【正文】 要點寫出，有稍多語法、拼寫錯誤（6—9分）； 4．篇幅不足，錯誤較多，語句小通順（3—5分）； 5．雙寫了個別句子或單詞（0—2分）。七．教學(xué)資源2010年山東省濰坊市初中學(xué)業(yè)水平考試寫作答案（滿分15分）One possible version: How to Keep FitAs we all know，health is very important．But how to keep fit? Firstly, we should have a good diet．That’s eating more fresh fruit and vegetables, but less junk more water instead of coke or other unhealthy , it39。以濰坊市近三年中考作文為題例，讓學(xué)生感受中考作文的要求、難度。Dear Helen, Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to the wanted to take some father was out at that time, so I took his camera without telling , the camera was out of my bag and dropped on the ground when I was climbing the didn’t work at put it back quietly after I returned I haven’t told him till I face to my father, I feel should I do?Yours, DavidDear David ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes，Helen六．教學(xué)反思：本節(jié)課我從學(xué)生習(xí)作易出現(xiàn)的錯誤入手，分析出錯的原因，進(jìn)行及時的練習(xí)。:我們以2011年濰坊市初中學(xué)業(yè)水平考試作文題為作業(yè)：假設(shè)你是某文雜志的“知心姐姐”（Agony Sister）, Helen, 請閱讀下面的這封求助信，并根據(jù)信的內(nèi)容寫一封回信。（小組優(yōu)秀者到講臺讀自己文章）這節(jié)課我們學(xué)習(xí)了書面表達(dá)題的一些解題技巧，當(dāng)然在實際學(xué)習(xí)中還需要不斷的總結(jié)練習(xí)，如養(yǎng)成記筆記的習(xí)慣。請你寫一篇 80詞左右的英語短文，說明如何保持身體健康。主要原因有：飲食結(jié)構(gòu)不合理；體育鍛煉不足；心理壓力大，不能與人很好地溝通等等。如要求寫得體裁、字?jǐn)?shù)、必須包含的內(nèi)容、書寫等等。那么常用的開頭有： ： is Thursday,It is 7 o’clock , my father is reading ： was rainy happened on a wet day of ： weekends we went out for a ： in Rome, do as the Romans ： we were tired, we felt very ’m proud of what I’ve everyone makes a contribution to protecting our environment , our world will bee much more hope you will have a wonderful ：當(dāng)然常用的開頭結(jié)尾還有不少，希望同學(xué)們多總結(jié)學(xué)習(xí)。師：很好。師：很對，2009年濰坊市初中學(xué)業(yè)水平考試考試書面表達(dá)題的要求是：豐富多彩的初中生活即將結(jié)束，有哪件事情讓你至今印象深刻，甚至難以忘懷？請以An unforgettable experience為題，寫一篇英語短文。（Tom went to a table tennis club.）Step3：師：接下來讓我們討論一下怎樣減少動詞時態(tài)或語態(tài)錯誤。但我們常用的簡單句的結(jié)構(gòu)有： 主語 + 謂語(及物動詞)+ 賓語 People enjoy + 謂語(不及物動詞)He often swims in a + 系動詞 + 表語 You look ’m 、謂語、賓語、表語，注意他們的位置。Step2:師：怎樣減少出錯呢？首先讓我們看一下常用的句子結(jié)構(gòu)。名詞、動詞、形容詞、副詞/連詞等，也包含短語、不定式使用不當(dāng)。 very like music.→I like music very am want to be a doctor.→ I want to be a 、語態(tài)使用不當(dāng)。五． 教學(xué)過程： 導(dǎo)入：Step1：同學(xué)們，今天我們針對書面表達(dá)題進(jìn)行專項復(fù)習(xí)。從句子結(jié)構(gòu)、動詞的時態(tài)、常用作文的開頭、結(jié)尾，到作文實戰(zhàn)練習(xí)，中考作文評析、作文修改。缺少系統(tǒng)的練習(xí)，學(xué)生對作文有畏懼心理，寫作方面的障礙自然就多了。三． 教材分析：外研版教材每個模塊后都設(shè)計了針對模塊內(nèi)容writing。錯誤多，不連貫。英語書面表達(dá)題是學(xué)生比較頭疼的題型。：保證按要求完成任務(wù)。：熟悉本地情況，有相關(guān)工作經(jīng)歷。s more, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to should try our best reduce pollution and fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference the believe we can make the world a better place to live you for your listening!第二篇：英語書面表達(dá)限時訓(xùn)練英語書面表達(dá)限時訓(xùn)練國內(nèi)某英文報招聘兼職記者，報道2012年奧運會。m Li 39。假如你是李華，準(zhǔn)備以“What Can We Do for the Environment”為題，寫一篇保護(hù)環(huán)境的英語演講稿。t scold or beat them too will make them away from them as children will believe in their will make family life much to Get along Well with OthersIn our daily life, we have to e into contact with people in every walk of , it is very important for us to know how to get along with other get along well with others and win their friendships, we must observe strictly the following begin with, we need to be honest with others and should always say what we will surely make people stay far away from us in the long all, honesty is the best , we have to be humble we are proud in public, we can hardly win other39。t be best way to solve the problem is to understand each should learn to respect their parents39。把孩子當(dāng)作朋友，這樣他們會信任父母，會使家庭生活更幸福。解決（solve）這一問題的最好辦法只有相互理解。s more, there are some bad materials in the games or on the Internet, which would have a had influence on their think that Internet is a good thing, but we also need to get rid of it Habits whether good or bad, are gradually a person does a certain thing again, he39。s true that it can not only do good for the students but also be of great interest and make them happy and the other hand, surfing the Internet has some students are so addicted to the games that they can39。請參考下面的信息并結(jié)合自己的觀點寫一篇90詞左右的短文談?wù)勀愕目捶?。d better take enough exercise every day to make our bodies , we should be happy every , we have to give up those had habits such as drinking and a word, to be in good health, we must be in high spirits and take good care of 、畢業(yè)留言初中生活即將結(jié)束，新的生活即將開啟，請為你最好的同學(xué)寫一段畢業(yè)留言：他（她）給你留下的深刻印象、你們在一起的快樂時光及對他（她）最美好的祝愿。（文中不要出現(xiàn)作者本人的真實信息）寫作參考：保持健康的重要性保持健康的方法談?wù)勀愕目捶℉ow to Keep FitEveryone wants to keep how to keep fit? Firstly, you should eat more vegetables and fruits, because they are good for your body, just as the old saying, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” Secondly, you39。為此，他們發(fā)起了題為“How to keep Fit”的征文活動，倡導(dǎo)中學(xué)生的健康生活方式。ll be able to be good at it one 、健康某英語網(wǎng)站進(jìn)行了一次中學(xué)生健康情況調(diào)查，發(fā)現(xiàn)很多中學(xué)生的健康狀況令人擔(dān)憂。、校名和地名；：80詞左右What should we do in English class?In English class, we should listen to the teacher is the most important for we have any questions, we should ask the teacher or classmates at 39。 part in activities。請你以“What should we do in English class?”為題寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀阍谟⒄Z課堂上學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎樣做，才能使英語學(xué)習(xí)更有效。t study harder in the past because I spent a lot of time playing puter I even fell asleep in front of a , in last year39。請你用英語記錄下一兩件最讓你感動或遺憾的事，同時為你將來的生活做一點設(shè)計，下列句型可以幫助你完成作文：One thing in my mind is …., I am happy that …, It is a pity that I didn’t …., I will…寫作要求：內(nèi)容真實，要點齊全，行文邊貫，詞數(shù)90詞左右。My Pleasant DayYesterday I was busy, but I was really breakfast, my parents took me to the amusement took some photos over mother bought me a toy even played the roller coaster and that made me felt leaving the amusement park, we went to visit my spent the whole afternoon chatting with my parents prepared delicious food for had a wonderful dinner a pleasant day it was!反思可以使每個人成長進(jìn)步，為未來做好計劃可以鑄就成功。t forget to help our parents with we do something to help others who need help, we will have a more meaningful summer 、一次經(jīng)歷在你成長的歷程中，有些日子會讓你開心快樂，經(jīng)久難忘。注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、校名；下列詞匯可供參考：summer holiday, travel, do sports, do some reading, help… with housework, take part in …A Meaningful Summer Holiday Many students maybe look forward to having a