【正文】 _____________【答案】Life is full of the unexpected. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, a schoolmate and I hit into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then we started shouting, and it turned into a terrible quarrel. To be honest, it was neither my fault nor the schoolmate’s, only because we both cared too much about winning and losing. That made me feel shameful.In our daily lives, we should deal with these quarrels properly. Firstly, try to be friendly to each other. Secondly, we should municate more and put ourselves in other’s place. Don’t be a selfish person and try to deal with everything calmly and wisely.It’s very important to get on well with each other. Let’s build a friendly, peaceful and safe society together and make our life better and better.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如full of，during the basketball game，each other，try to do，turn into，to be honest，neither…nor，care about，too much，deal with等。而固定句型It’s very important to get on well with each ’t be a selfish person and try to deal with everything calmly and ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。5．假設(shè)你是來自中國的中學(xué)生李華,打算參加當(dāng)?shù)亟M織的國外冬令營,看完了這個網(wǎng)頁后,你打算給Liz Payne留言,表達(dá)你在冬令營期間想去London Canal Museum參觀的愿望。內(nèi)容包括：；(包含冬令營的時間,聽Liz Payne的講座)；。作文要求：；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實的名稱和學(xué)生的真實姓名；,詞數(shù)80個左右。作文的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計入總詞數(shù),也不必抄寫在答題卡上。Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit London Canal Museum. From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals”February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp. And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal. What’s more, I hope to learn more about London Canal Museum and even more about the UK.I’m looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【解析】這篇作文要求我們以中學(xué)生李華的身份，給Liz Payne寫一個留言。文章內(nèi)容主要包括三個部分：首先是介紹自己的身份；然后寫留言的目的，包括冬令營的時間、想要去參觀London Canal Museum以及聽Liz Payne的講座；最后簡單介紹一下你的預(yù)期的收獲。寫作時，應(yīng)根據(jù)題目的這些要求，組織語言，串聯(lián)成一篇短文。通過分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用第一人稱I來敘述，時態(tài)應(yīng)以一般將來時態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時為主。注意英語句子的表達(dá)和漢語習(xí)慣是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，使用正確的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以及適當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型，保證句子的準(zhǔn)確性和語言的地道。另外還應(yīng)注意語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。穿插一些高級詞匯和復(fù)雜句式，提升文章檔次和水平，使表達(dá)更加流暢。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)。作者主要從三個方面敘述：首先介紹了自己的身份和寫留言的目的；接下來詳細(xì)介紹了自己參加這次冬令營的愿望；最后是一個簡單的結(jié)尾。如果分段敘述效果則會更好，那樣會使文章的層次更加清晰。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以第一人稱、一般將來時和一般現(xiàn)在時為主，謂語動詞形式準(zhǔn)發(fā)，語法規(guī)范，符合英語句子的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，也使用了一些復(fù)合句和較高級的句型，如I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter ；From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals” February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter ；And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn 。整篇文章語句通順、意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。6．書面表達(dá)共享單車為我們的生活帶來了極大的便利。假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)九年級學(xué)生李華，你的美國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對中國最新出現(xiàn)的一種共享單車“mobike”很感興趣，并請你做個簡要介紹。請你給Jim回信，內(nèi)容包括：1. 這種單車的使用方法（如：APP查看車輛、掃碼開鎖等）；2. 這種單車的優(yōu)勢；3. 你對這種單車的看法。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：智能手機(jī)smartphone；掃碼scan the QR code；交通工具a means of transportation。Dear Jim,I’m siting to tell you more about the new form of sharing bikemobike mentioned in your latest letter. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hope to ride a mobike with you in China.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim,I’m writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bikemobike mentioned in your latest letter.It’s very convenient to use if you have a smartphone. What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike, and enjoy your trip.Compared to other forms of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it. It is being a new trend as a means of transportation, which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well.Hope to ride a mobike with you in China. Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇要求介紹關(guān)于共享單車的一些事情。動筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。7．今年初《流浪地球》在中國火熱上映。影片故事設(shè)定在2075年，講述太陽即將毀火，已經(jīng)不適合人類生存，而面對絕境，人類將開啟“流浪地球”計劃，試圖帶著地球一起逃離太陽系，尋找人類新家園的故事。影片多次提到“希望”。比如，老師問:希望是什么?班長回答:希望是我們這個年代鉆石一樣的東西。你的筆友Demon觀看后，印象深刻，給你寫了一封郵件。請你根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容結(jié)合你的情況，用英語回復(fù)。To: LiHua@China. From: Demon@ America. Subject:Problems and hopeDear Li Hua, How are you? I hope you are well. I have watched a movie called Wandering Earth. I am deeply moved by those Chinese people who never give up. You Chinese are really brave and full of wisdom. As my Chinese pen pal, what will you do when you meet difficulty? Would you please tell me the following things?What problems do you often meet in your school life?How do you usually solve your problems?Who has influenced you most in your life and what do you think of him/her?What do you think about hope? Please write back and tell me everything.Best wishes,Demon注意：，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連