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________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The activity of “Reading in Guangzhou” has been held in Guangzhou for quite a while. Reading makes us wise . It can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring us happiness. Keeping reading every day is a good habit. We should spend at least twenty minutes in reading after class. What’s more, try to make notes for good points while reading. We can also hold some reading activities in our class. For example, watch some good programs such as Readers and then share some good books introduced by the readers. Also, a book corner can be set up in our classroom so that we can read at any time after class.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文,內(nèi)容包括提示內(nèi)容以及談?wù)勛约簩﹂喿x的看法,并對培養(yǎng)閱讀習慣和開展班級閱讀活動方面提出建議,人稱為第一人稱,時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時,同時注意恰當使用連詞使文章邏輯關(guān)系更為緊密。高分句型:1. It can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring us happiness. 它不僅能幫助我們更多地了解這個世界,而且能帶給我們幸福。not only …but also… 不但……而且……,并列連詞短語。2. Keeping reading every day is a good habit. 每天堅持閱讀是一個好習慣。Keeping reading every day動名詞短語作主語。3. Also, a book corner can be set up in our classroom so that we can read at any time after ,我們的教室里還可以設(shè)置一個讀書角,以便課后隨時閱讀。此句是一個復合句,主句是含有情態(tài)動詞的被動語態(tài),so that引導的是目的狀語從句。8.A good book is important to me要求:1. 緊扣主題,意思連貫,語言通順,書寫規(guī)范。2. 不得使用真實姓名和校名,如需使用名字,請用Mike, Gina等英文名字。 校名統(tǒng)一使用Guangming Middle School。3. 詞數(shù)不少于60?!敬鸢浮緼 good book is important for me. It can not only help broaden my horizons, but also give me inspiration. From the good book, I can learn what others think, and their views about the world. What’s more, I can even live their lives, which are totally different from mine. For me, a good book is really like a good friend, who can teach me how to solve the problems when I am in trouble. A good book helps me a lot, and it is quite important for me in my life.【解析】【分析】本題是命題作文,根據(jù)題目一本好書對我是重要的,自己寫相關(guān)內(nèi)容,可以是你讀了什么書,該書對你產(chǎn)生了什么影響。也可以是一本好書為什么對你來說是重要的。【詳解】本篇文章主要從為什么對我重要這個角度來寫。文章時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱為第一人稱。題目并沒有給過多的提示信息,所以需要學生自己思索行文內(nèi)容。在寫作時,注意緊扣主題,連句成篇,要層次清楚,要點分明,中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查,確保正確無誤。【點睛】首先認真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點;然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達;然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時可適當運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9.書面表達校園安全問題越來越受到重視,為了確保學生的安全,學校制訂了一些規(guī)章制度。請根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,以“School safety”為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文。提示:1. 遵守校規(guī),按時到校、離校;2. 不接受陌生人的物品;3. 結(jié)伴同行,天黑前到家;4. 遇到麻煩及時告知家長和老師。School safety_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】School safetyMore and more people pay special attention to the school safety nowadays. Here are some rules to keep us safe.First, as students, we should follow the school rules, such as not being late for school and leaving school early. Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. Third, it’s better for us to have partners on the way home and to school and we must get home before dark. Fourth, if we are in trouble, don’t forget to tell our parents or teachers as soon as possible.I think these rules are good for us. We must obey them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文,根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下校園安全。所提供的材料中列舉了為了確保學生的安全,學校制訂了一些規(guī)章制度。主要從1. 遵守校規(guī),按時到校、離校;2. 不接受陌生人的物品;3. 結(jié)伴同行,天黑前到家;4. 遇到麻煩及時告知家長和老師。這四個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱為第一人稱。本文是提建議,因此用shouldn’t或should來寫。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息,并適當發(fā)揮。寫作時,避免使用漢語式的英語,盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確,表達要符合英語習慣,注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系,表達具有條理性?!靖叻志湫鸵弧縎econd, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. 第二,我們不應(yīng)該和陌生人一起去,也不應(yīng)該接受陌生人的東西。本句話是由and連接的并列句?!靖叻志湫投縄 think these rules are good for us. 我認為這些規(guī)則對我們有好處。句子these rules are good for 。