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hinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Let’s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,我通過(guò)微信告訴Lucy要去哪,在那里要做什么以及何時(shí)何地見(jiàn)面。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí),人稱為第一人稱,注意主謂一致問(wèn)題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用,比如:I want to……,We are going to……,We can……,Let’s meet at……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我想要邀請(qǐng)你去老舍茶館,接下來(lái)介紹我們?nèi)ツ抢镒鍪裁?,最后指出我們要在何時(shí)何地見(jiàn)面。此處want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。9.2019年2月20日,中央宣傳部授予北京榜樣優(yōu)秀群體“時(shí)代楷模”稱號(hào)。時(shí)代楷模充分體現(xiàn)“愛(ài)國(guó)、敬業(yè)、誠(chéng)信、友善”的價(jià)值準(zhǔn)則。某網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“向時(shí)代楷模學(xué)習(xí)”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文投稿,談?wù)勆钪心阍撛趺醋?,以及這樣做的意義。提示詞語(yǔ):pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important提示問(wèn)題:● What should you do in your daily life? ● Why do you do so? As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. 【答案】例文As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warmhearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will bee more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀:該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作,但寫作時(shí)要按照應(yīng)用文格式寫,寫作時(shí)承接短文開(kāi)頭,具體寫出怎樣做以及這樣做的意義。例文點(diǎn)評(píng):例文采用的是一段式,人稱用的是第一人稱復(fù)數(shù)形式,時(shí)態(tài)主要用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),描述具體怎么做時(shí),描寫細(xì)致,條理清晰。高分亮點(diǎn):短語(yǔ):protect the environment;pick up the rubbish;behave well;be kind to sb;more and more beautiful。句型:By doing so, our world will bee more and more beautiful;we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。10.中學(xué)生在成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中經(jīng)常會(huì)碰到一些煩惱。假設(shè)你是李華,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示,用英語(yǔ)寫一篇發(fā)言稿,在班會(huì)上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇?。你的煩惱你的做法個(gè)頭不高,相貌平常不必在意,相信自己父母不理解,朋友少學(xué)會(huì)溝通,友善待人學(xué)習(xí)壓力大,課外活動(dòng)少……(自主發(fā)揮,至少兩點(diǎn))要求:1. 詞數(shù)100左右,開(kāi)頭及結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的信息,并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。3. 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。Hello everyone,Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. That’s all. Thank you!【答案】Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.I am not very tall and very mon. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to municate with others very well.I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the afterclass activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.That’s all. Thank you!【解析】試題分析:本題是一篇給材料作文,要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇發(fā)言稿,在班會(huì)上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇?。要求從個(gè)人外貌特點(diǎn)、與人溝通及學(xué)習(xí)壓力等方面進(jìn)行寫作。要包含表格中所有的信息,并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。短文用第一人稱形式,一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。寫作亮點(diǎn):短文開(kāi)頭直奔主題:我想要談?wù)勎业臒兰霸鯓犹幚硭麄?;后面三段分別從外貌上的煩惱、與父母交流上的障礙、學(xué)習(xí)上的壓力幾方面分別談?wù)撟约旱臒兰疤幚淼姆绞?,生?dòng)具體,條理分明。文中的不定式作賓補(bǔ)、作定語(yǔ)、作賓語(yǔ)用得準(zhǔn)確恰當(dāng);and連接的并列句、并列謂語(yǔ)等等都使短文顯得簡(jiǎn)捷生動(dòng)?!究键c(diǎn)定位】 考查提綱類作文。