【正文】 ，隨附名單要先列出某某人七、抄送請示未獲批準(zhǔn)抄送下級。中國人民銀行市分行 位置關(guān)于轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)總行《儲蓄工作座談會紀(jì)要》的通知 銀發(fā)［2002］號 現(xiàn)將總行的《儲蓄工作座談會紀(jì)要》轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)給你們，請立即組織研究，展開討論，并根據(jù)《紀(jì)要》精神，認(rèn)真貫徹執(zhí)行。你鎮(zhèn)應(yīng)盡快使聯(lián)合貿(mào)易公司開始營業(yè)。對方的四份請求，應(yīng)有四份相應(yīng)的批復(fù)。各省、自治區(qū)、直轄市人民政府：今年初，枝江縣董鎮(zhèn)信用社職工同志為保衛(wèi)國家財產(chǎn)，面對英勇歹徒，頑強(qiáng)搏斗，最后擒獲歹徒。應(yīng)分兩行排列。二、對受災(zāi)嚴(yán)重的困難戶，優(yōu)先適當(dāng)貸款，先幫助他們解決生活問題。因此，綜合起來看，這篇公文應(yīng)改為《關(guān)于撥給災(zāi)區(qū)貸款專項指標(biāo)的請示》。本批發(fā)第一項、第四項由你局在1995年12月15日前發(fā)布。作者在這里顯然犯了自相矛盾的錯誤，違背了形式邏輯中的不矛盾律。市政府在積存了某鄉(xiāng)四件請示之后，才合在一起給了這樣一個批復(fù)，這樣做有多種弊端：（1）延誤時間，耽誤下級工作；（2）多種事項集于一篇公文之中，內(nèi)容雜亂；（3）一份公文涉及多方面工作，給下級落實(shí)帶來困難。四是時間要用漢字，不能用阿拉伯?dāng)?shù)字。4.“英勇歹徒”的表達(dá)有誤。災(zāi)后，我們立即深入災(zāi)區(qū)了解災(zāi)情，并發(fā)動干部群眾積極開展生產(chǎn)自救。銀行市支行一九九八年月日一、文種選擇有誤從標(biāo)題看，這篇公文是向省行提出災(zāi)區(qū)貸款專項指標(biāo)的申請，目的是獲得省行的批準(zhǔn)。如“江兩岸鄉(xiāng)、村同時發(fā)生洪水”，江兩岸所有村莊都遭受洪災(zāi)似不可能，“同時發(fā)生”更不可能。二、內(nèi)容含糊這是由于原文混淆了報告和請示的界限而造成的。到月日止，此項貸款已達(dá)萬元。應(yīng)用漢字。為此決定：授予同志先進(jìn)工作者稱號。二是標(biāo)題不合要求。其二，你鎮(zhèn)提出試行“關(guān)于違反計劃生育規(guī)定的處罰辦法”最好不執(zhí)行，因?yàn)檫@個辦法違反上級有關(guān)文件精神。當(dāng)前，首先要抓好第一季度的工作，以便為全年工作打下基礎(chǔ)。三、語言不準(zhǔn)確文中有多處語言不確切。以上報告當(dāng)否，請批示。經(jīng)初步不完全統(tǒng)計，農(nóng)田受災(zāi)總面積達(dá)38000多畝，各種農(nóng)作物損失達(dá)100多萬元，農(nóng)民個人損失也很大。2.“今年初”這一時間概念表達(dá)不當(dāng)，應(yīng)改為“1990年初”。如“原則同意”、“最好不執(zhí)行”、“違反上級有關(guān)文件精神”，都沒有明確指出自己的觀點(diǎn)，使下級無法執(zhí)行。市人民政府 2001年月日一是違反一文一批的原則。因?yàn)椤把芯坑懻摗币馕吨D(zhuǎn)發(fā)對象尚不成熟，還沒有達(dá)到“執(zhí)行”的程度；而“貫徹執(zhí)行”卻意味著轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)對象已經(jīng)成熟，已經(jīng)沒有“研究討論”的必要了。8）發(fā)文機(jī)關(guān)（印章）與發(fā)文日期位置左錯 9)發(fā)文時間不能超過發(fā)文機(jī)關(guān)十、主題詞 1）沒有主題詞2）太少或太多，35，不超7(尚未找到明確根據(jù))重要公文制發(fā)單位只能是辦公室 歷年公考公文改錯真題公文改錯題(指出下列公文的8處錯誤)抬頭 關(guān)于辦理商標(biāo)注冊附送證件問題的批復(fù)主送機(jī)關(guān) 某某《關(guān)于辦理商標(biāo)注冊附送證件問題的請示》收悉，國務(wù)院大致同意關(guān)于辦理商標(biāo)變更、轉(zhuǎn)讓或者續(xù)展注冊時不再附送原商標(biāo)注冊證的意見，但考慮到這一問題涉及《商標(biāo)法實(shí)施細(xì)則》的修改，特批復(fù)如下，盼遵照執(zhí)行?！胺从场背闪恕傲餮浴?，“發(fā)布”成了“散布” 。1）；2）修飾連系動詞或名詞用形容詞；3）修飾行為動詞、形容詞、過去分詞及整個句子用副詞。d like to make a trip to our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide.（2011全國II） manding officer,Wayne Tyler,who was directly responsible for the study of all such repsorts,decided to make his findings wrote an article,which said that all UFO reports could be explained quite naturally by aircraft movements.（2011其中,涉及最多的是,當(dāng)一個單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞表示泛指時,其前漏用不定冠詞；另外,冠詞在一些習(xí)語中的用法也是一個重要考點(diǎn)。四川卷） had time for a proper breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.（2011ve planted thousands of trees along the river.（6）At the airport where all the baggage must be examined.（7）He wrote me a letter and asked I was getting on.（8）She stayed in France for 10 39。re both surprised that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different.（2011t have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get it.（2011全國II）, however, on Monday, January 16, a science fiction film about visitors to outer space was shown on television,there was an immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States.（2011全國新課標(biāo)卷） put into my pocket when he wasn39。重慶卷）三、模擬單句演練（1）David pointed to a path which it he thought would probably lead to a village.（2）Modern people know more about the health, have better food, and live in clearer surroundings.（3）Most people can quickly get for help from a doctor or go to a hospital when they are ill.（4）As a result, people in the modern world generally live much more longer than people in the past.（5）I never knew about a ride down a river could be so exciting.（6）Today I visited the Smiths — my first time visit to an American family.（7）I39。全國II） wrote an article,which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements.（2011d like to your penfriend, and get to know more about your country.（6）They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of questions.（7）Because of so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of reading and the ability to enjoy themselves.（8）What your favourite sport？（9）I use to play pingpong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interested in football.（10）I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each 一、考點(diǎn)規(guī)律分析從廣義來說,英語中的一致問題涉及多個方面,如主謂一致、人稱的一致、并列結(jié)構(gòu)的前后一致等。ll stay at home playing cards if it will rain tomorrow.（7）Work hard and you pass the final exam.（8）It39。全國新課標(biāo)卷） knows what had happened, but she thanked me and never mentioned it again.（2011s one of the most interesting book that I39。全國新課標(biāo)卷） was playing at my cousin house.（2011d done something on, my aunt drove me she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.第三篇：高考英語短文改錯高考真題單句分類訓(xùn)練高考英語短文改錯高考真題單句分類訓(xùn)練名詞一、考點(diǎn)規(guī)律分析短文改錯的名詞考點(diǎn)主要涉及名詞的單復(fù)數(shù),即在該用復(fù)數(shù)的地方誤用其單數(shù),或在該用單數(shù)的地方誤用其復(fù)數(shù)。注意：。第一篇：2011年高考改錯真題改錯真題1.（2011?陜西卷）短文改錯（共10小題；，滿分15分）Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite didn’t have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to , by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and actor couldn’t be seen was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a was right there in the front of me!I couldn’t believe my lucknot only did I had my photo taken wuth him, but he signed his name on my shirt!2.（2011?全國II）短文改錯（共10小題；，滿分15分）Dear George, It39。，以使行文連貫。二、真題單句歸納 Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew making a new film with one of my favourite actor.（2011浙江卷） her English is a little hard to understand, we enjoy chatting and we usually talk a lot about our own family.（2011ve ever read.（10）Hearing the news, the woman burst into 一、考點(diǎn)規(guī)律分析動詞時態(tài)考點(diǎn)主要涉及一般現(xiàn)在時與一般過去的區(qū)別,其命題方式通常是在一個一般現(xiàn)在時的背景下誤用某個一般過去時；或者反過來,在一個一般過去時的背景下誤用某個一般現(xiàn)在時。浙江卷） became friends shortly after we meet each other.（2011s years since I e here in China for my further 一、動詞考點(diǎn)規(guī)律分析動詞考點(diǎn)歸納的是除動詞時態(tài)與非謂語動詞之外的動詞考點(diǎn),它包括被動語態(tài)、情態(tài)動詞、動詞形式的變化、動詞用法辨析、動詞 be 的誤加與漏用等。由于人稱的一致已歸入“代詞”考點(diǎn)、并列結(jié)構(gòu)的前后一致已分別歸入非謂語動詞、時態(tài)等,所以這里只歸納主謂一致問題。遼寧卷） boss wanted to fire him if he didn39。ll spend all the whole weekend reading 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