【正文】 er part in take a fuller part in society, women leave their homes as time 、避免一個“I”寫到底初學(xué)英文寫作的人的另一通病是一個“I”寫到底，句首僵硬，缺乏變化。試讀下面這段文章：One thing in particular I remember made me feel grateful toward my mother was that one day I went and asked her for my own garden, and she let me have my own little love it and take care of it loved especially to grow was proud when we had them on our would pull out the grass in my garden by hand when the first little blades came would patrol the rows on my hands and knees for any worms and bugs, and I would kill and bury “I”。當(dāng)然上文若出自一個幼童筆下，倒不乏天真純樸的趣味。不妨改寫如下：According to my recollection, one thing in particular that made me feel grateful toward my mother was the day I went and asked her for my own garden, and she did let me have my own little love it and take care of it well, especially the growing of them on the table made me would pull out the grass in my garden by hand when the first little blades came up and would patrol the rows on my hands and knees for any worms and bugs, killing them and burying “I”，一看就出自成人手筆。三、注意句子的緊湊性，可以將兩句中相同的成分省略，形成并列句，從而使句子更加緊湊。這也就是省略結(jié)構(gòu)所表達出的英文的緊湊性。需要注意的是兩句中形成對應(yīng)關(guān)系的something要完全一致才可以省略，而且與相同成分相關(guān)的短語（主要是動詞短語中的介詞）不可以省略。另外，如果表示比較結(jié)構(gòu)的句子前后有相同成分，而且此成分有短語修飾，后面的相同成分要由代詞來置換，而不能直接將其省略。（如下面的例句三）例句： They should acquire knowledge not only from books but also from the ，還要從社會中汲取知識。Either Sally must be responsible for the matter or we’ll be(responsible for the matter).或者賽麗對此事負責(zé)，或者由我們來承擔(dān)責(zé)任。The population of this country is three times as large as that of its 。（漢語可以說是它鄰國的三倍，但英語一定要說是它鄰國的人口的三倍，這也是英語較為漢語更為嚴密的一種表現(xiàn)）。這里我們介紹一下in which在條件句中的用法，它相當(dāng)于條件句的引導(dǎo)詞if，這時可譯作“如果．．．那么．．．”或“當(dāng)．．．時”。例句：An ensemble that performs B in which the other performs A is excused from the rehearsal after that （樂曲）時，那麼演奏B（樂曲）的樂團就有充分的理由不去彩排了。第五篇：大學(xué)英語四六級高分作文第一類：問題解決型，如環(huán)境污染，大學(xué)生是否該兼職，大量使用塑料袋等提出問題分析原因或說明弊端解決問題（歸納總結(jié)，預(yù)測趨勢，建議措施）第一段好一點的開頭語句：Nowadaypeople’focusisattractedonthe issueof……/Nowadaypeopleingrowingnumbersarebeginningrelizethat……/Nowadayit is widelyacknowledgedthat……第二段好一點的開頭語句：Thereason for this is not far …….Second…….Third……/There are serveal reasons/elements/factors/causeseatedas follow…… 接下來寫原因或者好處如以下語句可以用Oneof the benefits is that…….But it has a hamful effect on on……/The significant benfit/harm is……（注：此句中significant就是important的意思，四六級寫作中禁用significant，因為那個詞太低端的，沒有得分點。同理也禁用People）第一段好三點的開頭語句：Based on the above statements/From what we have discussed/Judging from theabove can predict the tendency that……/We may safely draw a conclusion that……建議結(jié)尾：Evidenced, it is high time that we took measure toslove this issue /problem/Immediate measures must be taken before it getstoo serious/late第二類：正反觀點型第一段觀點AWhen asked about……/When to es ^/faced with…………many people believethat ……,they think/hold/argue/claim/maintain/advocate………………/When it es to ^people’s opinions hokd the opinion that……….There is ageneral discussion today about the issue of………….These who advocate…………argue that…………第二段：while others think /believe …………三段：Weighting the pros and cons of this arguments,I am inclined to agree the former/latter point of view that…………/In my ipinion /To my mind /As for a balance view /a bination of the two is a better choice.…………