【正文】 揮； 3．詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)） Dear Future Me, It is pleasant to spare my free time to municate with you．I am so worried that … Your sincerely【答案】It is pleasant to spare my free time to municate with you．I am so worried that I can’t deal with all the problems present, which are mainly caused by two ,I can’t ignore my parents’ expectation .With the price of houses rising, they always work hard. However, they are more worried about their children’s exam as the final exam is approaching. Second, there is endless homework and tests every day. Therefore, I need change myself. In order to adapt to the situation better, I should develop good life habits to keep healthy. Then making friends and municating with them can make me happier. What’s more, there exist dreams and beautiful future waiting for us. I should not be pessimistic (悲觀的). So never give in to the difficulties and stress easily. I believe I deserve having success.【解析】【詳解】本文寫給未來的自己，目的在于傾訴壓力，尋求方法，并重拾信心。第一段指出導(dǎo)致壓力的兩個(gè)方面First,I can’t ignore my parents’ expectation . Second, there is endless homework and tests every , Second點(diǎn)出。第二自然段提到釋放壓力的方法，應(yīng)用In order to表目的。用What’s more表遞進(jìn)結(jié)構(gòu)。并用祈使句So never give in to the difficulties and stress easily點(diǎn)題呼吁。整篇文章層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。8． 人類只有一個(gè)地球。根據(jù)提示，以“Saving the Earth”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。提示: ；，損害健康；，亂排廢水；，使我們的家園更加美麗。 【答案】Saving the EarthThe earth is our home. We should take care of it. But some things we have done are bad for the earth. We have polluted the earth and made it sick. We cut down too many trees and change rich land into desert. Many factories pour waste water into rivers and lakes. Pollution has caused some serious problems. For example, much of the land is poor, some rivers and lakes are dirty. Even the temperature of the earth is rising. The earth is crying for help.What shall we do to save it? My suggestions are that we should plant more trees, put the rubbish into dustbins and stop factories from pouring waste water directly into rivers. After all, we have only one earth. We should do everything we can to protect it, or we’ll be punished and lose our home.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文,動(dòng)筆前首先要認(rèn)真審題,弄清題意。然后根據(jù)主題組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文包含了所有要點(diǎn)，能圍繞內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，內(nèi)容具體、豐富。應(yīng)用了較豐富的語言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚，具有較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力。層次清晰，語言地道，主題鮮明，內(nèi)容翔實(shí)，格式正確，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。使用了一些比較好的字句。比如：one of the biggest problems in the world；such as比如；not only……but also……；We must try our best to……等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩?？键c(diǎn)：考查提綱類作文9．“友善”是一種美德，它猶如陽光和雨露照耀并滋潤著美德的形成。同學(xué)們，請奉獻(xiàn)你的友善，為創(chuàng)建和諧社會(huì)做出貢獻(xiàn)。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“友善待人、快樂生活”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪心銓λ颂峁┥埔鈳椭慕?jīng)歷。主要內(nèi)容包括:你對友善行為的認(rèn)識和理解，你平時(shí)做哪些友善的事情，以及你這樣做的美好愿望。提示詞語:kind，politely, trouble, offer, proud，society提示問題:What do you think of showing kindness to others?How do you help them kindly in your daily life?What do you dream about being kind to them?It39。s our duty to show kindness to others around us. _________________________________________________【答案】It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be kind to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll give a hand politely. In our munity, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the children who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many friends by helping others in need.I believe our society will bee better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談?wù)勆钪心銓λ颂峁┥埔鈳椭慕?jīng)歷。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。