【正文】 篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順。He hopes to go to a lot of different places, know about Chinese culture and taste Chinese food.（二）根據(jù)提綱連詞成句，連句成篇，注意連詞的使用。He used to like to read science fictions. Now he is very interested in Chinese classical books and has read 2 . 早晨8點(diǎn)起床，乘坐地鐵去上班，空余時(shí)間練習(xí)漢語(yǔ)。It has been two years since he came to China and worked in . 曾經(jīng)去過(guò)長(zhǎng)城，故宮等名勝。寫(xiě)完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致等）。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文使用的時(shí)態(tài)有一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，一般過(guò)去式和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。I have a pen friend named Tom. 【答案】I have a pen friend named Tom. It has been two years since he came to China and worked in Beijing. And he has been to the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and other places of interest. He used to like to read science fictions. Now he is very interested in Chinese classical books and has read 2 classics. He gets up at 8 . and takes the subway to work every day, and practices Chinese in his spare time. He teaches English in a middle school in Beijing. He works hard. He likes China. He hopes to go to a lot of different places, know about Chinese culture and taste Chinese food in the future.【解析】試題分析：本文是材料作文。工作情況早晨8點(diǎn)起床，乘坐地鐵去上班，空余時(shí)間練習(xí)漢語(yǔ)。旅游曾經(jīng)去過(guò)長(zhǎng)城，故宮等名勝。山東中考模擬） 書(shū)面表達(dá) 你的的筆友Tom居住在北京，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中提供的信息，介紹一下他的情況。英語(yǔ)作文，要忠實(shí)于材料，不必?cái)U(kuò)展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語(yǔ)，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫(xiě)錯(cuò)句。Say thanks to my teachersHow time flies! My junior high school lives will e to end.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Say thanks to my teachersHow time flies! My junior high school lives will e to end.In the past three years, I have studied in a beautiful school which provides me with a good study place. Teachers in my school also give me lots of help. Whenever I was in trouble, you always stood around me to fort me .You taught me how to be a good person and gave me the courage to face difficulties. You are my friends. So I want to say, I love you, my dear teachers. I have grown up happily with your help. I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.【解析】 話題作文寫(xiě)出的句子要達(dá)意，完整，語(yǔ)法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯?xiě)出確切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。,書(shū)寫(xiě)工整、規(guī)范。請(qǐng)以“Say thanks to________”為題,寫(xiě)一篇短文。10．（它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。t make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.I had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of puter game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also upset. How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday plan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如make good use of，last weekend，how to do，play a game，a kind of，spent more time on，forget to do，in the end，be angry with，be going to do，on the paper，put up等。Once, I couldn39。、校名和地名。內(nèi)容包括：（事情，原因及后果）；。9．（開(kāi)頭表示很高興收到Billy的來(lái)信，接下來(lái)介紹我平時(shí)的鍛煉情況，最后指出鍛煉給我?guī)?lái)的好處以及我建議Billy要多鍛煉。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I am busy……，because I have……，Doing exercise can help……，So I advise you to……等句式的應(yīng)用。4. 至少80詞。2. 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。3. 談?wù)勫憻捊o你帶來(lái)了哪些好處。（2）偶爾不鍛煉的原因：作業(yè)多，沒(méi)時(shí)間。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1. 你最近正忙于為即將到來(lái)的體育測(cè)試（physical test）做準(zhǔn)備。黑龍江中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你是九年級(jí)學(xué)生李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Billy發(fā)來(lái)郵件詢問(wèn)你平時(shí)鍛煉的情況?？傮w來(lái)說(shuō)這篇文章分為三大段，條理清晰，敘述完整，完成了既定的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。 寫(xiě)作要求：1. 短文結(jié)構(gòu)完整，意思連貫，語(yǔ)言流暢，語(yǔ)法準(zhǔn)確，符合邏輯；2. 卷面干凈整潔；3. 詞數(shù) 80 左右；4. 開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。內(nèi)容包括以下方面：1. 你認(rèn)為幸福是什么？2. 描述一件令你感到幸福的事（需交代時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、過(guò)程與感受）。幸福就圍繞在我們身邊，簡(jiǎn)單得觸手可得，平凡得召之即來(lái)。7．（它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！敬鸢浮緼 Special DayToday is my father’s birthday, which is such a special day for me, so I want to give him a surprise. My father is a great father, and he always gives me what I want. I told my mother that I wanted to make a dish for my father. She was very happy to teach me. With the help of my mother, I am confident that I can make a good meal. When my father returned home, he was very happy and praised me a lot. He said this was the biggest present for him.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如such a special day，give him a surprise，a lot，make a dish，want to do，with the help of，return home等。文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給題目“A Special Day”寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，記敘你特別的一天。6．（開(kāi)頭介紹了我想要成為一個(gè)發(fā)明家；接下來(lái)介紹為了成為一個(gè)發(fā)明家，應(yīng)該如何做；最后指出為了成為一個(gè)發(fā)明家，我要堅(jiān)持做下去。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。s……等句式的應(yīng)用。ll persist doing in the future with my whole passion.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題作文，以“How to Bee an Inventor”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文。s more important,Never give our 39。（文章標(biāo)題和開(kāi)頭已給出不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)） 2．文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱等相關(guān)信息。作為一名中學(xué)生．假如你夢(mèng)想當(dāng)一名發(fā)明家，應(yīng)該怎樣做才能實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想呢?請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的漫畫(huà)提示，以“How to Bee an Inventor”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文。5．（本篇文章寫(xiě)的好的句子有：Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world．中華文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。如but, so, then等。以圖表展示的作文要以“讀”為主，首先要認(rèn)真讀懂圖表中的要求，對(duì)所給信息加以分析、推斷、篩選、概括，去粗取精；在寫(xiě)作時(shí)目的要明確，要注意內(nèi)容的準(zhǔn)確性和嚴(yán)肅性。平時(shí)注意多多積累句型、短語(yǔ)?！驹斀狻课恼滦枰榻B下中國(guó)的文化。3. 文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容歷史文化歷史悠久，文化各異；傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，多彩習(xí)俗（舉一例）文明行為相互尊重，以禮相待；互學(xué)共鑒，共同成長(zhǎng)（或自擬）身邊文明校園文明（自擬一點(diǎn)）注意：1. 詞數(shù)90詞左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。如皋市實(shí)驗(yàn)初中中考模擬） 亞洲文明對(duì)話大會(huì)近期在北京召開(kāi)，你的印度朋友Danny收看了大會(huì)相關(guān)報(bào)道，對(duì)華夏文明產(chǎn)生了濃厚的興趣，來(lái)信向你了解中國(guó)文化。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。天津中考模擬）手機(jī)在生活中扮演著越來(lái)越重要的角色，許多中學(xué)生沉迷于手機(jī)無(wú)法自拔，：1. 去年，Miller對(duì)手機(jī)游戲非常入迷，而且花大量時(shí)間用手機(jī)聊天看電影；2. Miller與家人和朋友交流甚少，離開(kāi)手機(jī)會(huì)很焦慮；3. 昨天還因?yàn)樽呗房词謾C(jī)被自行車撞了，膝蓋受傷；4. 你的建議……參考詞匯：mobile games手機(jī)游戲anxious焦慮be crazy about對(duì)……入迷要求：1字?jǐn)?shù)80100個(gè)2開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)3要點(diǎn)齊全，行為連貫，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮Today more and more people are addicted to（沉迷