【正文】 ssful life?”的討論，為此你采訪了一些同學(xué)（結(jié)果見下表）。黑龍江中考模擬）話題作文：根據(jù)漢語提示和要求寫一篇短文。缺點：網(wǎng)上付款有時不安全；看不到實物，也不能試穿衣服。山東中考模擬）書面表達。談一談生活中你遇見美的一次經(jīng)歷，主要內(nèi)容包括你什么時候在哪里遇見了美，經(jīng)歷了什么事情以及你為什么覺得它美。要點如下：1. 校園生活豐富多彩，在寬敞明亮的教室里學(xué)習(xí)，老師和同學(xué)們都很友好，相處融洽，同學(xué)們互相幫助，互相學(xué)習(xí)，雖然作業(yè)多，但一起學(xué)習(xí)很快樂。 11．（12．（注意: ，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；、校名等相關(guān)信息。注意:。、校名等相關(guān)信息。團隊旅游◆有導(dǎo)游，不會迷路；◆不必自己找食宿◆結(jié)識朋友，互相幫助個人旅游◆自由安排時間；◆選擇自己喜歡的旅游景點；◆學(xué)會照顧自己你的想法……注意事項：1．文章必須包括表中全部內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)；2．想法至少在兩句以上；3．詞數(shù)90左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。，可以買到當(dāng)?shù)貨]有的商品。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________16．（請根據(jù)以下所 給要點,寫一篇 100 詞左右的英語短文。請你以“ Do you want to have a brother or a sister?” 為題目用英語寫一篇短文，先匯總班上同學(xué)的觀點，再陳述自己的想法。內(nèi)容包括：1. 時間的意義和重要性； （至少3種）；3. 節(jié)省時間的方法（至少3個）；4. 號召大家節(jié)約時間?；厩闆r張陽，陽光中學(xué)九年級二班學(xué)生興趣愛好1. 喜歡閱讀。如：…….（舉1例）要求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫； 2）必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。過去現(xiàn)在 ，并回收利用 你認為作為中學(xué)生應(yīng)該如何做才能保護好環(huán)境?（至少兩點）要求：，意思連貫。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。3．Colorful weekdaysIt is my honor to show you our colorful activities and today I mainly tell you so解析：Colorful weekdaysIt is my honor to show you our colorful activities and today I mainly tell you something about the part time activities in my school. Here is an introduction of my school’s part time activity. Our school has various activities after class. The activities begin at 4：20 and end at 5：20 every day. The groups on different subjects include sightseeing, speech contests, art festival, volunteer activities, and sports meeting and so on. Among them, I would like to take part in the sightseeing and art festival the most. Because the activities are wonderful.So I really hope that we can have less homework so we can have more time to participate in the part time activities to relax ourselves. Hope you can join us and enjoy every moment in my school!【解析】話題作文寫出的句子要達意，完整，語法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式，謂語動詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。靈活運用各種句式，采用不同的表達方式將各個要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。 What’s more, feel proud of； in order to； give up ；keep on trying. ； It is important to keep on trying and never to give up等；so ；so5．In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.Firs解析：In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life. should choose to live a lowcarbon life. We’d better go to school by bike or on foot. When we are shopping. we can use baskets or cloth bags instead of plastic bags. We should also pay attention to saving. We must say NO to waste. We shouldn’t buy anything we don’t need.Second，it’s our duty to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw litter or rubbish about and we should take care of trees and flowers.Third，it’s necessary for us to show good manners to others/ be polite to others. We need to say polite words such as“Thank You. I’m sorry and Please” as often as possible.Finally, we should devote ourselves to helping others. We should learn from Lei Feng and be willing to help others. It’s important for us to take part in voluntary work.We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達以“學(xué)雷鋒、講文明、樹新風(fēng)”的活動為話題，結(jié)合所給的寫作材料，寫出中學(xué)生應(yīng)從表格中的幾個方面來規(guī)范自己的言行舉止。文中had better，by bike, on foot，instead of, pay attention to, as often as possible ，take care of, devote … to …, learn from 等詞（組）恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文中使用了固定句型It’s +形容詞+for sb. +to do sth., 以及定語從句、時間狀語從句等復(fù)合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。寫作亮點：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：do a survey about sth關(guān)于某事做調(diào)查；respect their parents,尊敬他們的父母；look after照顧；make a good plan for sth為某事做一個好的計劃；make some good friends交一些好朋友；keep healthy保持健康。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容?！窘馕觥窟@是一篇給材料作文，介紹為建設(shè)美麗中國，實現(xiàn)中國夢，農(nóng)民，醫(yī)生，警察和科學(xué)家怎樣做貢獻的。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。寫作亮點：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：in front of sb在某人面前；give ；用了that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，如：The movie was Dunkirk, and the story that happened on the screen was one of heroism and the sad reality during if引導(dǎo)的從句，如：As I watched the movie, it was as if I were experiencing the same victories and setbacks right from my seat in the 。get on well with相處融洽；help each other and learn from each other互相幫助，互相學(xué)習(xí)；with one’s help在某人的幫助下；in the future. 在未來；e true.（夢想）成真11．As students born after 1990, we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When some解析：As students born after 1990, we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble, we always give him or her a hand. We are also active. We like to do sports and go traveling. Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after school. Besides, we are imaginative and creative. We always try something new and do everything differently. On the other hand, we also have some disadvantages. Sometimes we can’t express our opinions in proper ways。最后必須認真查驗是否有漏寫，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。此處used to do sth, want to do sth, grow up, be busy with, by doing sth, set off等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，要點齊全，語言簡練。t get lost and they don39。s a chance for them to learn to look afterthemselves．For me, I39。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。第二段開始描述優(yōu)勢，這里用到了“無論什么時候你喜歡/想要”（whenever you like）結(jié)構(gòu)，在表達“...是開放的”也很準(zhǔn)確，用了“be open”?！癢hat’s more”也被合理使用到了，意為“此外”，避免與besides重復(fù)，體現(xiàn)了文章語言的多樣性。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如make joint efforts，as junior students，for example，obey the traffic rules，run red light，in addition，no longer，in public，and so on，what39。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的