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【正文】 I have lost your newlybought flash drive. 2. Now I am writing to express my deepest apology for my carelessness.3. As a matter of fact, it was in my schoolbag that I put the flash drive after we met in the library.4. But to my sadness, I was about to make a copy of what I possessed in the flash drive when I found it was missing. 5. I guess that I lost it on my way to the library. I should have kept it with great care.6. You can depend on it that I will buy you a pletely new one by the end of this week although it is a little expensive for me. 7. I do apologize to you again for not being able to return it on schedule. 8. Please forgive me and accept my sincere apology.第四步：連句成篇（加入銜接詞或從句）表示并列的連詞：and/but/or/so…狀語從句連詞：because/ if/ though/ although…定語從句連詞：which/ that/ when/ where…第五步：修改潤色（加入高級詞匯或短語）【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了一些主從復(fù)合句，例如：I39。m awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost your newlybought flash ；But to my sadness, I was about to make a copy of what I possessed in the flash drive when I found it was ，when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句。文章大量復(fù)合句的使用，展示了作者堅(jiān)實(shí)的語言能力。5．Dear Bob，I’m sorry to tell you tell that I cannot go to see the movie with you this Saturday as planned. I’m writing to make an apology for any inconvenience I caused.Our school will hold a Literature Festival next week and invite some foreign poets to attend the festival. By coincidence, I’ve been assigned to pick them up at the airport this Sunday. I hope the sudden change won’t cause you too much trouble.Shall we make it another time, for example, this Sunday? The tickets are still available. If it’s not convenient for you, please let me know what time suits you best. By the way, I’ll be free any time next week.I’m terribly sorry again for any inconvenience. And look forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua.【分析】這篇書面表達(dá)是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作。假定你是李華，你原與留學(xué)生朋友Bob約好周六下午一起去看電影，現(xiàn)因故不能赴約，請寫一封電子郵件?！驹斀狻考俣闶抢钊A，你原與留學(xué)生朋友Bob約好周六下午一起去看電影，現(xiàn)因故不能赴約，請寫一封電子郵件。主要內(nèi)容：１表示道歉；２ 說明原因；３ 另約時間。通過審題，可知應(yīng)該以第一人稱為主，一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時進(jìn)行寫作。考生要先想好寫哪幾點(diǎn)，運(yùn)用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出來。描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級詞匯和固定短語準(zhǔn)確表述。還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞把句子連接起來，這樣文章顯得更連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】這篇書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵在于句子內(nèi)容的準(zhǔn)確表述，同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。I’m sorry to tell you tell that I cannot go to see the movie with you this Saturday as ；I’m writing to make an apology for any inconvenience I caused. 定語從句的運(yùn)用。7
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