【正文】 此處turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。 advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let herhave more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，對(duì)學(xué)生家長的博客進(jìn)行回復(fù)。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如thank you for doing，I’d like to do，introduce sb. to，all of you，at home，do some washing，at a fixed time，have a chat，play chess，do exercise，deal with，a great help，in the future等。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。d like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, it39。d like to do，help me open my mind，at least，be interested in，during the holiday，plan to do，join in，be kind to someone in need，pay more attention to，be close to nature，search the Internet等。s all. Thank you.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。m interested in cooking, so I will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday.Second, health is the most important. So I will eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables and keep running every day.Third, it39。d like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think it39。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容確定主要句子的時(shí)態(tài)，及句式等重要內(nèi)容。s important to remember these for us all.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。除此之外，中間也使用了一些連接詞，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加通順?！军c(diǎn)睛】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，符合邏輯，先表明自己觀點(diǎn)，然后闡述事情，提出自己的觀點(diǎn)和建議。然后仔細(xì)闡述了事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過。信守承諾是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，在寫作過程中，注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)，先寫出大明和玲玲之間的事情，然后再說自己對(duì)此的看法。在寫作中注意運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使文章更加順暢，自然。人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致關(guān)系，構(gòu)思文章框架，列舉出可能會(huì)用到的好詞好句，記住千萬不能漏寫信息要點(diǎn)。11．B解析：Boys and girls,I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been in love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. What’smore, she has a lot of friends. However, some neighbors have a plaint against the people who do square dancing. They think that the music is so loud that they can’t fall asleep at night.In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldn’t make a lot of noise.That’s all. Thank you!【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇學(xué)校英語興趣小組的活動(dòng)中的發(fā)言稿。句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了一些并列句和復(fù)合句，長短句結(jié)合，使文章富有節(jié)奏。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，作者根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用了一般過去時(shí)、一般將來時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來時(shí)態(tài)，動(dòng)詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，語法規(guī)范?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者根據(jù)題目要求介紹了自己家鄉(xiāng)治理霧霾的情況，并結(jié)合自身的實(shí)際情況，講述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語句式表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，寫完整的句子，利用簡單句的基本句型，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。因此文章應(yīng)主要分成三段，一個(gè)內(nèi)容一段。題目中列出了三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，我們應(yīng)根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)提示，來組織語言，充實(shí)內(nèi)容。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。在寫作過程中，要將圖表內(nèi)提示信息用英語正確的表達(dá)出來，要涵蓋圖表中提到的所有要點(diǎn)，注意理順要點(diǎn)，防止漏寫。根據(jù)所給出的材料提示可知文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一、第三人稱。學(xué)校開展“夢(mèng)想少年”的主題演講活動(dòng)，假如你是張明，要求根據(jù)圖表提示內(nèi)容，以“I39。In a word， I believe that the man who holds his dream will be able to achieve his dream one day． That39。d like to help people． For example， I volunteer to visit sick children in the hospital and cheer them up． Good morning， dear teachers and friends， I am Zhang Ming． It39。9．D解析：I39。：短語：in order to，take part in，lots of，learn from，in the process of，What’s more，have a good time。學(xué)生除了要把所給要點(diǎn)提示都表達(dá)出來外，還要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)拓展，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。句型：被動(dòng)句型，現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，主語從句。文章條理分明，三個(gè)要點(diǎn)提示都已表達(dá)清楚，并進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)拓展，所給單詞也都全部用上。：該題要求寫作體裁為書信格式，所以例文用第一人稱I進(jìn)行寫作，在文章結(jié)尾也按照標(biāo)準(zhǔn)書信格式進(jìn)行了收尾。7．D解析：Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters. Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit. If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】：這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá)，只給了一些要點(diǎn)提示，但都不很明確。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；more and more beautiful。6．A解析：例文As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warmhearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will bee more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，但寫作時(shí)要按照應(yīng)用文格式寫，寫作時(shí)承接短文開頭，具體寫出怎樣做以及這樣做的意義。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。m very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.Best wishes,Yours,Li hua【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達(dá)主要是推薦自己的畢業(yè)晚會(huì)計(jì)劃。：孟郊：唐朝：母親為兒子做衣服：母愛的偉大第三部分：信的結(jié)語——如果對(duì)方有任何問題，可以繼續(xù)問自己，并期待收到對(duì)方的來信。我將給你介紹《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）這首詩。人稱是第一人稱和第三人稱?！驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)內(nèi)容可知，這是一篇書信類文章。Where引導(dǎo)的定語從句。Which引導(dǎo)的限定性定語從句。It is+adj.（for sb.） to do sth. （對(duì)某人來說）做某事是怎樣的。亮點(diǎn)詞匯短語：one of．．．，．．．之一；green tea綠茶；be famous for．．．，因…而出名；keep healthy保持健康；be strict in sth對(duì)…嚴(yán)格；not only．．．.but also．．．，不僅．．．而且．．．。3．C