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et around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What’s more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can’t return public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it’s a way of living a green life.【解析】這是一篇材料作文,要求給英文報(bào)社寫一篇投稿,介紹對(duì)共享單車看法。作文應(yīng)包括4個(gè)主要內(nèi)容,一個(gè)是社會(huì)現(xiàn)狀,第二個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn),第三是存在的問題,最后發(fā)表個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真審題,深入挖掘題材內(nèi)涵,不可遺漏要點(diǎn),并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。要注意上下文的連貫,將這些內(nèi)容有機(jī)的連接起來,不要逐句翻譯。使用一些好的句型和短語,注意正確的時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài)以及謂語動(dòng)詞的形式,還需要注意英語表達(dá)和漢語習(xí)慣的不同,讓整篇短文表達(dá)流暢。9.書面表達(dá)為了配合“足球進(jìn)校園”活動(dòng),你們班開展了一次主題班會(huì)。請(qǐng)你以足球迷的身份,根據(jù)下列表格中的要點(diǎn)提示,用英語向同學(xué)們介紹足球這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)并談?wù)勛约旱膲?mèng)想。常 識(shí)歷史悠久,深受喜愛世界杯4年舉行一次好 處男生女生皆可參加利于培養(yǎng)團(tuán)隊(duì)精神考生自擬(至少1點(diǎn))偶 像梅西,有足球天賦夢(mèng) 想考生自擬(至少1點(diǎn))注意:1. 詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);,不要逐詞翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順;、校名等相關(guān)信息。參考詞匯:梅西 MessiDear classmates,I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 footballthemed schools by 2020. Thank you for your attention.【答案】Dear classmates,I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 footballthemed schools by 2020.Football has a very long history.It is liked by people all over the world.The World Cup takes place every four years.Playing football has lots of advantages.First,both boys and girls can take part in it.Second,it helps develop team spirit.What’s more,playing football is good for our health.I’m a football fan.Messi is my hero.He has a gift for playing football.My dream is to bee a famous football player like Messi.I hope China will hold the World Cup some day.Thank you for your attention.【解析】【詳解】試題分析:本題要求按提綱的提示,介紹足球運(yùn)動(dòng)并談?wù)勛约旱膲?mèng)想。要求仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確本文主要從三個(gè)方面來寫:介紹足球運(yùn)動(dòng)及其好處;說說自己的偶像;談?wù)勛约旱膲?mèng)想。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài);語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣。寫作亮點(diǎn):本文語言精煉,像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子,簡(jiǎn)潔,但是句意表達(dá)清楚;同時(shí),本文用了被動(dòng)語態(tài)、動(dòng)名詞作主語、不定式作表語等等語法形式,使表達(dá)生動(dòng);用了first, second等使得短文層次清楚。10.近期某英文報(bào)紙就“Snowplow Parents(掃雪機(jī)式父母)”這一話題展開討論?!皰哐C(jī)式父母”的特征是不惜一切代價(jià)為孩子掃除他們生活中遇到的一切障礙,解決一切困難,以便他們可以輕松擁有成功的人生。請(qǐng)從下表的兩種觀點(diǎn)中選擇一種觀點(diǎn),并結(jié)合此觀點(diǎn)闡述自己的看法,用英文寫一篇短文投稿。觀點(diǎn)理解不理解父母出于對(duì)孩子的愛才這么做。父母控制一切,孩子沒有自由。自己的看法自己的看法要求:詞數(shù):6080詞。短文應(yīng)包括所選觀點(diǎn)中的要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文I really can39。t understand the snowplow these parents,they control clean all the obstacles in children39。s this case,they think children have a successful life ,Children have no freedom to do is the worst thing in their life.In my opinion,parents shouldn39。t do all the things for they also need the experiences in their these experiences play an important role in a successful this way,they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in ,they sometimes can gain friendship and more love in their lives.【解析】【詳解】:本文是一篇話題作文,要求就“Snowplow Parents(掃雪機(jī)式父母)” 這一話題展開討論,并根據(jù)表格中所給出的提示內(nèi)容選擇一種觀點(diǎn),結(jié)合此觀點(diǎn)闡述自己的看法。在解答寫作這類試題時(shí),要根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結(jié)尾,將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語草草記下,形成提綱,然后再動(dòng)筆寫作。: 本文時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱主要為第三人稱,輔以第一人稱。文章首先說明不理解掃雪機(jī)式父母的原因,接下來說明自己的觀點(diǎn),并闡述自己觀點(diǎn)的原因。:短語:in one39。s lives,in this case,in this way,in trouble。句型:高分句型一:Inthiscase,theythinkchildrenhaveasuccessfullifeeasily.Inthiscase在這樣的情況下;這句話意為:在這樣的情況下,他們認(rèn)為孩子會(huì)更加輕松擁有成功的人生。高分句型二:they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in trouble.beintrouble陷入麻煩,這句話意為:當(dāng)他們陷入麻煩時(shí)他們知道他們需要他們自己盡力去解決問題。