng)增加銜接詞，使文章更出彩。t think so．In my opinion，to read books is more valuable than anything else．The old sayingTo open a book is always helpfulclearly tells us how good it is to read a book．Books are our friends．They introduce us different kinds of knowledge．They lead us down the road to success．Books are our teachers．They teach us troth，science，literature，and philosophy of life．Besides，they increase our knowledge，enlarge our experience，strengthen our character and do many other things which we can not do without them．Books tell us what is good and what is evil．And only books can tell the good from the bad．Therefore to read more books is the best policy for our young students．As a middle school student．I think we should read more books．Reading is good for our physical and mental health．　Let39。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：in front of sb在某人面前；give ；用了that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，如：The movie was Dunkirk, and the story that happened on the screen was one of heroism and the sad reality during if引導(dǎo)的從句，如：As I watched the movie, it was as if I were experiencing the same victories and setbacks right from my seat in the 。如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this 。寫作時(shí)注意了條理性，使文章具有層次感，條理清楚。這篇作文內(nèi)容完整，包含了表格中的所有內(nèi)容，沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)。同時(shí)注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性，尤其是表格中的第五項(xiàng)和第六項(xiàng)內(nèi)容。這篇作文應(yīng)主要使用第三人稱來寫。在表格中有非常詳細(xì)的關(guān)于Tommy各方面的內(nèi)容，我們需要用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容有條理的表達(dá)出來?！?其中which reminds me of the saying是由which引導(dǎo)的定語從句。句子中有when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句。文章用第一人稱來寫，時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般過去時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。7．Dear Sarah,I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. I am going to leave the US next Tuesday mornin解析：Dear Sarah,I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. I am going to leave the US next Tuesday morning. I really want to say thanks to you because of your help and care during my stay here. I will never forget you offered to help when I had difficulty in municating with others in English, and I will never forget you drove me to the hospital in the late night when I didn’t feel well. Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.”Thanks again for taking care of me so well.【解析】此文為提綱式作文，文章屬于感謝信。s best to do ，be friendly to ，be ready to do ，It’s +adj.（ for sb.） + to do 。d better not talk or laugh loudly in public.Let’s action now. I believe, the better we behave, the more civilized our city will be.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇提綱作文，要求是為配合我市開展“創(chuàng)建文明城市（build a civilized city）”活動(dòng)，學(xué)校舉辦以“How to Behave Well”為主題的英語征文比賽。最后必須認(rèn)真檢查是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。在寫作的時(shí)候，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。最后，我們還要注意“分享”的情感教育，讓我們學(xué)有所獲。5．It’s very important for us to learn to share with each other. There’re many things to share in our解析：It’s very important for us to learn to share with each other. There’re many things to share in our lives. We can share our happiness or trouble. Some of us like sharing face to face while others prefer to share online like or Wechat.Once, I failed in a Math test. I had difficulty cheering myself up, but I realized keeping worries to myself would make it worse. After sharing it with my friend, I felt much better. Moreover, his words encouraged me a lot. In my opinion, sharing is really helpful. It can bring us more joy and provide us with useful suggestions.