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at attraction to young college :在世界上或許沒有什么游戲像賭博像賭博的那么有害和危險了,它經常會導致一個人破產,還會玷污人的心靈。___________________________________________________________________________:Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character rather than pursuing famous :很多同學經常玩電腦游戲,這是浪費時間,而不是一種有益的放松方式。五、助學貸款申請信 1)簡單介紹個人情況2)說明申請助學貸款的原因、數(shù)額3)保證會合理利用貸款并表明還款的決心【行文思路】本題屬于情景式命題,要求寫一封申請信。根據(jù)所給提綱,本文應包含如下內容:簡單介紹自己的情況,表明寫信目的:申請助學貸款。說明申請助學貸款的原因、數(shù)額。保證合理利用貸款并表明還款決心,最后表示感謝。A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan Sep 12th, 2008To whom it may concern,I am a freshman of Lianhe University, [1]majoring in Applied am writing in the hope that I may obtain a bank loan to support my study in Applied Physics for the following four parents are both laidoff workers, so it’s [2]beyond their power to finance me through the college education.[3]To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation.[4]Therefore, [5]with the college tuition being a much heavier burden on my family, I am pelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.[6]I give you my promise that the loan would be used properly.[4]Meanwhile, I’ll [7]spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the would be greatly obliged if my application is I am looking forward to hearing from you yours,Song Xue 【亮點點評】[1]“主修…”,現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語。[2]“超出…的能力范圍”。[3]“使事情更糟糕的是”。[4]過渡銜接詞語,使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。[5]“with+賓語+賓補”的獨立結構。[6]“我保證…”,that引導同位語從句。[7]“不遺余力”。【佳句臨摩】:To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major :令人更迷惑不解的是,很多飛機都從大海上離奇消失了。:Therefore, the college tuition being a much heavier burden on my family, I am pelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank :由于周圍交通不便利,人們只得步行回家。:Meanwhile, I’ll spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the :全國人民都不遺余力地支持北京舉辦奧運會。第五篇:大學英語四六級作文大學英語語法總結之四六級作文模板tanhongjun2009大學英語四六級作文模板Nowadays/recently, the phenomenon/… of …h(huán)as been brought into public `s shocking /…to notice that there are an increasing number of…, and it has exerted a good/great/bad influence on society.[敘述現(xiàn)象]Obviously , It`s more difficult/…for sb to… ,and there are all sorts of reasons for this phenomenon/ and formost ,some students claim that … it`s mainly because…In the next place,some others maintain that…Furthermore ,few people are more cautious about… they hold out that …Mostimportantly , …[分析原因(正面)]Others , however , hold a different point out that …Additionaly …[分析原因(反面)]From my point of view , It`s of great importance for us to do that ,we should pay more attention to it , in order to gain some social `s because of the diffculties in doing sth that we should spare no effort to take measures to achieve this , I`am sure , it will bring about many benefits to us in the future/long run.[自我看法][ About 160 words] 常用句型:A 組:好方/慣促進無知(常用長句表達)① be a good way of doing sth② Make it a good habit of doing sth③ help promote understanding and munication between …and …④ without knowing the meaning behind them , they just do sth for …B組:知道謝序好難同重力(To 的短語)① as is known to all②thanks to③ in order to④ do good to⑤take trouble to / have difficulty in doing sth⑥ agree to/with⑦is of great importance for sb to do sth⑧ spare no effort to do sth2010年6月22日 星期二