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按時(shí)作息,杜絕熬夜你對(duì)你家家規(guī)的看法......簡(jiǎn)單闡述你是如何受益的......寫(xiě)作要求:,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使行文流暢、通順;;。文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of you Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow. First, you should respect the old and love the young. You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.In my opinion, every family must keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture. What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文,向山姆介紹你的家規(guī)并向他展示一個(gè)溫情的中國(guó)家庭。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致,特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句,如be supposed to, be kind to, keep your words, what’s more, in one’s opinion, develop bad habits, be rude to, be strict with, make a difference to以及it is a good habit to be honest中it作形式主語(yǔ)。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,用詞準(zhǔn)確,句子通順,行文連貫?!军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起:認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求,抓住要點(diǎn),詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的,而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮,因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒,就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了,在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞,使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外,還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言,大小寫(xiě)是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10.書(shū)面表達(dá)4月28日,國(guó)家主席習(xí)近平在北京延慶出席2019年中國(guó)北京世界園藝博覽會(huì)開(kāi)幕式,提出綠色發(fā)展“五個(gè)追求”(fivepoint initiative on green development),為全球生態(tài)文明建設(shè)貢獻(xiàn)中國(guó)智慧。作為新時(shí)代的中學(xué)生, 如何響應(yīng)習(xí)主席的號(hào)召, 從“我”做起, 創(chuàng)建“綠色生活美麗家園”(Live Green, Live Better)? 請(qǐng)以此為題,參考以下要點(diǎn)(可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮), 為??庇⒄Z(yǔ)角”寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的英文稿件。參考要點(diǎn): 1保護(hù)自然,如:綠色低碳出行, 減少污染……2美化自然,如:讓天更藍(lán)山更綠水更清……3呼吁人人參與,從身邊小事做起,如:適度節(jié)約,拒絕浪費(fèi)……;做到人與自然的和諧。Live Green, Live Better As China has been speeding up its development, we should pursue harmony(追求和諧) between man and nature. But how can we help?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Live Green, Live BetterAs China has been speeding up its development, we should pursue harmony(追求和諧) between man and nature. But how can we help?In recent years,protecting the environment is being more and more important to the whole human beings. It is everyone’s duty to do something good to the environment around middle school students,we can also do a lot of helpful things. For example,we go to school by bike or on can protect environment by not throwing rubbish can save water to make full use of can use materials which do no harm to the can grow more more trees there are,the clearer the sky is,the greener the hills when we have the idea of loving our environment can we make a better place to everyone,let’s take action!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇要求寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于如何響應(yīng)習(xí)主席的號(hào)召, 從“我”做起, 創(chuàng)建“綠色生活美麗家園”的文章。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料,然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái),在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題,不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語(yǔ)意連貫。重點(diǎn)語(yǔ)句:It is everyone’s duty to do something good to the environment around us保護(hù)環(huán)境是每個(gè)人的職責(zé),make full use of充分利用, let’s take action!讓我們行動(dòng)起來(lái)