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《假如生活欺騙了你》勉勵(lì)自己。有利于體現(xiàn)中考作文的價(jià)值導(dǎo)向。在此特地提醒要關(guān)注作文的新形式:“給出開(kāi)頭或結(jié)尾進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)或補(bǔ)寫(xiě)”。今年寧波如果避開(kāi)“獨(dú)詞題”不考,不大可能回歸半命題作文和材料作文,一定會(huì)在寫(xiě)作形式上創(chuàng)新。那么,“給出開(kāi)頭或結(jié)尾進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)或補(bǔ)寫(xiě)”的寫(xiě)作形式,是當(dāng)下較為新穎的寫(xiě)作形式;當(dāng)然還有一種就是“情景式”作文。這些新的作文形式,能夠有效避免考生押題宿構(gòu),更能考查學(xué)生寫(xiě)作的真實(shí)水平和創(chuàng)新能力。中考作文得高分的六個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單實(shí)用秘訣(一)一種體裁只寫(xiě)記敘文,好好把記敘文復(fù)習(xí)好。(二)兩個(gè)原則真實(shí)才能動(dòng)情。真正能打動(dòng)讀者的,還是那些你親身經(jīng)歷有真情實(shí)感的身邊小事。妙語(yǔ)才能煽情。只有風(fēng)趣幽默,生動(dòng)活潑的語(yǔ)言才能讓讀者眼前一亮,讀之使人不斷點(diǎn)頭默嘆。(三)三字要求穩(wěn):寫(xiě)好事,力求能夠按照記敘文的六要素把事情交代清楚,開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾注意點(diǎn)題,結(jié)尾處要點(diǎn)明中心,穩(wěn)定的發(fā)揮好自己的寫(xiě)作水平。特別是寫(xiě)作能力較好的同學(xué),不要強(qiáng)求自己必須寫(xiě)出“驚世之作”來(lái),考試作文能夠發(fā)揮自己80%的寫(xiě)作水平就很了不起了。細(xì):不要像電視劇情介紹那樣的簡(jiǎn)單敘述,中間要加入環(huán)境描寫(xiě)、人物外貌、動(dòng)作、語(yǔ)言、心理描寫(xiě),能力好的同學(xué)再來(lái)些遠(yuǎn)近相襯、動(dòng)靜相映、側(cè)面烘托、環(huán)境渲染、五覺(jué)描寫(xiě),是文章細(xì)膩、動(dòng)人。精:對(duì)于一般的同學(xué)來(lái)說(shuō),“精”體現(xiàn)在:(1)選擇自己最拿手的內(nèi)容。(2)寫(xiě)出自己最好的字。(3)采用自己最順手的結(jié)構(gòu)(總分結(jié)構(gòu)或順敘方式),力求發(fā)揮好自己的水平。對(duì)于寫(xiě)作能力較好的同學(xué)來(lái)說(shuō),“精”應(yīng)體現(xiàn)在:(1)選擇較有新意的、又是自己有把握寫(xiě)好的內(nèi)容。(2)有漂亮的書(shū)寫(xiě)。(3)精心的安排好開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾,適當(dāng)?shù)牟捎玫箶?、襯托、聯(lián)想、象征、描寫(xiě)、抒情、以小見(jiàn)大、欲揚(yáng)先抑、渲染氣氛、借景抒情、托物喻志、以物喻人的方法方式結(jié)構(gòu)文章。(4)采用適當(dāng)?shù)男揶o手法,特別是運(yùn)用比喻、反復(fù)、排比、反問(wèn)等手法,恰當(dāng)?shù)倪\(yùn)用成語(yǔ)、引用格言名句,增添文采。(四)四個(gè)流程(保住基本分)審清題意:千萬(wàn)注意,題意審不好,來(lái)個(gè)文不對(duì)題,哪就??應(yīng)該先花23分鐘好好分析作文題。立好中心:至少指導(dǎo)自己想說(shuō)什么,是喜歡、是厭惡?是感動(dòng)、是反對(duì)?是快樂(lè),是痛苦?是哲理、是深情?是贊揚(yáng)、是批評(píng)???用一句話把它寫(xiě)在草稿紙上。選好材料:符合題目要求的、自己最熟悉的、能夠?qū)懞玫氖隆?xiě)好提綱:(1)用一句話寫(xiě)出中心內(nèi)容和主題。(2)分清開(kāi)頭、中間、結(jié)尾各寫(xiě)什么?(3)打好開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾的細(xì)稿,以及每段的開(kāi)頭句。接下來(lái)就是在試卷里寫(xiě)作文啦,要力求一氣呵成,只要提綱和開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾、段落開(kāi)頭的稿子打得好,一氣呵成事不難做到的,思路順暢了20分鐘就可以把作文寫(xiě)好。(五)、五項(xiàng)技巧(贏得感情分)有一個(gè)靈活的頭腦:造句法、篩選法、換題法。有一張可愛(ài)的臉蛋:書(shū)寫(xiě)要工整,自己的字能夠?qū)懚嗪镁捅仨殞?xiě)多好,不得使用涂改液,不得隨意修改,特別是開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾和段落的開(kāi)頭句,不能修改。有一雙閃亮的眼睛:好的文題等于成功了一半。參見(jiàn)《中考滿分作文擬題技法——眉目傳神惹人眼》有一身漂亮的衣裝:(1)一個(gè)最拿手的題材(適合自己)。(2)一個(gè)好故事(好布料)。(3)一個(gè)好結(jié)構(gòu)(好設(shè)計(jì))。(4)一口流暢、優(yōu)美的語(yǔ)言(好花紋、好色彩)。有幾件精美的飾品:(1)倒敘、描寫(xiě)、引用開(kāi)頭(好發(fā)型)(2)結(jié)尾:議論反問(wèn)式、含蓄余味式、贊美抒情式、哲理深思式、名言點(diǎn)睛式、聯(lián)想做夢(mèng)式、決心號(hào)召式(名鞋)。(3)名言名句名作的恰好點(diǎn)綴(鉆石喲)。(4)用景物描寫(xiě)渲染氣氛(如夢(mèng)的紗巾)。(六)、六個(gè)大忌(莫丟冤枉分)一忌潦草涂改:書(shū)寫(xiě)要端正,千萬(wàn)別連文題都改,只改明顯的錯(cuò)別字,將錯(cuò)就錯(cuò),能夠不改的就不改。二忌過(guò)短過(guò)長(zhǎng):字?jǐn)?shù)一定要足,字?jǐn)?shù)不足,寫(xiě)得再好也很難及格。字?jǐn)?shù)不能太多,不要超出試卷中的作文紙,萬(wàn)般無(wú)奈之下,也只能在2行以內(nèi)。三忌開(kāi)頭議論:還不如開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山、直接點(diǎn)題開(kāi)頭的好,能來(lái)點(diǎn)環(huán)境描寫(xiě),就先來(lái)點(diǎn)描寫(xiě)。四忌分段太少:46段為好,千萬(wàn)別少于3段。五忌文不對(duì)題:不說(shuō)也指導(dǎo)會(huì)有什么后果。六忌選材太俗:別總是玩呀、救落水兒童呀、貓啊狗啊??第五篇:預(yù)測(cè)作文題 tourism has bee the biggest industry in the people think it cause tension between people from different think it leads to understanding between what extent do you agree or disagree? many countries prices of airplane tickets have it positive or negative situation? Write about your personal experience or travel is cheap these days, allowing ordinary people to travel people say that airfare should be increased because this leads to environmental both views and give your own people are rejecting a job opportunity due to their age or other it a negative or a positive approach? Give your opinion and relevant people think zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be , some people think zoos are useful to protect the rare both these views and give your people argue that the purpose of zoos is only to entertain do you think? What other purposes of zoos? other countries, police in UK do not carry think it leaves citizen unprotected, other think it reduce the overall violence in the society, phones and the internet are very , it is rare for old people to use ways could mobile phone and the internet be useful to old people? How does the old people to be encouraged using this new technology? description of crimes on newspaper and TV can have bad consequences on society, so this kind of information should be restricted on what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? many countries traditional foods are being replaced by international fast is having a negative effect on both families and what extent do you agree or disagree? government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in what extent do you agree or disagree with this issue? greed and selfishness has been the basis of the modern people think that we must return to the older and more traditional values of respect for the family and the local munity in order to create a better world to live what extent do you agree or disagree? increase in food production owes much to fertilizers and better machinery, but some people think that it has a negative impact on human health and what extent do you agree or disagree? people think the best way of reducing crime is to give longer prison , however, think there are other better ways to reduce both views and give your own students always focus on one specialist subject, but some people think universities should encourage their students to study a range of subjects in addition to their own what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?