【正文】 I hope I will have a good time there!【答案】The summer holiday is ing. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I have read information about two countries——Britain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we can go to time is july 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football first, I want us to visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Next I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting.However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconvenient. And it39。s expensive to travel to the UK, which costs 20000 yuan, But I still want to travel to England.I hope I will have a good time there!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。中考后暑假即將開(kāi)始，你和一些同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備結(jié)伴出國(guó)旅行。旅行社提供了兩個(gè)國(guó)家供你選擇游玩。要求根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息將你的選擇用英文向同學(xué)們介紹。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。6．書(shū)面表達(dá)。，你最近認(rèn)識(shí)的美國(guó)筆友David給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，向了解你進(jìn)初三以來(lái)在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面的一些變化、收獲和感受。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示及你的實(shí)際寫(xiě)封回信。 提示：less free time，much homework，more pressure，get into a good high schoolmore exercise，lose weight join the English Comer，improve English a lotcolorful and meaningful，learn more knowledge注意：1）詞數(shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2）回復(fù)須包括所有藥店，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使全文連貫、通順；3）文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dear David，Thank you so much for your mail. I39。m happy to tell you about how my life has changed recently. 【答案】Dear David，Thank you so much for your mail. I39。m happy to tell you about how my life has changed recently. In the past , I had a lot of free time. In my free time , I used to take more exercise to lose weight. My life has changed a lot since I got into a good high school. I have more pressure . I have much homework to do every day . I have less free time to do leisure activities. In my spare time , I join in the English corner to practice my spoken English. This improves my English a lot . I learn more knowledge . My life is busy but it is colorful and meaningful.Best wishes，Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文是一篇材料作文?！驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)題干“假如你是李華，你最近認(rèn)識(shí)的美國(guó)筆友David給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，向了解你進(jìn)初三以來(lái)在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面的一些變化、收獲和感受?！币罂芍?，本文用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱(chēng)是第一人稱(chēng)。英語(yǔ)作文一般分為三個(gè)部分：第一部分：開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題——介紹我進(jìn)初三以來(lái)在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面的一些變化、收獲和感受。第二部分：文章主體——根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，依次介紹我進(jìn)初三以來(lái)在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面的一些變化、收獲和感受。這里要分為三個(gè)小節(jié)：小節(jié)1：過(guò)去我的學(xué)習(xí)和生活是什么樣的——有肯多課余時(shí)間做自己喜歡的事情。用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。小節(jié)2：進(jìn)初三以來(lái)在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面發(fā)生了變化。用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。小節(jié)3：介紹現(xiàn)在的生活狀態(tài)——忙碌的學(xué)習(xí)。用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。第三部分：總結(jié)全文——我的生活很忙但是很有意義。7．“苔花如米小,也學(xué)牡丹開(kāi)?！蔽覀兇蠖鄶?shù)人雖然微不足道,但也能有所作為。請(qǐng)以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of 為題用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)以寫(xiě)一篇短文,描述你曾經(jīng)做過(guò)得引以自豪一件事情。要求:。 【答案】One thing I felt very proud ofI will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears. I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of為題，介紹自己曾經(jīng)做過(guò)的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。作文是開(kāi)放式的，題目中只給了主題，具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力去補(bǔ)充。審題可知，體裁是記敘文，記敘一件自己做過(guò)的事情，且是能讓自己感到自豪的，故文章應(yīng)使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱(chēng)以第一人稱(chēng)為主。短文應(yīng)由開(kāi)頭、主體和結(jié)尾三部分組成，開(kāi)頭引出話題；第二部分為中心，具體描述事情的過(guò)程；最后一部分簡(jiǎn)要描寫(xiě)一下自己的感受。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能按照漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯，寫(xiě)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用較常見(jiàn)、易于把握的簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。為提升作文檔次，穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句，如賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等。或使用祈使句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、感嘆句等特殊句式結(jié)構(gòu)。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，以使文意連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求描述了自己做過(guò)的一件引以為豪的事情。短文有如下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)：首先短文內(nèi)容完整、充實(shí)，敘述具體，詳細(xì)，作者描寫(xiě)了自己做飯給媽媽?xiě)c祝生日這件事，符合題目要求。文章分三段，第一段用一句話引出話題；第二段詳細(xì)描寫(xiě)了事情的過(guò)程；最后一段寫(xiě)了自己的感受。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，安排合理。其次短文里使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，文章以一般過(guò)去時(shí)、第一人稱(chēng)敘述，注意了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式。語(yǔ)言得體，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句、并列句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等復(fù)雜句式結(jié)構(gòu)。短文中較好的句型和短語(yǔ)有：I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.、To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday、Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned、Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears等。8．“友善”是一種美德，它猶如陽(yáng)光和雨露照耀并滋潤(rùn)著美德的形成。同學(xué)們，請(qǐng)奉獻(xiàn)你的友善，為創(chuàng)建和諧社會(huì)做出貢獻(xiàn)。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“友善待人、快樂(lè)生活”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪心銓?duì)他人提供善意幫助的經(jīng)歷。主要內(nèi)容包括:你對(duì)友善行為的認(rèn)識(shí)和理解，你平時(shí)做哪些友善的事情，以及你這樣做的美好愿望。提示詞語(yǔ):kind，politely, trouble, offer, proud，society提示問(wèn)題:What do you think of showing kindness to others?How do you help them kindly in your daily life?What do you dream about being kind to them?It39。s our duty to show kindness to others around us. _________________________________________________【答案】It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be kind to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll give a hand politely. In our munity, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the children who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many friends by helping others in need.I believe our society will bee better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談?wù)勆钪心銓?duì)他人提供善意幫助的經(jīng)歷。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。9． Have you got anything that is branded on your memory, making you feel happy, satisfied, proud or just feel sad, terrible, and regretful? Maybe you did it, experienced it, read it, saw it or only heard of it. Please write a position with the title “The ________ thing that I have ever ________” to share your story. The following information should be included: 1. How did you get the story?2. When and where did it happen? 3. What happened exactly?4. Why is it branded on your memory? Please list at least two reasons.【答案】請(qǐng)參考范文：The happy thing that I h