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Hall. It was the last day of the year and a large crowd of people has gathered under the Town Hall clock. It will strike twelve in twenty minutes’ time. Fifteen minutes have passed and then, at five to twelve, the clock was stopped. The big minute hand does not move. We waited and waited, but nothing happens. Suddenly someone shouted, 39。It39。s two minutes past twelve! The clock have stopped!39。 I looked my watch. It was true. The big clock refused wele the New Year. At that moment everybody began to laugh and sang. 改正下面短文中的動詞方面的錯誤。 (時態(tài),語態(tài),主謂一致,非謂語動詞,搭配等) On Wednesday evening, we went to the Town Hall. It was the last day of the year and a large crowd of people had gathered under the Town Hall clock. It would strike twelve in twenty minutes’ time. Fifteen minutes passed and then, at five to twelve, the clock stopped. The big minute hand did not move. We waited and waited, but nothing happened. Suddenly someone shouted, 39。It39。s two minutes past twelve! The clock has stopped!39。 I looked at my watch. It was true. The big clock refused to wele the New Year. At that moment everybody began to laugh and sing. 改正下面短文中的動詞方面的錯誤。(時態(tài),語態(tài),主謂一致,非謂語動詞,搭配等) 書面表達 假定你是李華,暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職,已寫好申請書和個人簡歷 (resume)。給外教 Ms Jenkins 寫信,請她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式 (format)。 注意: 1. 詞數(shù) 100左右; 2. 可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。 書面表達 ? 審題錯誤 ? 遺漏要點 ? 生搬硬套 ? 過分發(fā)揮 ? 用詞不當 ? 缺少禮貌、委婉 湖南省自主命題時的書面表達測試中所暴露的問題是基礎(chǔ)較差的同學,在最基本的句子層面寫不出符合英文表達的完整的句子。而全國卷所暴露的問題更多的體現(xiàn)在語篇層面和交際意識上,尤其是語篇層面上語言在交際情景中的得體運用。 書面表達( 2022) ?寫作要點: 1)暑假到外企做兼職; 2)寫好了申請書和簡歷; 3)請外教修改。 書面表達 支撐內(nèi)容: 1)做暑假工或請外教修改的原因。 2)功能意念項目 請求、意愿與打算、憂慮、感謝 功能意念語言 ? I’d like to ask you to help me revise… ? Would you mind polishing… ? Would you please help me improve… ? I’m writing to ask you for help. I am afraid of… I am afraid that… I am not sure … It’s kind of you to… I would appreciate it if you… I’ll express my sincere thanks to you for… 備考建議 ? 重視詞匯教學,以語用為著眼點 ? 構(gòu)建知識體系,提升語言遷移能力 ? 重視閱讀分析,提升理解與表達能力 ? 構(gòu)建立體復習,培養(yǎng)語用能力 ? 重視文化知識,注重跨文化交際的得體性 ? 以語篇為基點,以句子為中心,掌握基本知識 點 (詞匯、語塊和基礎(chǔ)語法),穿點成 線 (句子和各類句型),以線構(gòu)面 (詞匯、語法專題知識和段落及其知識)、連面成 體 (語篇) 構(gòu)建知識網(wǎng)絡 詞匯 +語法復習 ? 語塊(詞匯、功能、語境、語音、語法、語義)(詞匯 +語法) ? 詞匯(語音、語義(多義)、拼寫、搭配、聯(lián)想、用法) ? 語法 (形式、意義、語境、功能) 閱讀分析(讀得懂) ? 文體 ? 主旨要義 ? 文章結(jié)構(gòu) ? 具體信息 ? 長難句 ? 作者的意圖、觀點和態(tài)度 閱讀分析 ? 根植于基礎(chǔ)語篇知識 構(gòu)成語篇的要素(話題、語境、語義、語篇銜接手段) ? 根植于語篇訓練 ? 考點針對性訓練(信息查詢、推理、主旨大意歸納、猜詞等) 立體式復習 以詞匯為基礎(chǔ)、以句子為中心、以語篇為基點、以語用為著眼點、以培養(yǎng)學生英語核心素養(yǎng)為目的的立體式復習架構(gòu)。