【正文】 （大英博物館）watch football matches…Activitiesvisit the Sydney Opera Housetravel around the Gold Coast （黃金海岸）have fun with kangaroos and koalas…Attentionchangeable weatherAttentionwinterCost20,000 yuanCost16,000 yuan要求：1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括某一國家的所有信息及選擇的理由； 2. 結(jié)合游玩國家的情況，自擬希望可以安排的活動，并提出12點出游的注意事項；3. 文章不少于90詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；4. 語義通順、意思連貫、條理清楚、書寫規(guī)范；5. 不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。The summer holiday is ing. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I hope I will have a good time there!【答案】The summer holiday is ing. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I have read information about two countries——Britain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we can go to time is july 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football first, I want us to visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Next I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting.However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconvenient. And it39。s expensive to travel to the UK, which costs 20000 yuan, But I still want to travel to England.I hope I will have a good time there!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。中考后暑假即將開始，你和一些同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備結(jié)伴出國旅行。旅行社提供了兩個國家供你選擇游玩。要求根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息將你的選擇用英文向同學(xué)們介紹。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。10．書面表達(dá)根據(jù)下表用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文，內(nèi)容須包括：對下表中關(guān)于（City A和City B）的全部信息進行比較，分析利弊，確定其中一個城市作為你的暑假旅游目的地。City ACity BFlying2 hours4 hoursTemperature30℃18℃Hotel★★★★★★Things to do★★★★★★Food★★★★★★In my opinion, is he better place to spend my summer holiday.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less fortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.【解析】【詳解】試題分析：本題給出了兩個城市的飛行時常、氣溫、旅館情況。食物等相關(guān)信息，要求考生對每個信息進行比較，選擇自己要去的暑假旅游目的地。雖然字?jǐn)?shù)要求不多，但可以很好地考查考生英語寫作的基本功，需要考生對常用的英語句型熟練掌握。熟悉英語的表達(dá)方式。避免漢語式英語。句型不要都用簡單句。另外，一定要注意題目要求，把每一個信息都進行比較，不要有漏掉。寫作亮點：本篇作文按照題目要求選擇了城市A作為自己暑假旅游的目的地。對于城市A的缺點，作者用了“Although”盡管一詞輕輕帶過。對于優(yōu)點則重點突出，因為在城市A可以做很多事情，作者在這里用了詞組“a lot of ”。在比較的時候，作者用了多種方式，使句子不單調(diào)，比如在比較溫度時，直接用比較級“higher”在說旅館時用了“l(fā)ess fortable ”，比較食物時，用了“as…as”等。在說選擇城市A的原因時，用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句。本文大部分都是復(fù)雜句，顯示了作者比較熟練的英語寫作水平。