【正文】 誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查字?jǐn)?shù)是否符合要求。參考要點(diǎn)：(時(shí)間、內(nèi)容……)。(如：缺少相關(guān)書籍、英語(yǔ)閱讀困難……)；。8．為配合學(xué)?！罢\(chéng)信教育”活動(dòng)，學(xué)校英語(yǔ)報(bào)開展了以“Try to be honest”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇征文稿。（1）列舉你班同學(xué)存在的不誠(chéng)實(shí)現(xiàn)象：抄作業(yè)，考試作弊，說(shuō)謊話......。（2）簡(jiǎn)述誠(chéng)實(shí)的重要性，并用你的一次具體經(jīng)歷加以說(shuō)明。注意：（1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和學(xué)校名稱。（2）詞數(shù)100左右。（3）短文首句僅供參考，不計(jì)入總數(shù)。參考詞匯：作弊cheat（v.）說(shuō)謊tell a lieTry to be honestTo be honest is one of the most treasured traditional values in _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Try to be honestTo be honest is one of the most treasured traditional values in China. The children are taught to be honest when they are very young. At schools the students are also instructed to be honest.However, with the development of society, we often hear plaints about dishonesty. Reports with the theme of dishonesty often appear in the media. For example, some people try to get rich and live a fortable life. But they do not work hard honestly, instead they cheat others. They sell something quite ordinary at a very high price. Some people’s delaying paying back the loan can serve as another example. Some people, including some college students, get loan from the bank, and promise to pay within, say, 3 years. However, they don’t do that.The dishonest people sometimes can get benefit from their behaviors. So some people assert that dishonesty can bring people benefit, while honesty only makes people suffer. Is that so? Definitely not. It is always true that honesty is the best policy. It pays to be honest. The cheater selling the treasure mentioned above will surely be disclosed and punished some day. On the contrary, if he had been honest, neither the buyer nor he himself would have suffered. The people who do not return money in time will sooner or later bee infamous, and will not get the money from others again. If he had acted differently, he would have earned respect and trust, meanwhile, the bank would not have suffered from loss.【解析】這是一篇誠(chéng)信征文，英語(yǔ)作文要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，注意提供的觀點(diǎn)、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過(guò)渡。英語(yǔ)作文，要忠實(shí)于材料，不必?cái)U(kuò)展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語(yǔ)，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯(cuò)句。9．你校正在舉辦以“社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀”為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽，你準(zhǔn)備從“和善”這一點(diǎn)展開論述，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以“Kindness is a gift”為題，寫一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿。要求： 1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括提示中所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。Kindness is a giftDear classmates,I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life? That’s all for my speech. Thank you!【答案】例文Dear classmates,I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life?When we’re at home, it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other. We should also be kind enough to our neighbours in our neighborhood. While they’re away from home, we can keep an eye on their houses. At school, tell our classmates to ask for help whenever they need. If one of them is absent from school, we can help them with the lesson. On the bus, we should take care of the elderly by giving them our seats. And once there is someone who tries to fight with the bus driver, it’s better for us to stop him.I hope everyone can be kind to others so that we can live in a world full of love.That’s all for my speech. Thank you!【解析】【詳解】你校正在舉辦以“社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀”為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽，你準(zhǔn)備從“和善”這一點(diǎn)展開論述，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以“Kindness is a gift”為題，寫一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿。內(nèi)容要求中指出了寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前一定要認(rèn)真閱讀內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定句子人稱，時(shí)態(tài)等問(wèn)題?？梢韵劝迅饕c(diǎn)用句子表達(dá)出來(lái)，然后再組合成文。寫作中注意語(yǔ)意通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，為了使短文更顯得有邏輯性，在列舉自己的優(yōu)勢(shì)時(shí)，可以適當(dāng)使用序數(shù)詞。舉出的例子要有說(shuō)服力，想象合理并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。注意采用一些習(xí)慣的句式，固定短語(yǔ)，以使自己的演講稿更有文采。寫完后多讀幾遍，適當(dāng)修改?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的文章，作者用到了一些好的句型：it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other.；If one of them is absent from school, we can help them with the 。