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_______________________________________________________________【答案】題目一:Dear John, I39。m sorry to ask for absence fom your English lesson. I39。m going to aend a traditional talent show at 2:00 tomorrow aftermoon.In order to let the foreign students in our school know more about Chinese culture, our school holds this talent show. I will introduce Chinese painting in English.I will ask my classmates to help me with my English. And I promise to finish my homework on time.Your loring student Li Hua題目二:Among all my teachers, my English teacher impressed me most. She is always kind and helpful.last year, I did badly in a big test and I found English too hard. As soon as she found out this, she talked with me and gave me some helpful advice. With her encouragement, I have made great progress.I really want to sayThank you for helping me. I love you! to my English teacher.【解析】【詳解】、題目①本文是一篇應(yīng)用文,作文要求寫一張請(qǐng)假條,因此格式要遵循假條的格式。假條的內(nèi)容——時(shí)間和事由均給出,結(jié)合提示問題可知假條主要從三個(gè)方面寫,這三個(gè)方面需要作者自由發(fā)揮一部分內(nèi)容。本例文是一篇應(yīng)用文,人稱為第一人稱,時(shí)態(tài)是以一般將來時(shí)為主。例文分成三段,根據(jù)提示問題,每段成一行,這種寫法條理清晰,分段明確。高分亮點(diǎn):ask for;absence from;一般將來時(shí);in order to;help sb with sth;promise to do;on time。題目②題目二是一篇話題作文,根據(jù)話題可知這是一篇感謝老師的文章。人稱應(yīng)該為第一人稱。注意給出的提示問題,文章要包含這三部分的內(nèi)容。本例文以第一人稱書寫,時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。文章第一段介紹“我”要感謝的老師,第二段用一般過去時(shí)介紹為什么“我”要感謝老師,第三段表達(dá) “我”的感謝。分段明確,語句簡潔不啰嗦,時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用合理。高分亮點(diǎn):Among all my teachers;did badly in;As soon as;found out;talked with;現(xiàn)在完成時(shí);want to do sth。8.(B)按要求完成大作文(80詞左右)節(jié)約資源,保護(hù)環(huán)境,從我們身邊的小事做起。假設(shè)你是一個(gè)注重“低碳”生活的中學(xué)生,請(qǐng)以“My Green Life”為題寫一篇短文,簡單談?wù)劇熬G色生活”的重要性,以及你所倡導(dǎo)的“綠色生活”方式。寫作要求:詞數(shù)80詞左右,開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù),不得透露姓名等個(gè)人信息?!敬鸢浮縈y Green LifeAs the environment goes worse and worse, I think living a green life is really important for every one of us. Only when we live a green life can we have a better living environment. As for me, in my daily life, I often go to school by bike. It can not only help exercise myself, but also makes contribution to protecting the environment. Besides, I always turn off the lights whenever I am out to save energy. I hope everyone can live a green life.【解析】【分析】本文主題關(guān)于綠色生活,環(huán)境保護(hù),注意文章內(nèi)容。【詳解】首先點(diǎn)明如今的生活環(huán)境,越來越差,綠色生活勢(shì)在必行。其次點(diǎn)明綠色生活的重要性。然后說我在日常生活中對(duì)綠色出行作出的貢獻(xiàn),騎自行車,出門關(guān)燈等。最后呼吁大家一起努力?!军c(diǎn)睛】首先正確理解作文題目,不要偏題,本文是關(guān)于綠色生活,它的重要性,以及你在日常生活中是如何踐行綠色生活的。其次,在語句正確的基礎(chǔ)上,多運(yùn)用連詞,使文章升華,長短句結(jié)合,使文章更上一檔次。9.書面表達(dá)假如你是李華,馬上將要中學(xué)畢業(yè),一路上肯定有很多人幫助或者鼓勵(lì)過你。某英文雜志社正向九年級(jí)畢業(yè)生征文,請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇題為“Thank you, My ________”的短文,將你對(duì)你的父母、老師、朋友或同學(xué)的感謝表達(dá)出來。要求:(1)將標(biāo)題補(bǔ)充完整,80詞左右;(2) 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;(3) 文章中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校名和地名。Thank you, My_______________【答案】Thank you, my teacher! I39。d like to say thanks to my English teacher, Miss Wang, because she39。s helped me a lot. Once, I failed my English exam. When she found I was very worried, she encouraged me to study harder and promised to help me. After that, I turned to her for help every time I had questions. She was always patient to make me understand every single question. With her help, I39。ve had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English.Thank you, my dear teacher! The love and support from you will be with me forever.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題作文,以“Thank you, My teacher ”為題,寫一篇短文,感謝我的老師?!驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí),人稱為單數(shù)第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:I39。d like to……,When she found……,She was always patient to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。開頭介紹了我要感謝我的老師王小姐,接下來介紹她對(duì)我的幫助,最后表示從老師那里得到的愛和支持將永遠(yuǎn)和我在一起。此處would like to, encourage sb to do sth, promise to do sth, turn to sb for help, make progress等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。