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o . 5. We went to . Ending 感受 I felt 6 but very excited. the Palace Museum the Summer Palace Lao She Teahouse tired 【 自主創(chuàng)作 】 【 范文展示 】 My Trip to Beijing I enjoyed my trip to Beijing with my friends this summer. We visited many places of interest. And we had a wonderful time. On August 11th, we visited the Palace Museum. We met some Americans there and we enjoyed talking with them about the history of China. On August 12th, we went to the Summer Palace and enjoyed the beauty of the wonderful lake. On August 13th, we went to Lao She Teahouse to see the Beijing Opera. It was amazing. We also enjoyed some traditional Chinese food. On August 14th, we climbed the Great Wall. I felt tired but very excited. 【 升格點(diǎn)撥 】 開篇點(diǎn)題,點(diǎn)明暑假去了北京,然后按照內(nèi)容提示的時(shí)間順序介紹了這次旅程。適當(dāng)增加了細(xì)節(jié),如介紹旅程中的風(fēng)景、人物、趣事等,使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí),可讀性強(qiáng)。