【正文】 提示詞語(yǔ)： like, improve, help, introduce, share提示問(wèn)題： ● What’s your name and hobby?● Why do you want to be a host?● What are you going to do?Dear Sam,I’d like to be a host for the English Broadcasting Station （英語(yǔ)廣播站）. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________。北京中考模擬）假如你叫李華，學(xué)校英語(yǔ)廣播站正在招募主持人。文中in the natural world, not only…but also, get out, such as, also等詞（組）的恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；本文還采用了豐富的句型，比如：It is +形容詞+（for sb.） to do sth.；There be句型；時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，這是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。寫(xiě)作中注意連詞、固定短語(yǔ)的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語(yǔ)句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出人物的感想和看法。It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s great to get close to nature. 【答案】It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s a good way to get close to nature.When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the ing study or work.There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When you’re outside, it’s better to be with your parents or friends.【解析】試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)以“outdoor activities”為話題，結(jié)合所給的寫(xiě)作材料，寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)刊征文稿。為了倡導(dǎo)中學(xué)生接近大自然，某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)舉辦了一次征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下問(wèn)題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文參加征文。17．（它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。而Tianjin International Marathon was held on April 4,./Before the game, volunteers were given a think the experience is good for ，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，語(yǔ)態(tài)多樣，表達(dá)流暢，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。Ladies and gentlemen,My name is Li Ming. I’m very glad to talk about my wonderful experience. Tianjin International Marathon________________________________________________________【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,My name is Li Ming. I’m very glad to talk about my wonderful experience. Tianjin International Marathon was held on April 4,.Before the game, volunteers were given a training. In our spare time, we talked to the athletes in English to help we are friends with many the same time,we also learn about many different cultures.I think the experience is good for me.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿(mǎn)，表達(dá)流暢。（2）演講稿的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，用英文寫(xiě)一篇演講稿，談?wù)勥@一段美好的經(jīng)歷。get on well with相處融洽；help each other and learn from each other互相幫助，互相學(xué)習(xí)；with one’s help在某人的幫助下；in the future. 在未來(lái)；e true.（夢(mèng)想）成真16．（英語(yǔ)作文要注意人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)，注意提供的觀點(diǎn)、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過(guò)渡。_____________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve bee interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to bee one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others。請(qǐng)你給大家講一個(gè)最值得你回憶的故事。15．（寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，要點(diǎn)齊全，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會(huì)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用。、校名等相關(guān)信息。，并補(bǔ)充相關(guān)信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意:。江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)難忘的初中三年學(xué)習(xí)生活已經(jīng)接近尾聲，你一定既有收獲又有不足，也有許多對(duì)自己未來(lái)的期待。點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。寫(xiě)作中注意理順要點(diǎn)，防止漏寫(xiě)，注意表達(dá)的條理性、連貫性；注意不要犯語(yǔ)法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤；要使用自己有把握的句式、單詞，詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，避免句式單一。根據(jù)所給材料可知時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)用第一人稱(chēng)。為使?jié)鲜腥脒x全國(guó)文明城市，鞏固文明城市創(chuàng)建成果，共建美好濟(jì)南，濟(jì)南市團(tuán)委開(kāi)展“學(xué)雷鋒、講文明、樹(shù)新風(fēng)”的活動(dòng)，作為一名中學(xué)生，我們平時(shí)應(yīng)該規(guī)范自己的言行舉止。、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。倡導(dǎo)低碳騎自行車(chē)或步行上學(xué)，注意節(jié)約……保護(hù)環(huán)境愛(ài)護(hù)花草，不亂扔垃圾…… 禮貌待人常說(shuō)“謝謝”、“ 對(duì)不起”、“ 請(qǐng)”等禮貌語(yǔ)言……幫助他人助人為樂(lè)，積極參加志愿者活動(dòng)……要求： 。為鞏固文明城市創(chuàng)建成果，共建美好濟(jì)南，濟(jì)南市團(tuán)委正在開(kāi)展“學(xué)雷鋒、講文明、樹(shù)新風(fēng)”的活動(dòng)，作為一名中學(xué)生，我們平時(shí)應(yīng)該從以下幾個(gè)方面來(lái)規(guī)范自己的言行舉止。13．（ What’s more, feel proud of； in order to； give up ；keep on trying. ； It is important to keep on trying and never to give up等；so ；so最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。靈活運(yùn)用各種句式，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各個(gè)要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)一封祝賀信，表達(dá)你的真誠(chéng)祝賀，回憶他比賽時(shí)的表現(xiàn)，以及你從他身上學(xué)到了什么。12．（ （4）注意書(shū)寫(xiě)的規(guī)范：大小寫(xiě)，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。（3）切忌堆砌詞語(yǔ)，句子，注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢，連貫。（2）注意給出的起始句（這就給出了時(shí)態(tài)），學(xué)生運(yùn)用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，運(yùn)用所給或所學(xué)的詞語(yǔ)，盡量運(yùn)用熟悉的句型。點(diǎn)睛：這是一