【正文】 要點(diǎn)寫出，有稍多語法、拼寫錯(cuò)誤（6—9分）； 4．篇幅不足，錯(cuò)誤較多，語句小通順（3—5分）； 5．雙寫了個(gè)別句子或單詞（0—2分）。七．教學(xué)資源2010年山東省濰坊市初中學(xué)業(yè)水平考試寫作答案（滿分15分）One possible version: How to Keep FitAs we all know，health is very important．But how to keep fit? Firstly, we should have a good diet．That’s eating more fresh fruit and vegetables, but less junk more water instead of coke or other unhealthy , it39。以濰坊市近三年中考作文為題例，讓學(xué)生感受中考作文的要求、難度。Dear Helen, Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to the wanted to take some father was out at that time, so I took his camera without telling , the camera was out of my bag and dropped on the ground when I was climbing the didn’t work at put it back quietly after I returned I haven’t told him till I face to my father, I feel should I do?Yours, DavidDear David ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes，Helen六．教學(xué)反思：本節(jié)課我從學(xué)生習(xí)作易出現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤入手，分析出錯(cuò)的原因，進(jìn)行及時(shí)的練習(xí)。:我們以2011年濰坊市初中學(xué)業(yè)水平考試作文題為作業(yè)：假設(shè)你是某文雜志的“知心姐姐”（Agony Sister）, Helen, 請(qǐng)閱讀下面的這封求助信，并根據(jù)信的內(nèi)容寫一封回信。（小組優(yōu)秀者到講臺(tái)讀自己文章）這節(jié)課我們學(xué)習(xí)了書面表達(dá)題的一些解題技巧，當(dāng)然在實(shí)際學(xué)習(xí)中還需要不斷的總結(jié)練習(xí)，如養(yǎng)成記筆記的習(xí)慣。請(qǐng)你寫一篇 80詞左右的英語短文，說明如何保持身體健康。主要原因有：飲食結(jié)構(gòu)不合理；體育鍛煉不足；心理壓力大，不能與人很好地溝通等等。如要求寫得體裁、字?jǐn)?shù)、必須包含的內(nèi)容、書寫等等。那么常用的開頭有： ： is Thursday,It is 7 o’clock , my father is reading ： was rainy happened on a wet day of ： weekends we went out for a ： in Rome, do as the Romans ： we were tired, we felt very ’m proud of what I’ve everyone makes a contribution to protecting our environment , our world will bee much more hope you will have a wonderful ：當(dāng)然常用的開頭結(jié)尾還有不少，希望同學(xué)們多總結(jié)學(xué)習(xí)。師：很好。師：很對(duì)，2009年濰坊市初中學(xué)業(yè)水平考試考試書面表達(dá)題的要求是：豐富多彩的初中生活即將結(jié)束，有哪件事情讓你至今印象深刻，甚至難以忘懷？請(qǐng)以An unforgettable experience為題，寫一篇英語短文。（Tom went to a table tennis club.）Step3：師：接下來讓我們討論一下怎樣減少動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)或語態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。但我們常用的簡(jiǎn)單句的結(jié)構(gòu)有： 主語 + 謂語(及物動(dòng)詞)+ 賓語 People enjoy + 謂語(不及物動(dòng)詞)He often swims in a + 系動(dòng)詞 + 表語 You look ’m 、謂語、賓語、表語，注意他們的位置。Step2:師：怎樣減少出錯(cuò)呢？首先讓我們看一下常用的句子結(jié)構(gòu)。名詞、動(dòng)詞、形容詞、副詞/連詞等，也包含短語、不定式使用不當(dāng)。 very like music.→I like music very am want to be a doctor.→ I want to be a 、語態(tài)使用不當(dāng)。五． 教學(xué)過程： 導(dǎo)入：Step1：同學(xué)們，今天我們針對(duì)書面表達(dá)題進(jìn)行專項(xiàng)復(fù)習(xí)。從句子結(jié)構(gòu)、動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)、常用作文的開頭、結(jié)尾，到作文實(shí)戰(zhàn)練習(xí)，中考作文評(píng)析、作文修改。缺少系統(tǒng)的練習(xí)，學(xué)生對(duì)作文有畏懼心理，寫作方面的障礙自然就多了。三． 教材分析：外研版教材每個(gè)模塊后都設(shè)計(jì)了針對(duì)模塊內(nèi)容writing。錯(cuò)誤多，不連貫。英語書面表達(dá)題是學(xué)生比較頭疼的題型。s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment, and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this first thing we can do is to use cloth bags in stead of plastic bags when we go helps to protect the second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save 39。寫作提示：: 保護(hù)環(huán)境,減少污染,節(jié)約能源等 寫作要求: ,使文章連貫，, Can We Do for the Environment Hello, 39。,你怎樣回報(bào)父母, Dream in the Future I have a great want to be adoctor when I grow will work in the hospital in my the one hand, to work as a doctor is very important and a doctor can help people who are a doctor can help people to keep healthy and also help sick people enjoy their the other hand, I can keep not only other people but also my family they are ill, I can give them some advice on love my hometown and I love the people I want to be a must study hard so that I can learn more I may go to a medical I am a doctor, I will work hard and try my best to help other hope my dream will e 、最喜愛的學(xué)科1My Favourite Subject My favourite subject is Chinese like it because I have a lovely Chinese is very kind to teachers us very her classes are very interesting and Chinese class, I always listen carefully ahd take am not afraid of making mistakes in often read Chinese novels and watch the TV programQuiz Show after not only makes me know great Chinese culture and history, but also helps me improve my Chinese to my Chinese teacher, I will learn Chinese better!English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years at the very beginning,listening seemed a little difficult for I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV I found it really helped a fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from Englishspeaking believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into 、環(huán)保1從2008年6月1日起，國家將禁止商家免費(fèi)提供塑料供袋，從而掀起了全國性的“拒塑”環(huán)保運(yùn)動(dòng)。s respect, not to mention “friendship”.Finally, we must not be should learn how to show concern for long as we abide by get along well with mentioned above, we will find it easy九、夢(mèng)想1請(qǐng)你以未來計(jì)劃為話題, 。 opinions, for parents have richer experiences of should also try to exchange opinions with their 39。請(qǐng)根據(jù)中文提示，用英語寫一篇短文，把以上觀點(diǎn)正確表達(dá)出來，不少于90詞Parents and Children Parents and children often disagree with each want their children to listen to them and do what they ask their children to children want to be free to choose their friends, design their future and live a life in a more independent the disagreement between them can39。孩子們應(yīng)學(xué)會(huì)尊重父母，聆聽他們的意見，因?yàn)樗麄冇懈S富的人生閱歷（experiences）.父母也應(yīng)盡量和孩子交換（exchange）意見，不能過分地責(zé)備（scold）和打罵，那樣會(huì)使孩子遠(yuǎn)離父母。ll be obligea to it in the same way by some unseen habit is a habit is formed, it is difficult and sometimes almost impossible to get rid of is therefore very important that we should take care in the formation of habits have many to bed early and getting up early makes us helps to helps win the respect and trust of we form bad habits, such as rudeness, laziness, lying and stealing,we might be ruined by ought to keep away from bad habits and try to acquire habits good ourselves and 、關(guān)系處理1,按他們說的做,但孩子更愿意自己選擇朋友,自己設(shè)計(jì)(design)未來，更加獨(dú)立（independent）地生活，所以不和往往在所難免。t get out of them, which would waste time and do harm to their 39。網(wǎng)絡(luò)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)：課后放松，輔助學(xué)習(xí)，傳遞信息，開闊視野，網(wǎng)絡(luò)交友等…網(wǎng)絡(luò)的缺點(diǎn)：上網(wǎng)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)有害健康，沉迷網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲，不思學(xué)業(yè)，不良網(wǎng)站，誤導(dǎo)學(xué)業(yè)，虛擬網(wǎng)絡(luò)，真假難辨…Internet plays an important role in my daily it has both positive and negative the one hand, surfing the Internet is very easy and it is being more and more popular