【正文】 所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。主要從：你努力工作取得了什么成績(jī)？?你是怎么做到的？?你覺得怎么樣？這幾個(gè)方面去介紹。北京中考模擬）“書山有路勤為徑, 學(xué)海無涯苦作舟”, 成功不會(huì)從天而降, 美好的未來需要靠不斷努力來創(chuàng)造?某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“天道酬勤” 為主題的征文活動(dòng)?假如你是李華, 請(qǐng)用英文寫一篇短文投稿, 講述你通過勤奮, 取得進(jìn)步甚至成功的經(jīng)歷, 并談?wù)勀愕母惺?提示詞語: diligence （勤奮）, make progress, effort, proud提示問題: ? What did you achieve by working hard?? What did you do to make it?? How did you feel about it?【答案】Diligence is a must for us to reach our goals. I never realized it until I tried every effort to win the English speech petition last year. It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it. I recorded my lines and asked my foreign teacher to correct my pronunciation. Then I kept practising day and night. Besides, I seized every chance to speak in front of my family or friends. The more I practised, the more confident I became. In the end, I won the petition and got a prize. It was so great that all my efforts paid off. I felt so proud of myself.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下你通過勤奮, 取得進(jìn)步甚至成功的經(jīng)歷?！军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般過去式時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱?！敬鸢浮縀veryone has an unforgettable thing in his life. So do I.when I was a middle student, I celebrated my mother’s birthday for her. I cleaned the room, mopped the floor and also bought a present for her. I waited for mum at home after doing all these things. When mum came back, I jumped to her and gave her the present and said happy birthday to her. Mum was so happy and surprised that she hugged me for a long time. This is an unforgettable thing in my life because this was the first time I did the housework and felt how tired to do the job and this was also the first time I noticed mum was so happy that she even cried. Though I was tired, I felt happy.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇話題作文。要求：1. 請(qǐng)先將題目補(bǔ)充完整后再作答；2. 語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；3. 文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)；4. 將短文寫在答題卡上。云南中考模擬）書面表達(dá)提示：轉(zhuǎn)眼間三年的初中生活即將結(jié)束，在這三年的學(xué)習(xí)與生活中一定有些讓你難忘的人或事物。第三部分：再次重申論點(diǎn)。第二部分：主體部分。【詳解】英語作文一般分為三部分：第一部分：闡明論點(diǎn)。要求：1. 詞數(shù)80120詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名和所在學(xué)校名稱。同為青少年的你覺得在沒有父母的陪伴下出游可行嗎？請(qǐng)你按要求寫一篇英語作文?！伴_心的是暑假如期而至；盼望的是我們獨(dú)自旅行；煩惱的是父母不予支持。7．（行文連貫、自然，表達(dá)流暢。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，語句通順。短文分三段：第一段引出文章的話題parentchild relationship，點(diǎn)明文章主旨Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents；第二段對(duì)調(diào)查結(jié)果的第一項(xiàng)內(nèi)容進(jìn)行了介紹，并結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，講述了如何與父母相處?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，介紹了中美兩國(guó)親子關(guān)系的對(duì)比，并結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際對(duì)如何與父母相處，發(fā)表了個(gè)人看法。句式結(jié)構(gòu)要完整，可以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式。合理安排各部分內(nèi)容之間的關(guān)系，注意分清結(jié)構(gòu)，表達(dá)要有條理。短文應(yīng)主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，第一人稱和第三人稱來敘述。寫作前，應(yīng)仔細(xì)審題，觀察所給表格，弄清楚表格中每一項(xiàng)的內(nèi)容以及它的意義。ChinaUSKids often talk to their parents%89%Kids think their parents understand them61%%Kids have different ideas from their parents%76%Kids have different ideas from their parents mostly because of…Schoolwork （%）Pocket money （20%）注意事項(xiàng)：；、意思連貫、符合情境；，首尾已經(jīng)在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4. 內(nèi)容必須寫在答題卡指定的位置。通過搜集資料，你查找到中國(guó)青少年研究中心（CYCRC）近日就中美兩國(guó)親子關(guān)系進(jìn)行了問卷調(diào)查，結(jié)果如下表。無錫市江南中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)親子關(guān)系是目前廣受關(guān)注的話題?！军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般過去時(shí)，人稱主要為第三人稱。The Story of LinglingLast week_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The Story of LinglingLast Friday, Lingling went out for a walk with her mother after supper. She saw a wallet at the door of the munity. Lingling picked up her wallet and found that there were ID cards and some money in it. Lingling and her mother handed the wallet to the security guard, who sent the news to the microphone group in the munity. When the owner saw the news, he came to fetch her wallet and thanked Lingling and her mother. .I think Li Hua did a good should learn from her.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。（2）短文的題目和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。天津中考模擬）請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，以“The Story of Lingling”為題，為社區(qū)宣傳專欄寫一篇短文，介紹在玲玲身上發(fā)生的一件事?！军c(diǎn)睛】這篇短文用到了一些好的句型：The Palace Museum is tall and magnificent, with beautiful exhibits. ；Tourists in the Palace Museum are like knitting. People take pictures in 。在寫作時(shí)，本文的主語可以用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。題目中給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。s closing time. I still don39。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（6）你的感受…… 參考詞匯：故宮博物院the Palace Museum 提前in advance要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)。（4）故宮內(nèi)游人如織，人們紛紛拍照留念。（2）你乘火車到達(dá)北京后’轉(zhuǎn)乘地鐵來到故宮。天津中考模擬）假設(shè)五一小長(zhǎng)假期間，你去故宮博物院參觀，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提不與一篇英語短文，講述你在故宮的所見所聞。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。而固定結(jié)構(gòu)But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?和I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。t be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Don39。作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該怎樣做呢？談?wù)勀愕南敕ā：幽现锌寄M）書面表達(dá)地球是我們的家園，我們作為地球的主人，就應(yīng)該好好保護(hù)地球。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)?！?