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hing to 5 and... tall buildings fewer trees stop pollution 【 自主創(chuàng)作 】 Great Changes in My Home Town I used to live in a small town with trees all around. 【 范文展示 】 Great Changes in My Home Town I used to live in a small town with trees all around. There were no tall buildings and the only street was narrow. Just outside the town, there was a river. You can see different kinds of fish swimming in the clear water. People here lived a simple life. Great changes have taken place here. You can see tall buildings, big department stores and factories everywhere. Different kinds of cars and buses are running in the big streets. But with the development of the industry, we have fewer trees. Air and water pollution is being more and more serious. We must do something to stop pollution and make our home town even more beautiful. 【 升格點撥 】 1. 文章不僅寫出了各個要點,并在要點處適當(dāng)增加了一些細(xì)節(jié)。 2. 要點與要點之間有了必要的連接詞,文章結(jié)構(gòu)層次清晰。