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【正文】 njoying my racquetball class a lot.解題思路：（1）段落中的主題句（topic sentence）是全段的統(tǒng)領(lǐng)，它說(shuō)明段落的中心思想和作者寫(xiě)作的目的。段落的其余句子必須與主題句密切相關(guān)，共同闡明、證實(shí)主題句。因此，主題句具有概括性，支配段落中其他各句的走句。（2）多數(shù)情況下主題句出現(xiàn)在段首，但也可以在段中或段尾。上題段落中的第二句I’m enjoying my racquetball class a lot包含subject(racquetball class)和controlling idea (I’m enjoying it a lot)，下文各句就enjoying一詞展開(kāi)，詳細(xì)說(shuō)明喜歡racquetball class的事實(shí)和原因。所以敲定該句為主題句。典型錯(cuò)誤：（錯(cuò)誤）Topic sentence: I may sign up for intermediate racquetball next semester.（分析）該句適合做結(jié)論句（concluding sentence），因?yàn)樗仨氁蕾?lài)前文對(duì)enjoying myracquetball class的探討才有效度。3. 考查根據(jù)段落中的支持句（supporting sentences）來(lái)推斷主題句（topic sentence）的能力。例題：1. Read the following paragraph carefully and select the best topic sentence from the four possible answers that follow the paragraph.Topic sentence:First, there are always customers to be served. I work in a downtown McDonald’s that gets lots of traffic, and as soon as I serve one customer, there is always another one ready to order. There is constant pressure because I can never step back for a few minutes and relax. Second, I have to put together all of the orders myself. To do that, I have to move all over the serving area: French fries on one side, drinks on the other, and burgers in middle. It’s easy to get sloppy and spill a Coke or throw French fries on the floor. Also, I must always move at a fast pace. McDonald’s has an image to uphold, and its workers must scurry （急趕）about like ants. If I don’t move fast enough, some customers will say, amp。quot。Hey, speed it up,amp。quot。 or amp。quot。I thought McDonald’s had fast service.amp。quot。 And with all of this nonstop work, I only get one tenminute break every two hours. However, ten minutes isn’t enough time to rest and feel like getting back to work. It only gives me enough time to realize how tired I am, so I go back to work depressed. Finally, my manager really keeps the pressure on. He watches us like a hawk, and every time I do something wrong, he seems to catch it. He also has a reputation for firing people, and he never lets any of the workers feel that their jobs are safe. By the end of the day, I’m emotionally and physically drained, like everyone else, and we all head out the door grumbling(喃喃鳴不平的)[A] The hamburger sold at McDonald’s is my favorite food.[B] There are several reasons that I like McDonald’s.[C] Working at McDonald’s is very tiring.[D] I have no idea about working at McDonald’s.答案：1. Topic sentence: [C] Working at McDonald’s is very tiring.解題思路：（1）明確主題句（topic sentence）與支持句（supporting sentence）的關(guān)系：主題句（topic sentence）是統(tǒng)領(lǐng)，起著開(kāi)宗明義、提綱挈領(lǐng)的作用，其余的與主題相關(guān)的支持句（supporting sentences）都圍繞主題句來(lái)展開(kāi)，用來(lái)闡明、證實(shí)主題句。（2）上題段落中的各句描述了麥當(dāng)勞員工工作的情況：店員要不停地接待一個(gè)又一個(gè)顧客，異常忙碌，身體極度疲勞，還要承受顧客的諸多抱怨和經(jīng)理的嚴(yán)厲監(jiān)督。所有這些supporting sentences都用細(xì)節(jié)支持說(shuō)明一個(gè)事實(shí)：在麥當(dāng)勞工作十分辛苦。故[C]句Working at McDonald’s is very tiring就是該段落的topic sentence。（3）[A]、[B]、[D]三句，與段落各支持句內(nèi)容或不相關(guān)或相矛盾，故為錯(cuò)解。 V. 重新組合段落（本大題共5小題，每小題1分，共5分）例題：19. Wines must be drunk quickly once they are opened, otherwise bacteria will use the air to convert the alcohol to vinegar.20. Red wine is made from dark grapes, and white wine from whiter grapes or from dark grapes whose skins have been removed from the wine press at an early stage.21. Wine is the fermented juice of fresh grapes. bacteria are killed by a higher alcohol content that is found in wine and that is why sherry and port, the specialties of Spain and Portugal, are fortified by the addition of spirits to make them last longer.23. Wine was made in England in the Middle Ages, but the climate is not really suitable for grapevines.24. In winemaking, the grapes are crushed in a wine press and the yeast converts the sugar to alcohol, when there is no air present, by a process called fermentation.25. The most famous winemaking countries are France, Germany and Italy.26. The juice of the wine grape contains sugar, and growths of yeast form on the outside of the grape skins.答案：解題思路：本題考查段落的連貫性。連貫性和語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的形式相關(guān)。指的是一個(gè)句子能自然的過(guò)渡到下一個(gè)句子。既指句與句之間的聯(lián)系，又指整個(gè)段落的組織。在一個(gè)段落中，句子與句子之間有一種
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