【正文】 ore people are addicted to(沉迷）playing the mobile phones. Last year, My friend Miller was 【答案】Today more and more people are addicted to(沉迷）playing the mobile phones. Last year，My friend Miller was crazy about mobile games as well. He spent too much time in chatting and watching films on the phone. Miller hardly talked with his family and friends. He lived in his own world. He felt very anxious without mobile phones. Yesterday he was hit by a bike, because he was watching his phone at that moment. As a result, he hurt his knees badly.In my opinion, I think we can’t use the mobile phones for a long time, I mean, no more than half an hour a day. Don’t take mobile phones to school. A mobile phone is just a kind of tool, not our whole life.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；再緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。6．書(shū)面表達(dá)初中畢業(yè)在即, 回顧三年的學(xué)習(xí)生活, 你一定有成功的體驗(yàn), 如一次考試, 一次比賽, 一次表演...... 請(qǐng)你以Believe Myself, and I Will Win為題寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。提示：(1)What was the event?(2)How did you make it?(3)What’s your feeling?要求：(1)發(fā)言稿中須包括所有提示內(nèi)容, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。(2)發(fā)言稿中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名。(3)詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右(開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。Believe Myself, and I Will WinHello, everyone!___________________________________________________________________________Thank you for your listening.【答案】Believe Myself, and I will winHello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just couldn’t understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too. To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won39。t be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I39。m sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.Thank you for your listening.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以Believe Myself and I will win為題，寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。題目中用問(wèn)題的形式給出了提示，審題可知，文章應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：首先敘述你生活中遇到的一件困難的事；然后介紹你是如何克服了這個(gè)困難，最后取得成功的；最后說(shuō)一下你自己的感受。寫(xiě)作時(shí)學(xué)生們應(yīng)根據(jù)這幾個(gè)內(nèi)容提要，發(fā)揮自己的想象力，將這些內(nèi)容補(bǔ)充完整，用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先要保證發(fā)言稿中包括了所有提示的內(nèi)容，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以根據(jù)表達(dá)需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但要與上下文意銜接起來(lái)。其次要注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能按照漢語(yǔ)思維，逐詞翻譯。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，選擇適當(dāng)句型、短語(yǔ)、詞匯進(jìn)行表達(dá)。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，穿插并列句或復(fù)合句。為提升文章檔次，應(yīng)注意銜接詞以及高級(jí)句式或復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)的使用。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，寫(xiě)了一篇演講稿。文章有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容，沒(méi)有遺漏要點(diǎn)。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，層次清晰。短文主要分成三段，每一段主題都很明確，敘述詳細(xì)、清楚。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，短文主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，動(dòng)詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，尤其注意了不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式形式，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確。文章中句式變化豐富，有簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句、復(fù)合句，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，增強(qiáng)了文章的表現(xiàn)力。短文中使用了較豐富的句型，如When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English.、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult、In the future, I won39。t be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I39。m sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。7．書(shū)面表達(dá)根據(jù)要求完成短文寫(xiě)作，請(qǐng)將作文寫(xiě)在答題卡指定的位置上。 生活中常常會(huì)發(fā)生一些意外的事，但每個(gè)人處理事情的方式不同。有些人冷靜溫和地處理，有些人簡(jiǎn)單粗暴地對(duì)待。當(dāng)你與人發(fā)生沖突時(shí)，你會(huì)如何處理呢？請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀愕慕?jīng)歷與看法。內(nèi)容包括：1. 請(qǐng)你簡(jiǎn)單敘述一次與別人發(fā)生沖突的經(jīng)歷；2. 你認(rèn)為該如何正確處理日常生活中發(fā)生的沖突（至少兩點(diǎn)建議）；3. 呼吁大家友好相處。作文要求：1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱(chēng)和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。2. 語(yǔ)句連貫，詞數(shù)80左右。作文的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Life is full of the unexpected, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Life is full of the unexpected. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, a schoolmate and I hit into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then we started shouting, and it turned into a terrible quarrel. To be honest, it was neither my fault nor the schoolmate’s, only because we both cared too much about winning and losing. That made me feel shameful.In our daily lives, we should deal with these quarrels properly. Firstly, try to be friendly to each other. Secondly, we should municate more and put ourselves in other’s place. Don’t be a selfish person and try to deal with everything calmly and wisely.It’s very important to get on well with each other. Let’s build a friendly, peaceful and safe society together and make our life better and better.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如full of，during the basketball game，each other，try to do，turn into，to be honest，neither…nor，care about，too much，deal with等。而固定句型It’s very important to get on well with each ’t be a selfish person and try to deal with everything calmly and ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。8．假設(shè)你是光明中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你正在參加“發(fā)現(xiàn)心靈最美的人，創(chuàng)建城市文明，爭(zhēng)做文明市民” 活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下漢語(yǔ)提示寫(xiě)一篇英文發(fā)言稿。1. 上周三放學(xué)時(shí)，雨下得很大，于是在校門(mén)口打了一輛出租車(chē)；2. 下車(chē)時(shí)由于匆忙把英語(yǔ)書(shū)落在車(chē)上；書(shū)上有你的姓名；3. 到家發(fā)現(xiàn)書(shū)不見(jiàn)時(shí)，感到很焦急；4. 幸運(yùn)的是第二天早上，司機(jī)把書(shū)送到學(xué)校；5. 當(dāng)看到自己的書(shū)時(shí)，既開(kāi)心又感動(dòng)；