【正文】 17．（“What’s more”也被合理使用到了，意為“此外”，避免與besides重復(fù)，體現(xiàn)了文章語(yǔ)言的多樣性。連詞的使用也是亮點(diǎn)，besides意為“除此之外”。第二段開(kāi)始描述優(yōu)勢(shì)，這里用到了“無(wú)論什么時(shí)候你喜歡/想要”（whenever you like）結(jié)構(gòu)，在表達(dá)“...是開(kāi)放的”也很準(zhǔn)確，用了“be open”。具體來(lái)說(shuō)，每個(gè)觀點(diǎn)在陳述的時(shí)候要注意表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。價(jià)格較便宜。，可以在家買東西，不受時(shí)間限制。16．（根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。d like to travel alone．I want to spend enough time visiting the places I like． In this way, I can enjoy my vacation better．【解析】這是一篇圖表，要求談?wù)勛约簩?duì)不同的旅游方式的看法。s more, it39。t need to look for hotels or restaurants by themselves．Besides, they can make friends and help each other while travelling．However, other students prefer to travel alone． That39。s help, they won39。團(tuán)隊(duì)旅游◆有導(dǎo)游，不會(huì)迷路；◆不必自己找食宿◆結(jié)識(shí)朋友，互相幫助個(gè)人旅游◆自由安排時(shí)間；◆選擇自己喜歡的旅游景點(diǎn)；◆學(xué)會(huì)照顧自己你的想法……注意事項(xiàng)：1．文章必須包括表中全部?jī)?nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；2．想法至少在兩句以上；3．詞數(shù)90左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)在英語(yǔ)課上，同學(xué)們就自己喜歡的旅游方式展開(kāi)了討論。點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。在寫作的時(shí)候，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。要注意郵件的寫作格式，根據(jù)題目要求可判斷文章時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用一般將來(lái)時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱和第二人稱。Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit China Science and Technology Museum with my class. We will meet at the school gate at 8:00 . this Friday. Then we will go to China Science and Technology Museum together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only do some experiments but also watch some wonderful inventions. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You’d better take some food and drinks with you. I39。 I39。What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?Dear Peter,How is it going? What are you going to do there? food and drink提示問(wèn)題:When and where are you going to meet?knowledge, invention, 提示詞語(yǔ): school gate, 你打算邀請(qǐng)交換生Peter參加。請(qǐng)不要寫出你的校名和姓名。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。14．（高分句型【3】Working closely with schools is another important way for parents to help them. 與學(xué)校緊密合作是家長(zhǎng)幫助他們的另一重要途徑。此句是含有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。動(dòng)詞不定式to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the 。符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)題目要求，短文是一篇議論文，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第三人稱。我們只要用英語(yǔ)正確的把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)就行。學(xué)校要做些什么；，如運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)，外出游玩等；, ……； 家長(zhǎng)要做些什么，多陪伴，……；，……；學(xué)生要做些什么……（至少兩點(diǎn)）注意 ，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章連貫；，短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)總詞數(shù)；；Last week our school had a discussion on How to keep students away from too many puter games .The students have different opinions.【答案】Last week our school had a discussion on how to keep students away from too many puter games. The students have different opinions. They think that their school may have class meetings to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. Also, good outschool activities should be held regularly in their school, such as having a sports meeting every term and organizing a school trip every year. Besides, teachers can municate with those students who are crazy about games and those who often lose themselves in chatting online as often as possible.When they are at home, they think parents should set examples to them. Fathers and mothers must spend less time on their mobile phones. And then they are able to spare time for their kids and even stay with them most of the time. Working closely with schools is another important way for parents to help them.As students, just as the saying goes:“Study must e first”. They should pay more attention on their studies. They ought to try their best to achieve a balance between play and studies.【解析】這是一篇話題作文。上周你們學(xué)校開(kāi)展了一次以“How to keep students away from too many puter games ”為主題的專題討論。13．（有些句子較長(zhǎng)，是由于使用高級(jí)句型所致，一味使用較長(zhǎng)的句子也會(huì)導(dǎo)致文章的冗長(zhǎng)，讓讀者感覺(jué)比較累，因此要注意調(diào)整文章的節(jié)奏。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱，文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)為主，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范。短文作者選擇了正方的觀點(diǎn)，第一句話先點(diǎn)明自己的觀點(diǎn)是什么，接下來(lái)圍繞這一觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行闡述，并從自己的經(jīng)歷出發(fā)，闡述了自己持有這一觀點(diǎn)的理由，充分、合理，有說(shuō)服力。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。寫作時(shí)還應(yīng)注意的是語(yǔ)言的表達(dá)，英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，我們不能按照漢語(yǔ)思維，逐詞翻譯，而是從句子的整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型，多用簡(jiǎn)單句，如主謂賓、主系表的結(jié)構(gòu)，點(diǎn)綴幾個(gè)復(fù)合句或并列句，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，讓文章的句子富于變化，有新鮮感。寫作之前，我們應(yīng)先從正方和反方中選擇一個(gè)，作為自己的觀點(diǎn)，然后圍繞這一觀點(diǎn)闡述自己的理由?！敬鸢浮縊ne possible version：At home, I think teenagers should make their own choices. Learning to make our own choices can help us to be more independent.After I entered junior high school, I made every choice on my study, from which reference books to buy to how to plan time for study. Unlike other students, I didn’t need my parents to be with me when I was studying. With the development of this learning habit, I soon realized that I could do better in study than other classmates who often depended on teachers and parents. Before making every choice, I carefully considered the advantages and disadvantages of my actions and in that way, I grew up independently.There is no wonder that we will grow up some day and live on our own. Although parents undoubtedly care about us, we still need to make our own decisions when it es to our personal things. Everyone needs to learn to grow up to get prepared for future life.【解析】這篇作文要求我們寫一篇議論文，論點(diǎn)是：在我們自己的事情上，我們應(yīng)該自己做決定，還是由家長(zhǎng)來(lái)做決定。（只能選擇一方觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)。你認(rèn)為在我們自己的事情上應(yīng)該自己做決定，還是聽(tīng)從家長(zhǎng)的意見(jiàn)？針對(duì)這一話題，九年級(jí)七班的同學(xué)們展開(kāi)了辯論。山西中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)請(qǐng)將作文寫在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。此處would like to, enjoy doing sth, learn from, take part in, such as, look after, allow sb to do sth, let sb do sth, look forward to 等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I39。m glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________