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要求,抓住要點(diǎn),詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的,而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮,因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒,就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了,在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞,使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9.中央電視臺(tái)《經(jīng)典詠流傳》節(jié)目的播出,再次激發(fā)了人們對(duì)經(jīng)典文學(xué)作品的閱讀熱情。讀書可以成就更美好的自己,讓讀書伴隨我們成長(zhǎng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示,以“Growing up with Reading”為題寫一篇英語短文介紹你曾經(jīng)讀過的一本書或—首詩,并建議大家多讀書,讀好書。要點(diǎn)提示:讀書的重要性1. 獲取知識(shí),開闊眼界;2. 提升自我,增強(qiáng)自信……讀過的一本書或一首詩1. 作品內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介;2. 讀書感悟及對(duì)自己的影響。多讀書,讀好書1. 利用閑暇時(shí)間多讀書,養(yǎng)成讀書的好習(xí)慣;2. 多讀經(jīng)典文學(xué)作品……注意:1. 短文應(yīng)包括以上要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫。2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校及地名。3. 詞數(shù):80100(文章開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。參考詞匯:classic 經(jīng)典作品; open up one’s eyes 開闊眼界;improve oneself 提升自我; be more confident 更自信;responsibility 責(zé)任;cooperation 合作。Growing up with ReadingHave you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics. 【答案】Growing up with ReadingHave you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics. Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and more confident . Our study can be improved if we read more good books.These days I am reading a book whose title is Jane Eyre, which attracts me a lot. The book39。s writer is called Charlotte Bronte, who was born in England in had two sisters and one brother, but unfortunately their mother died when they were very young. Actually Jane Eyre is a book whose theme is of love. In the story. Jane Eyre lived a hard life, but she was selfconfident and perseverant. In her heart, there is always a mind that if you hold a belief and stick to it, you will eventually achieve your dream.【解析】這是一篇圖表,要求介紹自己讀過的一本書。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料,然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來,在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一,三人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和過去時(shí)態(tài),注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語意連貫。10.請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)Zhang Ying的一些表現(xiàn)的提示用英語寫一篇短文,把她介紹給你的外國(guó)朋友Mary。TimeGood habitsBad habitsIn the morningGet up earlyEat junk food for breakfastIn classAsk some questionsQuarrel(爭(zhēng)吵) with herclassmates sometimesAfter schoolAlways exerciseGo home lateIn the eveningHelp her parents with houseworkWatch TV or play putergames for more than an hour要求:語言要通順,表達(dá)要正確。文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)英語單詞。文章開頭結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入詞數(shù)?!敬鸢浮縊ne possible versionDear Mary,I’m very glad to introduce(介紹) my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14yearold girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises (for a long time). After supper she helps her parents with housework. (She is really a good girl. )But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays puter games for more than an hour in the evening. (This makes her parents unhappy. )I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?YoursHuang Deshun【解析】試題分析:這是一篇提綱類作文,題目中給出的材料較為齊全。寫作中注意將張穎的情況介紹清楚。根據(jù)材料可知,本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),第三人稱進(jìn)行敘述,寫作中主語時(shí)態(tài)及主謂一致等問題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn),做到語句通順。為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞?!玖咙c(diǎn)說明】本文在寫作中使用了很多固定句式,如:be glad to do sth高興做某事;a lot of許多;get up起床等。本文中時(shí)間詞如After supper,Sometimes,in the evening等的巧妙使用,使得本文看起來邏輯清楚,條理分明。在學(xué)習(xí)中,我們應(yīng)注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.考點(diǎn):考查提綱類作文