【正文】 ents I like making friends andI am outgoing，so it39。s easy for me to get along well with them.I have some plans for the of all，there are a lot of places of interest in Beijing，so I plan to take them to some places like the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and so on.I39。ll also cook some Chinese dishes for am sure they will have a great and unforgettable time in Beijing.I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li lHua【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，以書(shū)信格式，根據(jù)所給材料寫(xiě)申請(qǐng)信；書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)材料要用全，注意緊扣主題，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?！驹斀狻?，以第一人稱(chēng)向?qū)W校國(guó)際部申請(qǐng)當(dāng)志愿者；根據(jù)材料提示，介紹自己的情況用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，計(jì)劃如何安排周末活動(dòng)用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。，第一層闡述自己申請(qǐng)的理由，介紹自己開(kāi)朗的性格適合志愿者的工作；第二層詳細(xì)介紹給英國(guó)學(xué)生安排哪些周末活動(dòng)；最后表明自己的期待。文體正確，文句通順，內(nèi)容完整。，是文章文句精彩。如：用不定式would like to be a volunteer to receive the British students闡述自己的愿望，make friends、It39。s easy for me to get along well with等介紹自己合適志愿者的工作；用動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)have some plans for、 介詞短語(yǔ)like the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and so on.、賓語(yǔ)從句I am sure they will have a great and unforgettable time in ，短語(yǔ)豐富，句型多樣。8．書(shū)面表達(dá) 以下是你校校刊YOUTH中YOUR VOICE欄目的征稿內(nèi)容，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，表達(dá)你的想法。Hi,I’m David, the editor of YOUTH. We all know the exchange students are going back to the US soon. We would like to give them some traditional Chinese things as gifts, such as Chinese paintings, silk, tea …Today I would like to collect some ideas. In your article, you should:216。 remend two traditional Chinese things216。 show your reasons why you remend themLooking forward to hearing from you.David注意事項(xiàng)：1. 對(duì)所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2. 要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫、符合情境；3. 詞數(shù)在90個(gè)左右，感謝信的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4. 文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Dear Sir/Madam, I am glad to share my opinion with ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,I am glad to share my opinion with you. I would like to remend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintings have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the US. Foreign friends can learn more about Chinese art from them. The second gift I want to remend is silk scarves. Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and fortable. Why not buy them some silk scarves? I believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us.【解析】【詳解】本文主要是向別人分享想法，推薦禮物。第一句話(huà)點(diǎn)題，隨后引出文章的兩個(gè)主題，一 remend two traditional Chinese things。例如：I would like to remend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintings have a long history. 以及The second gift I want to remend is silk show your reasons why you remend them。理由一：because Chinese paintings have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the US. 理由二：Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us總結(jié)全篇。文章干凈利落，層次分明。9．書(shū)面表達(dá)A small thing提示：請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給題目“A small thing”寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，記敘一件你經(jīng)歷過(guò)的小事。要求：，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，卷面整潔，詞數(shù)100左右；2. 文中不得使用你的真實(shí)姓名，校名，否則以零分計(jì)。 【答案】A small thingIt was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a bike. I was so happy at first. However, I fell down on the ground. I cried loudly and wanted to gives up. My father smiled and said we should be a person who never give up. He encouraged me to stand up and continue. After one hour, I could ride the bike without the help of my father. This is one small thing that I will never forget. It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up. 【解析】【詳解】本文要記述自己經(jīng)歷過(guò)的一件小事, 在時(shí)態(tài)上用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。本篇文章,首先開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題,指出事情發(fā)生的時(shí)間及所經(jīng)歷的事件。It was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a ，詞語(yǔ)at first，However,…. After one hour,的使用使整篇文章渾然一體。最后一段是從這件小事中得出的感悟，It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up. 對(duì)這件小事進(jìn)行了總結(jié)，更使文章在思想上得到了升華。文章時(shí)態(tài)使用正確，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，事件本身思路清晰，是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章?！军c(diǎn)睛】認(rèn)真審題，看清題目要求，在描述事件時(shí)，要注意清晰表達(dá)事情發(fā)生的開(kāi)端，內(nèi)容及結(jié)尾。必要時(shí)要適當(dāng)使用連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢，文章最后注意對(duì)整個(gè)故事進(jìn)行總結(jié)，最好能夠從故事中得出自己的感悟，在敘述故事的同時(shí)使文章具有思想性。寫(xiě)完文章后注意檢查有誤單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，語(yǔ)法使用錯(cuò)誤，字?jǐn)?shù)是否達(dá)到要求。