【正文】 hat did you do?用一般過去時，描寫How do you feel?用一般現(xiàn)在時。書寫時要緊扣主題，文句通順?！芭懿健保牟糠衷敿?xì)地描寫了自己起初跑步總是不及格，通過克服困難、不懈地努力，堅持跑步，到現(xiàn)在比以前會跑；結(jié)尾談了這件事對自己的影響；文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，前后呼應(yīng)。比如：固定搭配、固定句型It39。s +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of；不定式in order to；try my best to；狀語從句so…that …；比較級do much better in …、feel more confident等；短語多彩、文句表達(dá)多樣。 ”9．同學(xué)們，初中生活即將結(jié)束，本次考試后，盼望已久的假期就要到來！請你根據(jù)以下提示，制定出度假計劃，可以結(jié)合自己的實際發(fā)揮。 寫作內(nèi)容：，享受大自然的美景，放松心情。，幫家長做家務(wù)。 寫作要求： 詞左右，開頭部分已給出，但不計入規(guī)定字?jǐn)?shù)。；要點齊全；句子及篇章結(jié)構(gòu)正確、連貫；書寫規(guī)范。My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays. 【答案】My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my parents to do some housework in my free. I will also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous , I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.I39。m sure I39。ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.【解析】試題分析：短文要制定出度假計劃，文章需要用第一人稱“I”進(jìn)行書寫，不可使用“we/ you”等其他人稱。文章主要內(nèi)容為計劃的書寫，主要使用一般將來時態(tài)。所寫的句子要符合英語語法，不能遺漏要點。寫作亮點：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：e to an end結(jié)束；on the way在途中；get close to nature親近大自然；volunteer to do something自愿做某事；help sb to do sth幫助某人做某事；take part in sth參加活動。用了一些銜接詞besides等，句子過度自然。用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句，增加了文章的亮點?？键c：考查提綱作文。10．書面表達(dá)初中就要畢業(yè)了，校報“英語角”欄目向同學(xué)們征集畢業(yè)晚會的計劃。假定你是李華，請根據(jù)要點 寫一封信，說說你的計劃?；顒赢厴I(yè)晚會時間6月28日晚上七點地點學(xué)校禮堂school hall參與者全體初三學(xué)生和老師活動內(nèi)容1.邀請校長作演講；2.互贈禮物送祝福；3.各班表演精彩節(jié)目4. 要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使句子通順，連貫。 ，語法正確，書寫整潔。 ，開頭結(jié)尾己給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 。Dear editor,I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes,Yours Lihua【答案】Dear editor,I39。m very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.Best wishes,Yours,Li hua【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達(dá)主要是推薦自己的畢業(yè)晚會計劃。【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹畢業(yè)典禮活動計劃。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。