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如“江兩岸鄉(xiāng)、村同時(shí)發(fā)生洪水”，江兩岸所有村莊都遭受洪災(zāi)似不可能，“同時(shí)發(fā)生”更不可能。二、內(nèi)容含糊這是由于原文混淆了報(bào)告和請示的界限而造成的。銀行市支行一九九八年月日一、文種選擇有誤從標(biāo)題看，這篇公文是向省行提出災(zāi)區(qū)貸款專項(xiàng)指標(biāo)的申請，目的是獲得省行的批準(zhǔn)。到月日止，此項(xiàng)貸款已達(dá)萬元。災(zāi)后，我們立即深入災(zāi)區(qū)了解災(zāi)情，并發(fā)動干部群眾積極開展生產(chǎn)自救。應(yīng)用漢字。4.“英勇歹徒”的表達(dá)有誤。為此決定：授予同志先進(jìn)工作者稱號。四是時(shí)間要用漢字，不能用阿拉伯?dāng)?shù)字。二是標(biāo)題不合要求。市政府在積存了某鄉(xiāng)四件請示之后，才合在一起給了這樣一個(gè)批復(fù)，這樣做有多種弊端：（1）延誤時(shí)間，耽誤下級工作；（2）多種事項(xiàng)集于一篇公文之中，內(nèi)容雜亂；（3）一份公文涉及多方面工作，給下級落實(shí)帶來困難。其二，你鎮(zhèn)提出試行“關(guān)于違反計(jì)劃生育規(guī)定的處罰辦法”最好不執(zhí)行，因?yàn)檫@個(gè)辦法違反上級有關(guān)文件精神。作者在這里顯然犯了自相矛盾的錯(cuò)誤，違背了形式邏輯中的不矛盾律。當(dāng)前，首先要抓好第一季度的工作，以便為全年工作打下基礎(chǔ)。本批發(fā)第一項(xiàng)、第四項(xiàng)由你局在1995年12月15日前發(fā)布。三、語言不準(zhǔn)確文中有多處語言不確切。因此，綜合起來看，這篇公文應(yīng)改為《關(guān)于撥給災(zāi)區(qū)貸款專項(xiàng)指標(biāo)的請示》。以上報(bào)告當(dāng)否，請批示。二、對受災(zāi)嚴(yán)重的困難戶，優(yōu)先適當(dāng)貸款，先幫助他們解決生活問題。經(jīng)初步不完全統(tǒng)計(jì)，農(nóng)田受災(zāi)總面積達(dá)38000多畝，各種農(nóng)作物損失達(dá)100多萬元，農(nóng)民個(gè)人損失也很大。應(yīng)分兩行排列。2.“今年初”這一時(shí)間概念表達(dá)不當(dāng)，應(yīng)改為“1990年初”。各省、自治區(qū)、直轄市人民政府：今年初，枝江縣董鎮(zhèn)信用社職工同志為保衛(wèi)國家財(cái)產(chǎn)，面對英勇歹徒，頑強(qiáng)搏斗，最后擒獲歹徒。如“原則同意”、“最好不執(zhí)行”、“違反上級有關(guān)文件精神”，都沒有明確指出自己的觀點(diǎn)，使下級無法執(zhí)行。對方的四份請求，應(yīng)有四份相應(yīng)的批復(fù)。市人民政府 2001年月日一是違反一文一批的原則。你鎮(zhèn)應(yīng)盡快使聯(lián)合貿(mào)易公司開始營業(yè)。因?yàn)椤把芯坑懻摗币馕吨D(zhuǎn)發(fā)對象尚不成熟，還沒有達(dá)到“執(zhí)行”的程度；而“貫徹執(zhí)行”卻意味著轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)對象已經(jīng)成熟，已經(jīng)沒有“研究討論”的必要了。中國人民銀行市分行 位置關(guān)于轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)總行《儲蓄工作座談會紀(jì)要》的通知 銀發(fā)［2002］號 現(xiàn)將總行的《儲蓄工作座談會紀(jì)要》轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)給你們，請立即組織研究，展開討論，并根據(jù)《紀(jì)要》精神，認(rèn)真貫徹執(zhí)行。8）發(fā)文機(jī)關(guān)（印章）與發(fā)文日期位置左錯(cuò) 9)發(fā)文時(shí)間不能超過發(fā)文機(jī)關(guān)十、主題詞 1）沒有主題詞2）太少或太多，35，不超7(尚未找到明確根據(jù))重要公文制發(fā)單位只能是辦公室 歷年公考公文改錯(cuò)真題公文改錯(cuò)題(指出下列公文的8處錯(cuò)誤)抬頭 關(guān)于辦理商標(biāo)注冊附送證件問題的批復(fù)主送機(jī)關(guān) 某某《關(guān)于辦理商標(biāo)注冊附送證件問題的請示》收悉，國務(wù)院大致同意關(guān)于辦理商標(biāo)變更、轉(zhuǎn)讓或者續(xù)展注冊時(shí)不再附送原商標(biāo)注冊證的意見，但考慮到這一問題涉及《商標(biāo)法實(shí)施細(xì)則》的修改，特批復(fù)如下，盼遵照執(zhí)行。特別是上行文結(jié)尾催辦，請即批復(fù)等六、一些人稱的用法，再寫單位，職稱等，隨附名單要先列出某某人七、抄送請示未獲批準(zhǔn)抄送下級?！胺从场背闪恕傲餮浴?，“發(fā)布”成了“散布” 。1）；2）修飾連系動詞或名詞用形容詞；3）修飾行為動詞、形容詞、過去分詞及整個(gè)句子用副詞。浙江卷）Late on, my aunt drove me home.（2011d like to make a trip to our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide.（2011二、真題單句歸納, by the time I got back, they had finished the scene and the actor couldn39。全國II） manding officer,Wayne Tyler,who was directly responsible for the study of all such repsorts,decided to make his findings wrote an article,which said that all UFO reports could be explained quite naturally by aircraft movements.（2011遼寧卷）三、模擬單句演練（1）Her sister, who is nurse, will marry one of the doctors in the hospital.（2）It was such wonderful dinner that we enjoyed it very much.（3）It was raining hard, so I had to borrow a umbrella.（4）My friend Mary es from an European country.（5）Mr Smith used to be physics teacher till he turned writer.（6）In the word, he is a good student and all of us like him.（7）People made the fun of her because she wore such strange clothes.（8）You don39。其中,涉及最多的是,當(dāng)一個(gè)單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞表示泛指時(shí),其前漏用不定冠詞；另外,冠詞在一些習(xí)語中的用法也是一個(gè)重要考點(diǎn)。全國新課標(biāo)卷） the help of Katia, a roommate of mine, I′ve soon got used to live without my parents 、改正方法：1）謂語動詞和非謂語動詞的錯(cuò)用；2）動詞不定式和動名詞的錯(cuò)用；3）現(xiàn)在分詞和過去分詞的錯(cuò)用等。四川卷） had time for a proper breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.（2011陜西卷） brother was so fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying another couple of days.（2011ve planted thousands of trees along the river.（6）At the airport where all the baggage must be examined.（7）He wrote me a letter and asked I was getting on.（8）She stayed in France for 10 39。2）根據(jù)句子的邏輯關(guān)系確定錯(cuò)誤。re both surprised that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different.（2011遼寧卷） boss wanted to fire him if he didn39。t have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get it.（2011d always wanted.（2011全國II）, however, on Monday, January 16, a science fiction film about visitors to outer space was shown on television,there was an immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States.（2011s most valuable possession.（3）In some places you may borrow many books as you want.（4）We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ourselves.（5）My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a good education.（6）There is public library in every town in Britain.（7）But then there is always more mysteries look into.（8）I39。全國新課標(biāo)卷） put into my pocket when he wasn39。t have my camera with me at that time, so I rushed back home to get.（2011重慶卷）三、模擬單句演練（1）David pointed to a path which it he thought would probably lead to a village.（2）Modern people know more about the health, have better food, and live in clearer surroundings.（3）Most people can quickly get for help from a doctor or go to a hospital when they are ill.（4）As a result, people in the modern world generally live much more longer than people in the past.（5）I never knew about a ride down a river could be so exciting.（6）Today I visited the Smiths — my first time visit to an American family.（7）I39。s he lent to me lots of clothes.（2011全國II） wrote an article,which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements.（2011全國新課標(biāo)卷）,like many other Russian girls, are nice and lively.（2011d like to your penfriend, and get to know more about your country.（6）They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of questions.（7）Because of so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of reading and the ability to enjoy themselves.（8）What your favourite sport？（9）I use to play pingpong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interested in football.（10）I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each 一、考點(diǎn)規(guī)律分析從廣義來說,英語中的一致問題涉及多個(gè)方面,如主謂一致、人稱的一致、并列結(jié)構(gòu)的前后一致等。陜西卷）, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon.（2011ll stay at home playing cards if it will rain tomorrow.（7）Work hard and you pass the final exam.（8）It39。要注意聯(lián)系上下文,著眼于整個(gè)語篇的時(shí)態(tài)。全國新課標(biāo)卷） knows what had happened, but she thanked me and never mentioned it again.（2011二、真題單句歸納, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and actor couldn39。s one of the most interesting book that I39。四、模擬單句演練（1）Women live longer than men in most country.（2）The film is very have seen it many time.（3）It39。全國新課標(biāo)卷） was playing at my cousin house.（2011全國II） early January this year, the rate of UFO reports was steady