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ing went out for a walk with her mother after supper. She saw a wallet at the door of the munity. Lingling picked up her wallet and found that there were ID cards and some money in it. Lingling and her mother handed the wallet to the security guard, who sent the news to the microphone group in the munity. When the owner saw the news, he came to fetch her wallet and thanked Lingling and her mother. .I think Li Hua did a good should learn from her.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示,以“The Story of Lingling”為題,為社區(qū)宣傳專欄寫一篇短文,介紹在玲玲身上發(fā)生的一件事。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般過(guò)去時(shí),人稱主要為第三人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì),考生要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料,不可遺漏要點(diǎn),并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí),注意緊扣主題,連句成篇,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無(wú)誤?!军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛:首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作,在寫作過(guò)程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等,還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。5.現(xiàn)在智能手機(jī)(smartphone)越來(lái)越普及,很多中學(xué)生都有智能手機(jī)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示,寫一篇不少于80詞的英語(yǔ)短文,談一談你對(duì)智能手機(jī)的看法,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。提示:在生活中你用智能手機(jī)做什么?智能手機(jī)對(duì)你的生活產(chǎn)生了怎樣的影響?你對(duì)中學(xué)生使用智能手機(jī)有什么看法?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:The smartphone is being more and more popular nowadays .I also have a smartphone .I usually use it to send text messages, play games,watch videos, listen to music and learn English .It is very useful and convenient. In fact,the smartphone makes my life colorful. However ,every coin has two I spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams. So I think we students should use our smartphones properly and don’t use them too much .We should pay more attention to our studies.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文,要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示,寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文,談一談你對(duì)智能手機(jī)的看法。文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱主要用第一、第三人稱。首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作。在寫作時(shí),注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無(wú)誤。6.假如你是李華,下周你們學(xué)校將要組織學(xué)生開展“父親節(jié)活動(dòng)計(jì)劃”分享活動(dòng),你打算先分享給你們班交換生Peter,希望聽聽他的看法。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一封電子郵件,告訴他你的計(jì)劃是什么,你為什么這么做,并表達(dá)你渴望得到他建議的心情。提示詞語(yǔ): gift, love, opinion提示問(wèn)題: ● What’s your plan for Father’s Day? ● Why do you do so? ● What do you want Peter to do?Dear Peter,How is it going? We will share the plan for Father’s Day next Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Dear Peter,How is it going?We will share the plan for Father’s Day next week. I am going to do some meaningful things for my father. Firstly, I am going to buy a beautiful card for him. And then, I plan to cook him a big meal. Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help.I will do this because I love my father deeply. He works very hard every day to support my family. Would you please give me some advice? I am eager to receive your early reply. Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】題干解讀:該題目屬于記敘文寫作,但寫作時(shí)要按郵件格式寫。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)承接短文開頭;第二段寫你為什么這么做;第三段表達(dá)你渴望得到他建議的心情。例文點(diǎn)評(píng):例文采用的是三段式;用第一人稱來(lái)敘述父親節(jié)計(jì)劃;時(shí)態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主,描述具體建議時(shí),描寫細(xì)致,條理清晰。高分亮點(diǎn):短語(yǔ):the plan for Father’s Day;some meaningful things;buy a beautiful card for him;give me some advice。句型:Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help;I am eager to receive your early reply。7.畢業(yè)之際,學(xué)校要求每位九年級(jí)學(xué)生給各自家長(zhǎng)寫封信,簡(jiǎn)要匯報(bào)三年來(lái)初中生活的收獲與存在的問(wèn)題。假如你是Jim,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表的提示,用英文做一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)短的匯報(bào)。收獲1. 學(xué)到很多知識(shí)…2. 學(xué)會(huì)了與人相處:在校...,在家…3. 遇到困難時(shí)…存在問(wèn)題學(xué)習(xí)壓力…目前想法1. 感謝 2…要求:(1):表達(dá)清楚,語(yǔ)法正確,上下文連貫;(2):必須包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;(3):不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。(4):詞數(shù)100左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))Dear Dad & Mum ,I’ll leave junior school soon and meet a new challenge of my life. Now I would like to tell you what I have done in the past three years____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Jim【答案】例文Dear Dad & Mum ,I’ll leave junior school soon and meet a new challenge of my life. Now I would like to tell you what I have done in the past three years.I have learnt a lot of knowledge from the books and I have improved my study skills. I have learnt about a lot of famous people all over the world. Tan dun is a great musician. He said his music is to dream without boundaries. I can also get along with my teachers and help each other too. At home I can do some housework so that you can have more time to rest. When I meet difficulty, I can talk to my friends about it.However, I feel stressed in my study. I have a lot of homework to do everyday .As a result, I have no time for my hobbies.I would thank you for taking good care of me and thank my teachers and friends for their help. I will plan my time well to study better and sleep well.Yours sincerelyJim【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書信作文。在畢業(yè)之際,學(xué)校要求每位九年級(jí)學(xué)生給各自家長(zhǎng)寫封信,簡(jiǎn)要匯報(bào)三年來(lái)初中生活的收獲與存在的問(wèn)題。假如你是Jim,要求根據(jù)表格的提示內(nèi)容,用英文做一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)短的匯報(bào)。首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作。在寫作過(guò)程中,注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無(wú)誤。8. 2018年11月15日泰州市召開了深化全國(guó)文明城市創(chuàng)建迎檢部署會(huì),會(huì)上我市正式啟動(dòng)了“泰有禮”全民主題實(shí)踐活動(dòng),形成崇德向善、文明有禮的道德風(fēng)尚和城市標(biāo)識(shí),同時(shí)組織“泰有禮”志愿服務(wù)隊(duì)伍,圍繞“文明禮讓”“文明交通”“文明餐飲”“文明上網(wǎng)”等文明實(shí)踐活動(dòng),承擔(dān)起對(duì)市民日常行為進(jìn)行勸導(dǎo)的責(zé)任。假如你是其中的一名志愿者,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇150字左右的英語(yǔ)短文。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。(以上背景內(nèi)容無(wú)需表達(dá)) 內(nèi)容提示: ,幫助他們做家務(wù)活;,排隊(duì)候車,不隨地吐痰、不亂扔垃圾;不在公共場(chǎng)所抽煙、喧嘩(比如在圖書館或博物館),不撒謊,不說(shuō)臟話;,幫助別人;坐車時(shí)請(qǐng)讓座給老人,殘疾人,尤其抱小孩的婦女;,做到紅燈停,綠燈行;。 要求:,字跡工整:可圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;、校名、地名成其他真實(shí)信息;As a member of the city, I think we should_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________