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【考點(diǎn)定位】 考查提綱類作文。寫作亮點(diǎn):短文開頭直奔主題:我想要談?wù)勎业臒兰霸鯓犹幚硭麄儯缓竺嫒畏謩e從外貌上的煩惱、與父母交流上的障礙、學(xué)習(xí)上的壓力幾方面分別談?wù)撟约旱臒兰疤幚淼姆绞?,生動具體,條理分明。要包含表格中所有的信息,并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。Hello everyone,Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. That’s all. Thank you!【答案】Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.I am not very tall and very mon. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to municate with others very well.I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the afterclass activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.That’s all. Thank you!【解析】試題分析:本題是一篇給材料作文,要求用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿,在班會上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇ā?. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的信息,并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。假設(shè)你是李華,請根據(jù)下表提示,用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿,在班會上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇?。本文大部分都是?fù)雜句,顯示了作者比較熟練的英語寫作水平。在比較的時候,作者用了多種方式,使句子不單調(diào),比如在比較溫度時,直接用比較級“higher”在說旅館時用了“l(fā)ess fortable ”,比較食物時,用了“as…as”等。對于城市A的缺點(diǎn),作者用了“Although”盡管一詞輕輕帶過。另外,一定要注意題目要求,把每一個信息都進(jìn)行比較,不要有漏掉。避免漢語式英語。雖然字?jǐn)?shù)要求不多,但可以很好地考查考生英語寫作的基本功,需要考生對常用的英語句型熟練掌握。City ACity BFlying2 hours4 hoursTemperature30℃18℃Hotel★★★★★★Things to do★★★★★★Food★★★★★★In my opinion, is he better place to spend my summer holiday.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less fortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.【解析】【詳解】試題分析:本題給出了兩個城市的飛行時常、氣溫、旅館情況。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無誤。在寫作時,注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。要求根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息將你的選擇用英文向同學(xué)們介紹。中考后暑假即將開始,你和一些同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備結(jié)伴出國旅行。The summer holiday is ing. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I hope I will have a good time there!【答案】The summer holiday is ing. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I have read information about two countries——Britain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we can go to time is july 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football first, I want us to visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Next I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting.However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconvenient. And it39