【正文】 _____________________________________________________________________________________If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better.【答案】How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be recycled. Thus, less trees won39。t be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Don39。t throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment.If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如how to do，live in，around us， such as，as a middle school student，and so on，close down the water，turn off the lights，cut down，make a contribution to our earth，pollute our environment，better and better等。而固定結(jié)構(gòu)But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?和I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。8．書面表達(dá) 以下是你校校刊YOUTH中YOUR VOICE欄目的征稿內(nèi)容，請根據(jù)提示，用英語寫一篇短文，表達(dá)你的想法。Hi,I’m David, the editor of YOUTH. We all know the exchange students are going back to the US soon. We would like to give them some traditional Chinese things as gifts, such as Chinese paintings, silk, tea …Today I would like to collect some ideas. In your article, you should:216。 remend two traditional Chinese things216。 show your reasons why you remend themLooking forward to hearing from you.David注意事項(xiàng)：1. 對所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2. 要求語句通順、意思連貫、符合情境；3. 詞數(shù)在90個(gè)左右，感謝信的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4. 文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Dear Sir/Madam, I am glad to share my opinion with ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,I am glad to share my opinion with you. I would like to remend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintings have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the US. Foreign friends can learn more about Chinese art from them. The second gift I want to remend is silk scarves. Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and fortable. Why not buy them some silk scarves? I believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us.【解析】【詳解】本文主要是向別人分享想法，推薦禮物。第一句話點(diǎn)題，隨后引出文章的兩個(gè)主題，一 remend two traditional Chinese things。例如：I would like to remend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintings have a long history. 以及The second gift I want to remend is silk show your reasons why you remend them。理由一：because Chinese paintings have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the US. 理由二：Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us總結(jié)全篇。文章干凈利落，層次分明。9．“友善”是一種美德，它猶如陽光和雨露照耀并滋潤著美德的形成。同學(xué)們，請奉獻(xiàn)你的友善，為創(chuàng)建和諧社會做出貢獻(xiàn)。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“友善待人、快樂生活”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪心銓λ颂峁┥埔鈳椭慕?jīng)歷。主要內(nèi)容包括:你對友善行為的認(rèn)識和理解，你平時(shí)做哪些友善的事情，以及你這樣做的美好愿望。提示詞語:kind，politely, trouble, offer, proud，society提示問題:What do you think of showing kindness to others?How do you help them kindly in your daily life?What do you dream about being kind to them?It39。s our duty to show kindness to others around us. _________________________________________________【答案】It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be kind to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll give a hand politely. In our munity, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the children who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many friends by helping others in need.I believe our society will bee better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談?wù)勆钪心銓λ颂峁┥埔鈳椭慕?jīng)歷。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。