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on better, I should develop good life habits to keep healthy. Then making friends and municating with them can make me happier. What’s more, there exist dreams and beautiful future waiting for us. I should not be pessimistic (悲觀的). So never give in to the difficulties and stress easily. I believe I deserve having success.【解析】【詳解】本文寫給未來(lái)的自己,目的在于傾訴壓力,尋求方法,并重拾信心。第一段指出導(dǎo)致壓力的兩個(gè)方面First,I can’t ignore my parents’ expectation . Second, there is endless homework and tests every , Second點(diǎn)出。第二自然段提到釋放壓力的方法,應(yīng)用In order to表目的。用What’s more表遞進(jìn)結(jié)構(gòu)。并用祈使句So never give in to the difficulties and stress easily點(diǎn)題呼吁。整篇文章層次分明,結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。8.假如你是韓梅,你的一位英國(guó)筆友Kate發(fā)來(lái)電子郵件,說(shuō)她下星期來(lái)中國(guó),她向你詢問(wèn)中國(guó)的餐桌禮儀。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提示給她回一封電子郵件,告訴她有關(guān)情況。詞數(shù)80~100。提示:;;;;、健康、成功干杯……Dear kate,I’m glad to receive your . Now I want to tell you something about the Chinese table manners._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,【答案】Dear Kate,I’m glad to receive your . Now I want to tell you something about the chinese table manners.In China. the host or hostess doesn’t eat every dish first until the guests and elders begin. You can’t tap bowls with the chopsticks. You shouldn’t reach across the table or in front of someone to get something to eat. You can eat until everyone is at the table. Besides, you should toast longevity, good health or success of the host or hostess.Wele to China!Yours,Han Mei【解析】【詳解】本文是書信寫作,注意書信寫作格式,開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾。把自己當(dāng)做韓梅,切不可在文中出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)名字等信息。要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)來(lái)寫作。學(xué)生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀材料中給出的短語(yǔ)及相關(guān)信息,認(rèn)真審題,確定文章的中心。在寫作的文章具有一定的連貫性,還應(yīng)注意使用一些連接詞,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性和條理性。寫作時(shí)還要注意:;,使內(nèi)容充實(shí),行文連貫;,有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤等。高分句型:In 。the host or hostess doesn’t eat every dish first until the guests and elders ,主人不會(huì)先把每道菜都吃完。You shouldn’t reach across the table or in front of someone to get something to 。Besides, you should toast longevity, good health or success of the host or ,你應(yīng)該為主人的長(zhǎng)壽、健康或成功干杯?!军c(diǎn)睛】注意寫作過(guò)程中,將要點(diǎn)展開(kāi)并表達(dá)清楚,注意使用英語(yǔ)的經(jīng)典句型,避免出現(xiàn)漢語(yǔ)表達(dá)。9.(B)按要求完成大作文(80詞左右)節(jié)約資源,保護(hù)環(huán)境,從我們身邊的小事做起。假設(shè)你是一個(gè)注重“低碳”生活的中學(xué)生,請(qǐng)以“My Green Life”為題寫一篇短文,簡(jiǎn)單談?wù)劇熬G色生活”的重要性,以及你所倡導(dǎo)的“綠色生活”方式。寫作要求:詞數(shù)80詞左右,開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù),不得透露姓名等個(gè)人信息?!敬鸢浮縈y Green LifeAs the environment goes worse and worse, I think living a green life is really important for every one of us. Only when we live a green life can we have a better living environment. As for me, in my daily life, I often go to school by bike. It can not only help exercise myself, but also makes contribution to protecting the environment. Besides, I always turn off the lights whenever I am out to save energy. I hope everyone can live a green life.【解析】【分析】本文主題關(guān)于綠色生活,環(huán)境保護(hù),注意文章內(nèi)容。【詳解】首先點(diǎn)明如今的生活環(huán)境,越來(lái)越差,綠色生活勢(shì)在必行。其次點(diǎn)明綠色生活的重要性。然后說(shuō)我在日常生活中對(duì)綠色出行作出的貢獻(xiàn),騎自行車,出門關(guān)燈等。最后呼吁大家一起努力?!军c(diǎn)睛】首先正確理解作文題目,不要偏題,本文是關(guān)于綠色生活,它的重要性,以及你在日常生活中是如何踐行綠色生活的。其次,在語(yǔ)句正確的基礎(chǔ)上,多運(yùn)用連詞,使文章升華,長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合,使文章更上一檔次。