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個(gè)方面做起:認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求,抓住要點(diǎn),詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的,而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮,因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒,就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了,在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞,使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外,還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言,大小寫(xiě)是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9.書(shū)面表達(dá) 我校決定讓學(xué)生輪流打掃廁所,以此作為教育學(xué)生的一種方式。 這件事在學(xué)生中引 起了強(qiáng)烈的反響,請(qǐng)你把下列不同意見(jiàn)整理成一篇書(shū)面材料,報(bào)告給學(xué)校。 同意 :1.多數(shù)學(xué)生是獨(dú)生子女,不會(huì)做事。 2.學(xué)生應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)做艱苦的工作。 3.學(xué)會(huì)理解和尊重清潔工人的勞動(dòng)。 不同意:1.很臟,容易使學(xué)生生病。 2.不是學(xué)生應(yīng)該做的事情。 3.打掃教室就足夠了。 注意:1.短文應(yīng)包括表中所有內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,但不要逐字翻譯; 2.不少于80詞。 生詞提示:respect尊重【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students'jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干要求,這是一篇看法類(lèi)的作文,那么首先得點(diǎn)明討論的話題,然后分別寫(xiě)出不同人群對(duì)此事的看法,時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。重點(diǎn)詞匯及短語(yǔ):argument爭(zhēng)論;take place發(fā)生;among(三者或三者以上)之間;a good chance for sb對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)是個(gè)好機(jī)會(huì);help sb do sth幫助某人做某事;get sick生病。亮點(diǎn)句型:(1)A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自從我們學(xué)校讓學(xué)生做自愿勞動(dòng)以來(lái),在學(xué)生中發(fā)生了一場(chǎng)激烈的爭(zhēng)論?,F(xiàn)在完成時(shí)(have/has+done)。(2)To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做義務(wù)勞動(dòng)是他們學(xué)習(xí)如何做困難工作的好機(jī)會(huì)。動(dòng)詞不定式作主語(yǔ),謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù),疑問(wèn)詞+to do。10.為了吸引外國(guó)游客,杭州旅游網(wǎng)希望對(duì)杭州茶文化進(jìn)行宣傳。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格信息,用英語(yǔ)為其寫(xiě)一篇介紹,詞數(shù)80左右。What is Longjing Tea famous for?Good tasteWhat is it used for?Keep healthyHow is it produced?Grow on the sides of mountains ...What’s the best place to learn about it?Why?Hangzhou National Tea Museum ...Longjing Tea____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Tea culture is one of the most famous cultures in China. Longjing tea is one of the famous Chinese traditional teas and famous green tea. Why is Longjing Tea famous for? Because it taste good. It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking longjing tea. Longjing tea grows mainly on the sides of mountains. People are very strict about the picking of Longjing tea.Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. So Hangzhou National Tea Museum is the best place to learn about Hongjing tea.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料類(lèi)介紹型作文,所以我們必須要結(jié)合所給材料再適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容。時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。亮點(diǎn)詞匯短語(yǔ):one of...,...之一;green tea綠茶;be famous for...,因…而出名;keep healthy保持健康;be strict in sth對(duì)…嚴(yán)格;not only....but also...,不僅...而且...。亮點(diǎn)句型:It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking Longjing tea. 喝龍井茶對(duì)人們保持健康有好處。It is+adj.(for sb.) to do sth. (對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō))做某事是怎樣的。Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. 龍井是我國(guó)著名的茶葉,它不僅與龍井的氣候、土壤環(huán)境有關(guān),而且與龍井的生產(chǎn)工藝有關(guān)。Which引導(dǎo)的限定性定語(yǔ)從句。Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. 杭州是龍井茶出產(chǎn)的勝地。Where引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。