【正文】 運(yùn)用所給或所學(xué)的詞語，盡量運(yùn)用熟悉的句型。（3）列好提綱和要點(diǎn)，及需要的重要短語或句型。（3）切忌堆砌詞語，句子，注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢，連貫。注意表達(dá)的順序。 （4）注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號等的正確運(yùn)用。 （5）注意檢查：單詞拼寫，語法，動詞時(shí)態(tài)，語序，主謂一致等。15．（北京中考模擬）假如你是李華，即將結(jié)束在美國的交換學(xué)習(xí)，回國前你想給住家媽媽Sarah寫封感謝信，告訴她你什么時(shí)候回國，為什么感謝她，以及你的感受。提示詞語： help, care, municate, drive to hospital, own family提示要點(diǎn)：When are you going to leave?Why do you want to say ‘thank you’ to her?How do you feel?Dear Sarah,I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. Thanks again for taking care of me so well.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sarah,I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. I am going to leave the US next Tuesday morning. I really want to say thanks to you because of your help and care during my stay here. I will never forget you offered to help when I had difficulty in municating with others in English, and I will never forget you drove me to the hospital in the late night when I didn’t feel well. Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.”Thanks again for taking care of me so well.【解析】此文為提綱式作文，文章屬于感謝信。文章可分為三段，第一段表明寫信的目的；第二段分析感謝的具體原因；第三段寫出你在住家媽媽Sarah家里的感受。文章用第一人稱來寫，時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般過去時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。亮點(diǎn)分析：表示感激的句型：I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. Thanks again for taking care of me so well.[高分句型一]I will never forget you offered to help when I had difficulty in municating with others in English. 我永遠(yuǎn)不會忘記，當(dāng)我用英語和別人交流困難時(shí)，你主動提出幫助我。句子中有when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句。[高分句型二]Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.” 住在您們家里就像住在我自己的家里一樣，這讓我想起了一句話：“天下之大, 家最美好?！?其中which reminds me of the saying是由which引導(dǎo)的定語從句。16．（河北中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你叫李華,你的筆友Peter 想了解你日常生活中的榜樣? 請你以“A Role Model in My Daily Life”為主題,根據(jù)下列提示給他寫一封郵件?提示:1. Who is your role model in your daily life?2. Why do you consider him/ her as your role model?3. How do you feel to have him/ her as your role model?注意:1. 短文必須包括所有提示內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名,校名和地名。3. 詞數(shù):80個(gè)左右?（開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）To: PeterFrom: Li Hua Subject: A Role Model in My Daily LifeHi! Peter,How is it going? You’re asking my role model in my daily life. Well, Anything new at your school? Yours,Li Hua 【答案】How is it going ? You’re asking my role model in my daily life. Well, my role model in my daily life is my teacher, Mr. Green. He is very friendly to us and he has a good sense of humor. He is patient with all the students in class and tries to make his class interesting. We never feel bored. He teaches us how to think by ourselves and helps us solve the problems at school. He is like a father to us. Mr. Green sets a good example for me in my life. He is such a great teacher and I’m proud of being his student. I hope to be a teacher like him when I grow up. Anything new at your school? Yours,Li Hua【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，以“A Role Model in My Daily Life”為主題,給我的筆友Peter 寫信，介紹我日常生活中的榜樣。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：He is……，He teaches us how to……，Mr. Green sets a good example for……，I hope to be……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我日常生活中的榜樣是格林先生，接下來介紹為什么格林先生是我的榜樣，最后我希望長大后像他一樣。此處be friendly to, be patient with, try to do sth, teach sb sth, help sb do sth, be like, set a good example for sb, hope to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。17．（山東中考模擬）書面表達(dá)?，F(xiàn)在各行各業(yè)都在為建設(shè)美麗中國，實(shí)現(xiàn)中國夢而奮斗．請根據(jù)下列圖示，談?wù)勔韵聨追N職業(yè)怎樣做貢獻(xiàn)的．作為學(xué)生，你又該怎么辦？要求：短文需包含提示要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；語句通順，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，書寫規(guī)范；詞數(shù)：80詞左右．短文開頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream． 【答案】Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream．In the fields，a large number of farmers work hard every day to improve our living levels．In order to produce enough vegetables and fruit，they are busy growing plants．Meanwhile，in hospitals，doctors and nurses always try their best to save patients day and night．Besides，they also take good care of the old．（醫(yī)生）In our daily life，we can see many policemen in the streets on duty to protect people．（警察）As for scientists，they concentrate more on scientific studies to invent something useful and raise our living standards．（科學(xué)家）As students，what should we do to build our country？I think we should study hard to get rich knowledge so as to make contributions to our country?！窘馕觥窟@是一篇給材料作文，介紹為建設(shè)美麗中國，實(shí)現(xiàn)中國夢，農(nóng)民，醫(yī)生，警察和科學(xué)家怎樣做貢獻(xiàn)的。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Now all the Chinese people are……，they are busy……，we can see……，I think……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了為了實(shí)現(xiàn)中國夢，中國人正在努力做貢獻(xiàn)，接下來介紹農(nóng)民、醫(yī)生、警察和科學(xué)家如何做貢獻(xiàn)的，最后表示我們作為學(xué)生應(yīng)該