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。請根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息,將你的選擇用英文向同學們介紹。8.書面表達中考后暑假即將開始,你和一些同學準備結(jié)伴出國旅行。Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. 杭州是龍井茶出產(chǎn)的勝地。Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. 龍井是我國著名的茶葉,它不僅與龍井的氣候、土壤環(huán)境有關(guān),而且與龍井的生產(chǎn)工藝有關(guān)。亮點句型:It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking Longjing tea. 喝龍井茶對人們保持健康有好處。時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。請你根據(jù)表格信息,用英語為其寫一篇介紹,詞數(shù)80左右。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤色。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫短文。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。審題時要注意試題的要求,抓住要點,詞數(shù)符合要求?!军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起:認真審題。亮點說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務,語言表達符合英語習慣,準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致,特別使用一些亮點詞句,如bought sth for sb, be grateful to, be going to do, share sth with sb, be fond of, as far as I am concerned, on the one hand...on the other hand, from to以及we had a reading party,which was held on Friday in our reading room中which引導非限制性定語從句。Last Friday,we had a reading party, which was held on Friday in our reading room. Then we are going to hold an activity to share the feeling with others at 3:00 on Friday afternoon. All of us are fond of buying books on the Internet. We are going to buy some books on the Internet next month. As far as I am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the Internet are cheaper than those in the bookstore. On the other hand, there are all kinds of books, so we needn’t go from one bookstore to another .Best wishes!Yours,Cathy【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文,向外教介紹俱樂部中讀書交流會的活動,并且告訴外教同學們現(xiàn)在喜歡網(wǎng)購圖書并闡述網(wǎng)購圖書的好處。4至少80詞。2可適當加入細節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實,行文連貫。3說一說網(wǎng)上購書有什么好處。(2)本周五的下午3點,大家將共同交流讀書的體會。寫作要點:1表達收到圖書后的喜悅與感激之情。俱樂部的同學們很喜歡網(wǎng)購圖書這種便捷的方式,并打算在本周五交流讀書后的感受。點睛:這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如at the beginning of; know about;make a speech等;When ;Although ;Then ;From then on,等的運用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理;同時語言流暢,內(nèi)容完整,是一篇不錯的范文。語言力求準確,簡潔。s very important to be confident【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Selfconfidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have bee more and more confident.To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應包含表格中所提供的所有信息。假如你是李華,請你為??⒄Z園地“自信助我成長”專欄寫一篇短文,談談自信的重要性,分享一次使你更加自信的經(jīng)歷,并說說我們?nèi)绾胃幼孕拧?.自信賦予人力量,帶給人快樂。注意過渡性語言的使用??梢赃m當發(fā)揮,寫作中適當使用連詞,注意上下文的緊密聯(lián)系,要符合邏輯關(guān)系。注意文體、人稱和時態(tài)。是一篇議論文,第一段要寫贊同學生網(wǎng)上交友的人的觀點,第二段要寫反對學生網(wǎng)上交友的觀點,第三段要表述作者自己的觀點。2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右,短文的開頭已給出(不計入總詞數(shù))。請你用英語寫一篇關(guān)于學生網(wǎng)上交友的短文,介紹人們不同的觀點,并表達自己的看法。此處turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。點睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用。 advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl;let herhave more friends and social activities;and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,對學生家長的博客進行回復。3. 提出至少2條建議。 I’m the mother of a fourteenyear –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ? 寫作要點:1. 表明自己的看法。3. 寫作假定你是李