【正文】 17．Do you want to have a brother or a sister?Do you want to have a brother or a sister?Last week,we h解析：Do you want to have a brother or a sister?Do you want to have a brother or a sister?Last week,we had a discussion about twochild students think they don’t want to have a brother or a sister. Because they don’t want to share parents’ love with , parents can be tired because of two children. However,others think they want to have a brother or a sister. Because they are eager for a person to play can share their happiness and sorrow.17% of students think they can’t mind having a brother or a should be decided by their parents.I think it is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with, I can share everything with him or her.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇以“Do you want to hav。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使語言表達多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。s more，on a bus，in need，be accustomed to，queue up，all in all等。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore（而且）, we are accustomed to （習慣于）queuing up （排隊） for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized【解析】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢?？傮w來說要點均被提及，語言準確富有活力。在談到劣勢的時候引用了俗語“Every coin has two sides.”，是個亮點。比較級的應用也相對準確，例如cheaper。寫作亮點：首段總起介紹，挑明這篇作文的主題Internet Shopping。15．Now Internet Shopping is more and more popular in the world.It’s a new way of shopping. It has lot解析：Now Internet Shopping is more and more popular in the world.It’s a new way of shopping. It has lots of advantages. The most important is convenient. You can shop whenever you like because the online shops are open 24 hours a day. It is easy to buy goods and it is also easy to find the things that you can’t buy in the shop. And they are cheaper. Besides, we can learn lots of information about goods.Every coin has two sides. So is Internet shopping. You can’t see the material objects or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and don’t like them, they sometimes are not easy to give back. What’s more, it’s not safe to pay through the internet. We should be careful when we shop on the internet.【解析】寫作分析：本文需要寫一篇小議論文，主題是網(wǎng)上購物，需要討論到網(wǎng)上購物的利和弊，注意合理分段，使得文章結構清晰，可以先總起陳述，然后用一段來描述優(yōu)點，再用一段描述劣勢和不足，最后一段收尾，這樣的作文就會條理清晰，結構合理。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。d like to travel alone．I want to spend enough time visiting the places I like． In this way, I can enjoy my vacation better．【解析】這是一篇圖表，要求談談自己對不同的旅游方式的看法。s more, it39。t need to look for hotels or restaurants by themselves．Besides, they can make friends and help each other while travelling．However, other students prefer to travel alone． That39。s help, they won39。文中 not only …but also…，help a lot，share happiness and sadness，do well in，give up, besides，so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj.，therefore, be proud of等詞（組）恰當使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文章的最后I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 表達了自己愿望與想法，使文章增色不少，值得學習。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系，最后最好要表達出自己的感想和看法。13．How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about mysel解析：How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn’t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn’t have a good sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry.Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to bee better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”為題，結合本題所給的寫作信息，闡述自己難忘的中學生活。開頭介紹了我想長大了去海南看美麗的風景，接下來介紹我一直想做這件事，但沒能實現(xiàn)的原因，最后介紹我下一步的計劃。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過去時，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：Molly and I used to……，She said that……，I didn’t do……，I talked to……等句式的應用。點睛：這篇文章使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如in trouble；do sports；On the other hand ；municate with等；When；Besides ；And ；So等的運用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時語言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯的范文。語言力求準確，簡潔。 sometimes we are a little over confident. And many students have no brothers or sisters, so they may do everything for themselves. These problems may make us seem impolite, even we can’t municate with others well. So it’s the most important for us to learn how to get on well with others.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應包含題目中所提供的所有信息。英語作文，要忠實于材料，不必擴展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯句。10．The happy lifeMy school life is rich and colourful. We have a lot of fun studying in the classroom解析：The happy lifeMy school life is rich and colourful. We have a lot of fun studying in the classroom with our lovely classmates. All my teachers and classmates are friendly and helpful. We get on well with each other. We often help each other and learn from each other. Though sometimes there is too much homework, with their help, we always finish it happily. During our free time, We play ball games and sing songs together. I wish to have a job I like and I will share my success with my parents. I also hope that I can do a lot of meaningful work for the society in the future. At present, I must study hard to make my dream e true. 【解析】英語作文寫出的句子要達意，完整，語法正確，合乎習慣，特別是句式，謂語動詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。9．Last year, I watched the most beautiful movie of my life at an IMAX theater in Beijing. On the gian