【正文】 we arrived, there were a lot of visitors.In the morning, we went boating and enjoyed ourselves. We saw many animals, such as pandas, giraffes and monkeys in the afternoon. They are so lovely. We met some foreign guests and talked with them happily. However, during our visit we saw some people throwing rubbish and cutting in line.In my opinion, it is our duty to protect the environment and follow the rules in public. And I hope changes will take place in the future.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫參觀日記。動筆前應根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)和關鍵單詞等問題。為了使語言更顯親切，在寫作時主語用第一人稱，時態(tài)以一般過去時為主。同時注意時間狀語與時態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問題，適當使用連詞，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤，做到語意連貫?！军c睛】此類作文首先要做的就是認真閱讀題目要求，結合所給材料確定內(nèi)容，不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎的寫作常識，不犯低級錯誤。只要平時積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分數(shù)。另外為了應對考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應考時就會有法可依。4． 為提升南京城市形象，我市已啟動老小區(qū)出新改造工程。假設你是 Tim，請根據(jù)下面表格內(nèi)容的提示，用英文向你的外國筆友 Jack 做簡單的介紹。Purposeimprove the environmentChanges to people?s lifebeautiful buildings, …Problemslots of noise, rubbishYour advice…注意：；，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3 詞數(shù) 80 左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old munities” in Nanjing. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old munities” in Nanjing. This project is aim to improve the environment. After this project, there will be more beautiful buildings, some parks and a big shopping store. Our life will be more convenient. But there are some problems which influence our life. For example, lots of noise is around us all day long, and we can see the building rubbish anywhere. In my opinion, the project team only work in daytime and the building rubbish can be put at a fixed place. Of course, everyone in the old munities can do what they can do to renovate our munities.【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達是描述老社區(qū)改造工程，話題較新?！驹斀狻窟@是篇材料作文，所給的內(nèi)容要點給的比較零碎，不完整，所以考生需要結合實際情況補充完整，是文章內(nèi)容充實。在寫作時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體。5． 假如你叫李華, 三年的初中生活即將結束, 你將迎來漫長的暑假, 你的筆友Peter寫信來詢問你的暑假計劃。請根據(jù)表格中所給的基本信息給你的筆友回信, 告訴他你的暑假計劃。要求：1. 回信必須包含表格中的所有信息, 并可適當發(fā)揮, 字數(shù)在80字左右, 開頭和結尾不計入總字數(shù)。2. 回信中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名, 否則將以零分計。3. 書面表達必須寫在答題卡上, 如在本卷上作答, 一律不得分。Your planswhatwhyPlan onevisit grandparentsmiss themPlan twovisit Beijing and Shanghaiwant to open my eyesPlan threelearn senior（高中）English and math by myselfdream to go to a famous university………….Dear peter,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLi Hua【答案】例文Dear peter ,Thank you for your letter, in the letter, you asked me how I planned my summer vacation, now, let me tell you all about it.Firstly I will visit my grandparents as soon as I leave school, I haven’t see them for a long time, I miss them so much. Then , I am going to take trip to Beijing and Shanghai to open up my eyes, as we all know, both cities are so beautiful and important, I believe I can learn a lot by travelling. After ing back, I will learn senior subjects by myself to get ready for the ing senior school, because I dream to go to a famous university. That’s all about my plans, please write me soon and tell me about yours. Yours Lihua【解析】【詳解】本文分三個自然段。第一段點出文章主題you asked me how I planned my summer vacation, now, let me tell you all about it。第二自然段用Firstly，Then ，After ing back有序列出三個計劃。文章結尾用That’s all about my plans, please write me soon and tell me about yours總結。另外，文中為第一人稱，時態(tài)主要為一般將來時will visit my grandparents，I am going to take trip，I will learn senior subjects等。6．假如你是李華，作為活動主持人，你打算邀請外教 Smith 先生來參加本周末學校開展的“英語戲劇展示”活動，請用英語給他寫一封邀請函，告訴他本次活動的具體時間和地點，安排了哪些內(nèi)容，以及需要他做哪些事情。提示詞語:wear, role, perform, judge, suggestions, photos提示問題:When and where are you going to hold the English drama show?What are you going to do on the show?What will you ask Mr. Smith to do for the show?Dear Mr. Smith, I39。m glad to tell you there39。ll be an English drama show this weekend. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We’re looking forward to your reply.Li Hua【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,I’m glad to tell you there’ll be an English drama show this weekend . It will be held at 8:00 this Saturday morning. We are going to hold it in our music club. All of us are going to wear nice clothes and play different roles in groups. We will perform English