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...... 感想建議環(huán)境能夠變得更好......Change for a better China________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We all know it is being more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.【解析】【詳解】環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一,請以Change for a better China為主題,結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。注意事項:,條理清楚,作適當發(fā)揮。增強邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,句子通順,行文連貫。(多數(shù)學生的觀點、男生的觀點、女生的觀點)。【點睛】本文首先開篇功能句Thank you for your ,運用多種連接詞,比如because,Besides,To realize my dream, 等使文章連貫性強,長短句結(jié)合,讀起來朗朗上口,不失為一篇佳作。為了實現(xiàn)自己的夢想,正在為此作出努力?!驹斀狻渴紫然卮鹇殬I(yè)是教師。Dear Bill,Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school39。請認真閱讀下面的郵件, 根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容和你的實際情況給他寫封回信。China is a nation of etiquette(禮儀),中國是一個禮儀之邦??梢赃m當使用高分句子。【點睛】寫作中注意語義通順,符合邏輯關(guān)系,上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。細心檢查避免疏漏。表格中列舉了三個要點,寫作時注意不要漏寫。 參考詞匯: civilized 文明的Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization(文明) of China, I would like to share something with you. I hope you can e to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon.All the best,Li Hua【答案】Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization(文明) of China, I would like to share something with you.Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, MidAutumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Her