【正文】 Just as we often say, “Exercise one hour a day keeps illness away. ”There are many kinds of sports we can do, such as running, swimming and playing ball games. But we have to do too much homework after school, I hope teachers will give us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in sports. I also hope our school can organize more sports activities for us. In order to build ourselves stronger and stronger,let’s take active part in all kinds of sports in proper time. Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文。講述鍛煉身體的好處、鍛煉的方式，并建議大家積極參加體育活動。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如either...or..., be based on, keep healthy, such as, have time to do, take part in, in order to, stronger and stronger以及all kinds of等，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8． 為響應(yīng)我市全面創(chuàng)建國家文明城市的號召，麗水市中小學(xué)開展“文明城市，健康生活”為主題的英語征文活動。請你以“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”為題，根據(jù)表格中的圖片及文字提示，簡要描述并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，寫一篇英語短文。Subject The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeWays of doing ride bikes, reduce air pollution, throw rubbish into the bins, keep the city clean, plant more trees,…Your opinion……(至少2條)注意：(1)詞數(shù)80100左右，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；(2)文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己的姓名。The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeAs a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to____________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeAs a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to help build a civilized city so that we can live a healthy life. We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles. It’s better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin. In this way, we can keep our city clean. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the natural environment.In my opinion, I’ll try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful. Firstly, I can save water by taking shorter showers. Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. In a word, everyone can do something to make a difference.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。話題是“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”；并給了一些提示和注意事項：(1)詞數(shù)80100左右，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；(2)文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己的姓名。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，要用上提示詞，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實(shí)，最后寫出你的觀點(diǎn)。注意主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。注意單詞拼寫，不要犯單詞拼寫錯誤，字?jǐn)?shù)要符合要求?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫；語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，沒有單詞拼寫錯誤，字?jǐn)?shù)符合題目要求。9．假設(shè)某英文報“我愛寫作”欄目為了配合創(chuàng)建“學(xué)習(xí)型城市”，正在舉辦專題英語征文比賽。請你根據(jù)下表所列的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，以“Lifelong Learning”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，參加比賽。終身學(xué)習(xí)的意義1．人們上學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)、參加考試，但學(xué)習(xí)不只在學(xué)校；2．學(xué)校畢業(yè)，不是學(xué)習(xí)的終止。終身學(xué)習(xí)的途徑去博物館、閱讀書籍、體育鍛煉、外出旅行終身學(xué)習(xí)的益處考生自擬(至少一點(diǎn))注意：1．詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；2．短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順； 3．短文不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。Lifelong LearningWhen you finish high school or university，is learning done? The answer is“no．”In many countries，people continue learning all their lives．【答案】When you finish high school or university，is learning done? The answer is“no．”many countries，people continue learning all their lives．Why is lifelong learning important? You go to school and learn．You study．Y take tests．But learning doesn’t only happen in school．And learning doesn’t stop wh you finish high school or university．You are learning all the time．For example，learni can happen when you go to a museum．It can also happen when you read a book．Y learn when you play a sport or when you take a trip．Learning is life! We never st learning．Every day，you can improve yourself by learning something new【解析】試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯的文章?？键c(diǎn)：提綱類作文