【正文】 lass and good ’s more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, which has a great attraction to young college , parents’ spoiling their children helps form their bad consumption habit。As far as I am concerned, it is irrational for college students to pursue famous all, most of famous brands are far beyond their consumption , it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really makes him high , college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character rather than pursuing famous brands。We Need to Broaden Our Knowledge范文：本文來(lái)源:考試大網(wǎng)Knowledge is power, especially scientific and technological and technology are the motive power of the social them human society could never have developed from primitive society to modern , to conquer and transform nature, we must master scientific , social knowledge is also it we can not understand society and don＇t know the law of the social a result we are unable to tovern , besides scientific knowledge we need to master social science, philosophy, politics, history, aesthetics, etc, so that we can know society from all perspectives and form a correct world meet new challenges in he 21st century, we university students should lose no time to acquire as much knowledge as possible so that we will bee qualified successors of the socialist cause.第四篇：沖刺大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)——寫(xiě)作篇馬上就要迎來(lái)一年兩度的大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試了，還沒(méi)有開(kāi)始復(fù)習(xí)的童鞋們看看重點(diǎn)吧~~因?yàn)榇蠹椰F(xiàn)在都用智能手機(jī)，為了方便大家在地鐵、公交、食堂等地方學(xué)習(xí)，我找了一個(gè)軟件把這些資料轉(zhuǎn)成安卓格式，大家用手機(jī)下載就可以直接觀看學(xué)習(xí)，每天積累一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)，兩周以后就是見(jiàn)證奇跡的時(shí)刻呦~~2014年英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫(xiě)作十大必備范文匯總：十大四級(jí)作文題材預(yù)測(cè)：第五篇：大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試寫(xiě)作指南大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試寫(xiě)作指南:現(xiàn)象闡釋型本文作者： 趙子凌這類(lèi)寫(xiě)作類(lèi)型是以當(dāng)下比較流行的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象為話(huà)題展開(kāi)的寫(xiě)作。一般題目即為現(xiàn)象，要求考生對(duì)現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行較為詳盡的闡釋?zhuān)ǚ治鲈摤F(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因或可能帶來(lái)的后果，并要求考生談?wù)勛约簩?duì)于該現(xiàn)象的看法或建議?；窘忸}思路：描述現(xiàn)象，分析原因，自己對(duì)這個(gè)現(xiàn)象的看法。但有時(shí)提綱結(jié)構(gòu)會(huì)稍加變化，第二部分要求分析后果而不是原因，寫(xiě)作時(shí)以具體提綱為準(zhǔn)。以2007年12月四級(jí)寫(xiě)作真題為例：Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a position on the topic What Electives to should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in ??審題根據(jù)題目中所給的中英文提示，可知話(huà)題是大學(xué)生非常熟悉的“選修課的選擇”。因此考生在寫(xiě)的時(shí)候可以結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況進(jìn)行分析，這樣易于下手。中文提綱中的三個(gè)句子分別對(duì)應(yīng)article的三個(gè)段落，可以作為各段落的主題句。擴(kuò)展提綱“各個(gè)大學(xué)開(kāi)設(shè)了多種多樣的選修課”這一現(xiàn)象。，如有的同學(xué)是出于興趣，有的是為以后求職做準(zhǔn)備。范文Nowadays, colleges offer a wide range of elective courses for from different departments may sit in the same classroom and study a subject that may have nothing to do with their is no doubt that elective courses are weled by students, but the reasons for each student to make his/her own choice students choose a course merely out of their personal interest in a certain field, while others may take the utility of the course into consideration and expect to put what they have learnt into practice after students are inclined to choose courses they are familiar with in order to get a good score in the exam, while others do not care about the exam and choose a course in a little known , I’d like to learn from elective courses some knowledge useful for my future courses can provide a chance to learn about other professions and give me broader I can prove my training in business but also have courses in science, I may just win a job over those who strictly majored in business with no other interests.(195 words)老師評(píng)：這篇文章感覺(jué)只是一篇中規(guī)守距的短文，主要問(wèn)題是沒(méi)有按四六級(jí)作文三段結(jié)構(gòu)來(lái)寫(xiě)，表達(dá)不夠多樣性。選修課在英文中可以表達(dá)為：electives, elective courses, optional, optional courses。專(zhuān)業(yè)可以用majors, departments, programs。練習(xí)題2011年6月四級(jí)寫(xiě)作真題 Online Shopping ，但也有不少問(wèn)題 四級(jí)作文高分秘訣首先要保證審題正確，以免跑題。提綱式作文是四級(jí)作文中很常見(jiàn)的一種題型，建議考生在讀題過(guò)程中將提綱中的關(guān)鍵詞劃出來(lái)，從而明確方向。寫(xiě)作文最怕的是言之無(wú)物，干癟無(wú)味?？忌Ｒ?jiàn)的問(wèn)題是觀點(diǎn)確定后無(wú)法展開(kāi)論證。針對(duì)這個(gè)問(wèn)題，建議考生在平時(shí)廣泛地閱讀報(bào)刊雜志，有效擴(kuò)充自己的文化背景知識(shí)，有意識(shí)地積累名人軼事等素材。這與死記硬背范文有明顯區(qū)別。要想四級(jí)作文出彩。一個(gè)小竅門(mén)就是注意所用語(yǔ)言的多樣性。因?yàn)樗募?jí)作文的篇幅不長(zhǎng)，所以盡量不要讓同一個(gè)單詞反復(fù)出現(xiàn)。為了避免單詞的重復(fù)使用，我們可以使用近義詞或者同義的短語(yǔ)。如“主要的原因”：main reasons。Main可以替換為primary, essential, crucial，indispensable，fundamental。豐富多變的用詞是article的最大亮點(diǎn)。在句式方面，要避免單一的簡(jiǎn)單句型，可以適當(dāng)加入倒裝句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、插入語(yǔ)等句式，做到句式多樣化，為article加分。作文評(píng)分知多少？四級(jí)作文滿(mǎn)分15分，閱卷老師從內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言?xún)蓚€(gè)方面進(jìn)行綜合評(píng)判，就總的印象給出獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)分：按五個(gè)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)給分，一般不會(huì)低于2分，但其他分，如15分也是會(huì)有的。報(bào)道分和翻譯合并在一起，計(jì)算機(jī)自動(dòng)加權(quán)處理為總分710分的20%（142分），但我看到的最好成績(jī)是130多分。標(biāo)準(zhǔn)如下：2分 — 條理不清，思路紊亂，語(yǔ)言支離破碎或有多處嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。5分 — 基本切題。思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。8分 — 基本切題。部分思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫；語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤頗多，包括一些嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。11分 — 切題。思想清楚，文字連貫，有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。14分 — 切題。思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，語(yǔ)言?xún)H有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。(注：“嚴(yán)重語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤”包括句子結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤、時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤和用詞錯(cuò)誤，嚴(yán)重影響作者意思的表達(dá)。)一般來(lái)說(shuō)，離要求詞數(shù)每少10個(gè)扣一分（按一行算）。總詞數(shù)超過(guò)要求一般不會(huì)扣分，但這并不意味著詞數(shù)越多越好，建議控制在150180詞左右。明顯筆誤不扣分。